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Let us write a story together (17)

1 Name: Icefire : 2015-09-18 08:48 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

Here's how this works. I shall start us on a first sentence. Add as much as you like write what you want BUT! it has to go with the last sentence so the story moves correctly.

Starting:

The morning is dim lit. I yawn feeling the warmth of the suns rays on my face.

-A

2 Name: Sapphira : 2015-09-18 09:35 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

I pet my cat who is still fast asleep. I get up and get ready to take a shower.

3 Name: Icefire : 2015-09-18 09:47 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

Given this time I decide to get the essentials of what I need for the shower. Towel, Washcloth, Clothes for later.

4 Name: jill : 2015-09-18 17:44 ID:ZQDYJLeU [Del]

What I really don't understand is why people keep making similar threads about stories? If you really want to play, just comment the other threads don't make your own thread.

I went inside the shower, slip on the random soap on the floor, hit my head very hard, and died. The end.

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6 Name: Just had to xD : 2015-09-19 00:01 ID:bpPAzDJJ [Del]

*point of view changes*

I go to the funeral of someone who died carelessly today. The person's name was Jill. I didn't feel any emotion, neither sympathy nor sadness for they died stupidly.

>>4 just let it be. It's different from the other ones because it is intended to make sense :)

7 Name: jill : 2015-09-21 03:59 ID:ZQDYJLeU [Del]

You just had to put my name.

As I stare at the coffin, with all my emotions intact, I wondered if she was able to live her life. Will I die stupidly like her? Or will I be generic from all populations most cause of death: traffic accident. I prefer the latter but that would be a shame if I'm the cause of deaths. Ohh well.. let just go with the flow but suicide is sounding good to me. I can pick what time, date, weather, and location, that I'm going to die. Unlike Jill who died on the bathroom, just because she slipped on a random soap on the floor.

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9 Name: Icefire : 2015-09-21 06:44 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

I still have to wonder how the hell she actually just fell down like that... It must have been painful dying like that. Man, i feel bad now. As I talk to myself, Mrs. Louise, Jill's mom walks over tears rolling down her cheeks. "Hello Anna." She says to me stifling a sob. My eyes soften, "Hey Mrs. Louise, how are you.." I ask giving her a hug. Bittersweet but kind all the same...

10 Name: Singollo : 2015-09-21 18:18 ID:tayqktcE [Del]

I give my condolences to Mrs. Louise and fake and expression of sorrow, although I feel nothing for the departed douche, and as she goes on to greet new arrivals to the funeral, I turn back to the coffin, only to find myself in a cold shock, my gaze locked with that of Jill herself, standing right next to her corpse in an ethereal form, looking at me with an almost emotionless face, with only a slight pinch of curiosity.

11 Name: Icefire : 2015-09-22 06:42 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

My eyes curiously scan this ethereal Jill. I walk up to the form, staring intently at it. 'what the hell?' I think to myself.

12 Name: S : 2015-09-22 08:54 ID:lI0ec+6f [Del]

I'm digging inside myself, going deeper and deeper, hoping to find the slightes feeling of sorrow, despair, sadness, or even an emotion whatsoever. But nothing lays there, it's a desserted area when once there were cherry blossoms, trees and life...yes there was a time when I felt alive, and full of feelings. But it was all ruined, shttered on that particular day which shall never escape my mind...

13 Name: Icefire : 2015-09-23 06:36 ID:eo/01udJ [Del]

That day was the day before Jill died... I feel my heart drop to my stomach as the ghost of jill points to a man in the crouding of family that shouldn't be here. He isn't even a part of the family! Who is he...

14 Name: gin : 2015-09-23 06:52 ID:lzRfhHD/ [Del]

That Guy je the one who killed Jill. So I tought, but when I asked jer that she just turn to the other side and started walking. Few Minutes later the same man droped on his knes and started Screaming from pain. That moment I realized that Jill was a grim reaper. In my grad I only heard my voice asking myself why, why did she showed me this, what the Hell she wants with me, why am I here right now...

15 Name: Hinata : 2015-09-23 15:25 ID:lJ8AgOb5 [Del]

I think a lot about why I am here, why I am trapped in this particular moment. But then I bring myself to realise that I am human and this is my set course. I cannot escape the fate that the world has set for me, I cannot escape from the haunting memories of Jill's death, the inescapable fear when I realised she was an ethereal being. I can only begin to imagine what she was thinking, what she was feeling when she decided to decided to deceive me. But, where do I go from here?...

16 Name: jill : 2015-09-23 15:38 ID:ZQDYJLeU [Del]

"I never deceived anyone. I just showed you that,that guy is dying, you should freaking called 911. But you just froze when you see that and let him die. You thought I was a grim reaper but I wasn't. I tried telling you but you couldn't hear me. You can see me but couldn't hear me. I was devestated. So I decided to haunt till you die in your peaceful life, and tell you afterwards when your the same as me. Maybe I should try sign language, maybe you'll understand me."

17 Name: Tree !p4.oUl2qF2 : 2015-09-24 08:48 ID:iloO6eb8 [Del]

"Anyway's you just let Icefire die because of your stupidity. How do you say 911 in sign language though? By the way, you're a psychic now since you can see dead people breh."

I began to rethink again about why i am here...