>>2 Thanks for the feedback! I don't know what keigo is, but I can just look that up. Yes, I am trying to do that, but you're right, I only have one mention of each. I know that a renga should have two people writing it, but this has to be a piece written by only me (I also wondered about it when he asked me to write a renga) so I'm kind of stuck. You're right in saying I should get peer reviews.Again, thank you!