1 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-13 10:29 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Hey guys. Wrote another thing. I'd like you guys to check out how it is so far. Murder/mystery. Serial killer makes Object D'Art out of humans. I have other witnesses, plagiarism will not be accepted. Other writers here who want to post some works in-the-works can post here too, if they wish. Thanks for reading.
Link: http://1drv.ms/1ftHvYU
2 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-19 10:40 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Updating and progressing now.
3 Name: AkiraYuu : 2014-03-19 23:09 ID:tkcj1uHK [Del]
Interesting.
4 Name: GirlontheMirror : 2014-03-20 13:44 ID:cMqaCPRV [Del]
I found some typos, not they're much of an importance. You can worry them when you finish the story itself.
And just a question since there aren't much authors who does this but, why didn't you think that you introduced Henry a but too early? Well just asking, it's a nice story though, I'm looking forward for your new updates..
5 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-21 18:10 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
>>4 I am still inexperienced compared to most authors (I only have a single novella under my wings) so the early introduction of Henry was fairly unplanned, and I will probably wind up scooting that section back some.
Thanks for reading guys, this piece is something I'm writing to help me get out of an emotional funk.
6 Name: alikiki : 2014-03-24 09:10 ID:ktYfBTlG [Del]
read two first pages and already like it. Kinda reminds of psycho-pass, which makes me like it even more!!
7 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-25 07:46 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Updating and progressing
By the way, guys, NONE of this planned at all. I don't have an outline or character list or backgrounds or anything like that. This is just writing from an idea that's sitting in the back of my head, so I may change a few things here and there along the way.
8 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-25 11:59 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Stiiiiill updating.
So, what do you guys think so far? I'm accepting of negative criticism too, just please try and make it all constructive in some way xD I know I have a lot of trouble with dialogue and slang, and having little to no social life isn't helping that very much.
9 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-26 07:14 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Big update and progressing again. Took out the Henry section.
10 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-27 07:26 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Well, just to keep everybody from jumping on my case about bumping this thread almost daily, I'll just reply to this thread when I don't update. That'd be many less than otherwise.
11 Name: Neko-tama : 2014-03-27 19:04 ID:xR0UUFqP [Del]
Well I've just caught up... Wow, you really have a talent for writing horror, especially in first person which is tough to do so kudos :3
I love sections with the killer, they're enough to make even me cringe. My only advice/critique is to make those sections even more descriptive. I really want inside the head of this killer~
Keep at it! ^^
12 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-28 09:46 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
>>11 thanks. Most of this comes from dreams, which is why I am unable to sleep well... and also why writing gruesome homocides in first person comes easily to me.
13 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-30 12:57 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
Updating and progressing
14 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-03-31 10:59 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Should I continue this? Or should I not?
15 Name: Neko-tama : 2014-03-31 21:02 ID:xR0UUFqP [Del]
>>14 continue it, you've got a plot going, keep devolving it and it'll turn out great ^^ if you don't feel good about a certain part you can always change it later.
16 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-04-01 22:03 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
>>15 true enough. Will do.
Thank you for everything. It means a lot to me.
17 Name: Neko-tama : 2014-04-02 08:41 ID:xR0UUFqP [Del]
>>16 no problem, I'm happy to help :3
18 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-04-04 07:30 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Don't think I'll be continuing this any time within the next few days.
This has me feeling pretty low for the time being.
19 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-04-10 07:54 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
To those expecting updates, sorry I haven't been on it recently. My book drops in a week or two and the second half of the semester started this week and I'm trying to keep my grades up. It's nearly Thursday and I still haven't gotten report cards. I can't seem to post on the RTT anymore, dunno why.
20 Name: Ao!I94GMMnlgM : 2014-04-25 11:37 ID:zXeeJmBo [Del]
Sorry for expectant readers (if any) awaiting updates, my first book drops in a few days, and considering it's the first of a series, I've been trying to work on the second book instead of this project. I'll give you guys a heads-up when I get back on this work, okay? I apologize again, and hope you have a good day!
21 Name: Ao!OwbmWIWTOw : 2014-04-30 05:32 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
Book one has been released~! Now I'm gonna do book two.
It launched last night and it didn't even finish coming out of my mouth before she already bought it xD my notifications on FB have more than tripled in a single night, aaand there's probably gonna be a stampede of people when I get to school.
95% of what's happening already is totally unplanned and I'm judt trying to stay afloat, kinda hard to hide that your cool has already been lost. Thanks and sorry guys :D
22 Name: Ao!OwbmWIWTOw : 2014-05-15 21:57 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]
I really do wanna get back on this project soon. For those who care to read, can you bump this please, so I can see how many of you want me to continue?
I-if that's okay, I mean...
23 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-05-16 21:40 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]
24 Name: *koda* : 2014-05-29 08:53 ID:FOcr3sVj [Del]
read the lot of what you have so far and I would totally keep reading if you decided to keep doing this. ^^
