I had a lot to drink tonight.
They say that when in a state of altered consciousness you become more aware of your inner self, at the cost of external awareness of course. That's why booze is sometimes used in some ritual rites and some passage to manhood. They tend to call it Spirits, however. I must've fallen asleep during a documentary again, useless information I will soon forget the upcoming morning. Although that would be a nice excuse to give my peers, "I'm on a quest to find myself!" and not because I'm a sad sack of shit.

I wonder then, what Spirit have come over me? A Demon or perhaps a sadistic Angel? A sadistic Angel will have to save me sooner or later right? I mean, due to obligations of course. "Suffer first, Heaven later," is probably how Religious kukoos summarize life on Earth. What about the sinners then? "Suffer first, Eternal suffering later." Oh boy, I cannot wait.
Eternal damnation save me!
I know...I'm on my own aren't I?

that's actually quite a good start
but you have some commas in the wrong places (i assume you'll edit that later though)
anyway, yeah, that seems like a good narrative hook
also, what's this about??

Not bad, makes me want to keep reading.

>>2 thanks! Haha, commas are my worst enemies...
I don't know what its about honestly. I just felt creative one day and just strung some words up.
I actually tried to write something inspirational, but it ended kind of depressing... Guess that says something about me x_x
I don't plan to continue this or anything, i was just curious what people think of it.