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Haiku Chain! (1337)

1 Name: Butts :D : 2013-06-26 23:08 ID:sLbNvEb0 [Del]

So, if you don't know what a haiku chain is, basically it's a series of linked haiku. The last line of the first poem, becomes the first line of the next poem.

Example:

Poem 1:

My dog died one day,
Now my turtle is dying,
No more pets for me.

Poem 2:

No more pets for me,
I prefer my computer,
But pets are still cute.

~

Understand? It's simple 5-7-5 haiku chain! Ready? Go!

I'll start!

I lost my pet rock,
Have you seen it anywhere, sir?
I think I might cry...

2 Name: Myla : 2013-06-29 01:46 ID:2KImkhp8 [Del]

I think I might cry
no one understands why
It's so dear to me
And yet,
No one cares for my needs

3 Name: Jynxed : 2013-06-29 03:23 ID:74ADl4im [Del]

>>2
none care for my needs
post 2 was not a haiku,
but I'm working it.

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5 Name: shalan : 2013-06-29 03:26 ID:Uj30boOl [Del]

but I'm working it
or maybe overacting shit?
let's have fun with haiku

6 Name: Anonymous : 2013-06-29 20:19 ID:9af3REcj [Del]

Let's have fun with haiku
Or maybe write more stories
Just be creative

7 Name: Hatash!HATStoI1IE : 2013-06-29 21:33 ID:paPd1OGR [Del]

What the fuck did you..
I don't even want to know...
Also, this worked, wow.

(>>6 Your 1st part is 6, not 5.)

8 Name: Fini* !v2NoZwIDe2 : 2013-07-05 23:25 ID:Eoa0duRy [Del]

Also, this worked, wow.
My little bro is trying
To slap my poor nose.

9 Name: Sixclaw Sixto !4CNblaw9mI!!XI8GEi6V : 2013-07-06 02:34 ID:l3P3feMZ [Del]

To slap my poor nose
Or to not slap my poor nose?
That is the question.

10 Name: Wojnar : 2013-07-06 06:19 ID:PGoLjvxT [Del]

That is the question.
What am I doing today?
Pointless things I guess.

11 Name: 2EA : 2013-07-06 13:21 ID:1kU5nieZ [Del]

Pointless thing I guess,
like typing, watching and being dumb.
For I am a DODO X)

12 Name: Naoto Stone : 2013-07-07 12:37 ID:kT9fUU38 [Del]

For I am a DoDo
I can never fly again
But at least I smart!

>>11 Thanks for messing up the last line so my first line is wrong!

13 Name: AmaYuki !3CE8.3zbc2 : 2013-07-08 08:54 ID:GOXXkVxP [Del]

But at least I smart!
Since this is just a short part,
let me shoot you with a dart.

14 Name: Yadira : 2013-07-08 19:58 ID:8mYaaSIZ [Del]

Let me shoot a dart,
At the demons of Hades,
So they will now die.

15 Name: Berlioz : 2013-07-09 08:11 ID:sh8oOn4s [Del]

While he dies I eat numerous slices of pies. While he gets some chives and onions on his toast.

16 Name: SADenough : 2013-07-12 16:02 ID:zvcVmSmi [Del]

onions on his toast
please write correct syllables
not just random shit

17 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2013-07-16 07:27 ID:4pjNhpck [Del]

>>15 Doing it wrong.
>>16 Responding to someone who did it wrong.

>>14
So they will now die,
In a huge field of orange rinds,
Tasting like a pie.

18 Name: dillon : 2013-07-16 19:34 ID:x5RU+8t+ [Del]

tasting like a pie
as it fell from the blue sky
time to say good bye

19 Name: Hatash!HATStoI1IE : 2013-07-16 20:44 ID:kkGDbLjO [Del]

Time to say good bye
Praying the goddess of wine
It's getting drunk time

20 Name: DownbeatYeti !fF9EAwSeeA : 2013-07-16 23:24 ID:C3Z9h0Ap [Del]

It's getting drunk time
Release these limits of mine
Drain and fog my mind

21 Name: CeltysCat : 2013-07-19 13:18 ID:h/OfBDN4 [Del]

Drain and fog my mind
get rid of all the bad things
and just let me be

22 Name: Dragon : 2013-07-19 22:56 ID:srA7yq6P [Del]

And just let me be
To dance the black night away
Killing ho-hum life.

23 Name: Anonymous : 2013-07-20 23:17 ID:TwYAPp1s [Del]

Killing ho-hum life
Wandering round like the wind
A slow traveler

24 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-07-21 02:14 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

A slow traveler
Blessed with the gift of travel
Can truly see Earth

25 Name: Steve : 2013-07-21 08:22 ID:ORctPe8M [Del]

Can truly see earth
For what its worth
A land of Birth

26 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-07-21 23:22 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

>>25 Sorry to point this out, but this doesn't follow the 5-7-5 rule. The second and third lines have only four syllables. The second line needs three more syllables and the third one needs one more syllable. Please keep this in mind next time.

27 Name: Steve : 2013-07-21 23:46 ID:ORctPe8M [Del]

>>26 Sorry, never did a haiku before.

28 Name: Butts :D : 2013-07-22 17:12 ID:1lDtfSDY [Del]

Just a little OP note, if a post is not a haiku or is done wrong, ignore and continue off the one before! :D

Also,

Can truly see Earth,
Now with these cool new glasses,
Oh, look. Animals!

29 Name: Lawli : 2013-07-23 10:50 ID:Francuqb [Del]

Oh, look. Animals!
As far as the eye can see.
I am at the zoo.

30 Name: Shinyarrara : 2013-07-23 19:37 ID:geKoMSXI [Del]

im at the zoo
getting raped by a fat pig
oh my god help me

31 Name: Shinyarrara : 2013-07-23 19:37 ID:geKoMSXI [Del]

*i am

32 Name: Noelle : 2013-07-24 08:05 ID:1cfnWhPf [Del]

oh my god help me
I am trapped in a small room
with a lion too.

33 Name: Lawli : 2013-07-24 08:35 ID:Francuqb [Del]

With a lion too.
In a very big tutu.
I suck at haiku.

34 Name: gameDRIVE : 2013-07-24 11:11 ID:Jp13HXXS [Del]

I suck at haiku
At least I have anime
I am so lonely

35 Name: Steve : 2013-07-24 16:38 ID:ORctPe8M [Del]

>>34 I life in a haiku (how sad XD)

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38 Name: Karisawa : 2013-07-25 01:06 ID:DWUCZaA6 [Del]

I am so lonely
Trying to type a haiku
I want happiness

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40 Name: CoffeeCream : 2013-07-25 13:44 ID:9aR4X9pj [Del]

I want happiness
But I am pretending much
Do i deserve it?

(first time trying haiku. How I'm going?)

41 Name: Nisemono-524 : 2013-07-25 15:40 ID:AL3DCips [Del]

Do I deserve it?
It is true that we all do.
We must find it though.

((Quite well ^^))

42 Name: Lawli : 2013-07-26 08:53 ID:VUsFypq0 [Del]

We must find it though.
And before it is too late.
That necklace of pearls.

43 Name: Miki~ : 2013-07-26 10:39 ID:Y/lE3ly5 [Del]

That necklace of pearls
Forever, I will treasure
Always with your love

(>DD)

44 Name: WHITE : 2013-07-28 09:04 ID:/vRjENvm [Del]

The sun blazing hot
a cicada buzzing by
dripping beads of sweat.

(summer)

45 Name: Doug !WAdchFoEJk!!XI8GEi6V : 2013-07-29 22:08 ID:1ggLEeQr [Del]

>>43 Always with your love
I journey through life.
. Your love is a tabernacle.

46 Name: CoffeeCream : 2013-08-09 05:08 ID:1JEzb5ow [Del]

Your love is a tabernacle
Your body a cage
Your soul my unique freedom

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48 Name: Butts :D : 2013-08-09 15:33 ID:iHhHhgph [Del]

>>44 Wrong, had to continue from the one above yours

>>45 Wrong. 5-7-5, not 5-5-7. Learn to write a haiku.

>>46 ... Wrong. You continue something which was not a haiku, and you also didn't follow the 5-7-5 rule I stated.

49 Name: Blinking!!XI8GEi6V : 2013-08-11 10:28 ID:FRuycycP [Del]

Bump.
Also, yes, >>48 is correct, it's 5-7-5.

50 Name: Wojnar : 2013-08-13 20:01 ID:PGoLjvxT [Del]

If its alright I'll just go from the last real haiku.

Dripping beads of sweat
I stand with unshaken resolve
I refuse to quit.

51 Name: Dragon : 2013-08-14 21:59 ID:DMS2tVl4 [Del]

>>50 Eight syllables on second line. Not haiku.

52 Name: Miss Erah Mar : 2013-08-15 00:52 ID:+0NjhzFW [Del]

(All I need is the last line, so I don't care.)

I refuse to quit
It has taken all of me
I now stand here cleansed.

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55 Name: Sama Kami !PL42dvhmcA : 2013-08-15 23:10 ID:RZ7GURqv [Del]

I now stand here cleansed
For the hate of god has left
I am born Anew

56 Name: Omnia Ravus!hSmVND53jI : 2013-08-17 02:45 ID:sxwbaI50 [Del]

Bump. To tired to write one sorry.

57 Name: Butts :D : 2013-08-19 12:01 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

I am born anew,
Remade into something more,
Than what I was once

58 Name: Masterruffy : 2013-08-19 16:18 ID:ub7f2Dtw [Del]

Than what I was once
I can not believe myself
I think i am gay

59 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-08-20 08:04 ID:YHtJ3cRB [Del]

I think I am gay
Yes, gay for golden gay-time
That ice-cream is great

60 Name: xbunnyx : 2013-08-22 09:17 ID:uTAZOXho [Del]

That ice-cream is great
Especially the chocolate mint flavor
How I wish I could eat another

61 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-08-29 17:32 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

(I hope it's alright to start with only the first five words in the one before me since it has 4 syllables more than it should)
How I wish I could
Fly into the Heavens Skies
For I am stuck here

62 Name: Marmeladov : 2013-08-29 19:57 ID:Hd7zRmGG [Del]

For I am stuck here
But I will not shed a tear
Happy times are near

63 Name: Itari : 2013-08-29 22:08 ID:NRfzW1zm [Del]

Happy times are near
Rain falls dancing back and forth
So I sigh with ease

64 Name: Calico : 2013-08-31 21:33 ID:/sThdD7n [Del]

So I sigh with ease
As I lay on my sofa
Whistling a tune

65 Name: Tyk1337 : 2013-09-02 15:06 ID:/sYAUF7J [Del]

Whistling a tune
As all the chances soar by
Have fun and catch one

66 Name: BETORGIA : 2013-09-02 21:32 ID:VmdLJROM [Del]

Have fun and catch one
Where are we going with this
accounting is lame

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69 Name: BEORGAL : 2013-09-02 21:37 ID:Gc37E4JX [Del]

Accounting is lame
My keyboard is tracked dumbass
Boys are so silly

70 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-03 02:59 ID:OtoyXBKQ [Del]

Boys are so silly
Girls are ridiculous
Gender matters not

71 Name: astin : 2013-09-03 19:45 ID:PM8OcPAp [Del]

gender matters not
'til you attempt to go pee
then it's important

72 Name: C : 2013-09-04 04:11 ID:ATnQRfBo [Del]

then it's important
when you need it the most it's
never to return

73 Name: John Smith : 2013-09-04 07:12 ID:cMr3+3AM [Del]

Never to return
when it lands under the bed
where treasures are kept

74 Name: Minus !M9lieYYnPo : 2013-09-04 14:12 ID:cI+NvNl2 [Del]

where treasures are kept
lies a body
in the forest's depth

75 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-04 19:38 ID:j2gdK/ek [Del]

>>74 You stuffed up the middle line, me thinks.

In the forest's depth
You hear the killer wife
(It's Elder Scrolls lore)

76 Name: CeltysCat : 2013-09-05 14:03 ID:roEEqNia [Del]

>>75 As did you, my friend

Its Elder Scrolls lore
Dont have a clue what that is
So I'll just sit here

77 Name: Ajax : 2013-09-05 16:42 ID:9bk/GfeH [Del]

One must be careful
Playing on the Internets
Ones throat could end up slit.

(that is not a threat to anyone I wrote this for online-predator awareness, whats everyone think?)

78 Name: petrifiedrose : 2013-09-07 10:45 ID:zor6OXLV [Del]

the throat ,is slit,
i go and stitch,
make of it,
the zombies b*cth

79 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-07 11:57 ID:OtoyXBKQ [Del]

>>76 I am super retarded and counted six syllables on my hand as seven. Reasons why Solace should never take a career in maths.

Will skip >>78 because, you know. And will do >>77 even though it was also done wrongly (this thread has not been doing so well recently, it seems).

Ones throat could end up slit
If all they do is complain
Seriously, stop

80 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-09-08 17:40 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

Seriously, stop
You are making me lose me
My mind is now lost

81 Name: Yuuko Ichihara !oOs/L7gBLA : 2013-09-09 16:13 ID:V8LraWLx [Del]

Your reaper draws near
You love his skeletal weight
It draws you deeper

82 Name: Ajax. : 2013-09-09 16:54 ID:9bk/GfeH [Del]

I am confused. I thought that the way to write a haiku was 5, 7, then 5 again. Did I not follow that format?

83 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-09-09 22:48 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

It draws you deeper
Into the waters so clear
Your breathing is gone

84 Name: Aidam : 2013-09-11 14:11 ID:f45vAzbM [Del]

It draws you deeper
Bright blue sky going dark slowly
The last thing you see

85 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-11 18:24 ID:aAKJLKWG [Del]

>>82 Look at your last line, it's 6 syllables long.

The last thing you see,
As the light fades from your eyes,
The beauty of life.

86 Name: Bulma!gfkvD0.aME : 2013-09-12 13:46 ID:PbzWpkLs [Del]

The beauty of life
That BWP 12 inch
Come to me my dear

87 Name: CeltysCat : 2013-09-12 16:57 ID:axXYRMT0 [Del]

Come to me my dear
I dont want to hurt you dear
but I just have to

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89 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-09-13 16:42 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

But I just have to
I must survive this cruel game
For my sweet lover

90 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-13 21:39 ID:HHmkHG9s [Del]

For my sweet lover
Music that is not awful
I will end Hardcore

91 Name: Robo40 : 2013-09-13 23:03 ID:wlk7SBSw [Del]

I will end hardcore
Reaching for the brightest light
My destiny is calling

92 Name: Bulma!gfkvD0.aME : 2013-09-14 02:51 ID:PbzWpkLs [Del]

>>91 Last line has 7 when as far as I know its supposed to be 5. I mean, correct me if need be

Destiny calls me
Punk will rise from the ashes
You cant suppress us

93 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-09-15 12:15 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

You can't suppress us
We are destined for greatness
Our spirits will live

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95 Name: TheNoviceElectromancer : 2013-09-15 12:42 ID:/sYAUF7J [Del]

Our spirits will live
Though beginning divergent
We'll meet united

96 Name: Solace !o0GOqY0U0w : 2013-09-19 11:32 ID:GJ1U7X6s [Del]

We'll meet united,
For love of Grand Theft Auto,
Off to kill hookers!

97 Name: Murake : 2013-10-01 12:40 ID:f45vAzbM [Del]

Off to kill hookers
this thread looks like dying slow
revive is needed

98 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-10-02 00:00 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

Revive is needed
For the world will end one day
Who can ensure this?

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100 Name: Hidden !yxSN/bs2A2 : 2013-10-02 17:19 ID:RCAiiOaX [Del]

Who can ensure this?
Only the world itself is able
able to answer me

101 Name: Butts :D : 2013-10-02 19:25 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

As OP, I'm a bit sad. Does no one know to read? or count? What the hell?

>>100 Nine syllables on second line, six syllables. Able has two syllable, dammit.

Please, it is not that hard to create a haiku consisting of seventeen syllables (5-7-5). If you want to make sure, Google how many syllables a word has, geez. Re read. Also, if a haiku is incorrectly written... skip it.

>>98

What can ensure this?
This sad feeling inside me,
It is melting now.

102 Name: BlackWolf : 2013-10-06 23:58 ID:Z0ppxPxu [Del]

It is melting now
This ice cream of chocolate
I want another

103 Name: CoffeeCream : 2013-10-07 06:58 ID:vwVQp+oZ [Del]

>>101 I'm sorry to interrupt, but I think that i can answer to your question. Not everyone here has as first language English and maybe not everybody can count perfectly the numbers of syllables. You should be grateful that people enjoys to try, at least. ^^
Sorry for the interruption.

104 Name: Raccoon !LrJOf6u2Gk : 2013-10-07 10:40 ID:m8zbyt3Z [Del]

I want another
Something that will last longer
But please, don't bother

105 Name: Wolfy : 2013-10-07 18:10 ID:/MWuW4NF [Del]

But please, don't bother
I can work fine on my own
I don't need your help

106 Name: Hopeless : 2013-10-07 18:45 ID:GL4MYNoX [Del]

I don't need your help
I already lost myself
and I can't go back

107 Name: Wojnar : 2013-10-07 20:31 ID:PGoLjvxT [Del]

And I cant go back
The road is cold and lonely
Walk with me for peace.

108 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-10-08 00:37 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

Walk with me for peace
It is our own common ground
Worry no longer

109 Name: Raccoon !LrJOf6u2Gk : 2013-10-08 12:18 ID:m8zbyt3Z [Del]

Worry no longer
For worrying's a bother
Just like my mother

110 Name: Wojnar : 2013-10-08 20:58 ID:PGoLjvxT [Del]

Just like my mother
I wish to live in greatness
I can still change now.

111 Name: Ao!xbaEGjJEyU : 2013-10-09 14:55 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]

I can still change now,
the sunlight on my shoulders,
reflects persona.

112 Name: QueenSomething : 2013-10-09 16:36 ID:vuesZJ4h [Del]

the sunlight on my shoulders,
gives me the warmth of a blanket,
it was a comforting nirvana

113 Name: Wojnar : 2013-10-10 20:25 ID:PGoLjvxT [Del]

reflects persona
The death of innocent days
the end is now here

114 Name: Loliprincess : 2013-10-10 23:52 ID:hRkHjE3Y [Del]

The end is now here
It was fun while it lasted
Let us meet again

115 Name: Ao!xbaEGjJEyU : 2013-10-11 14:33 ID:Z23HmC7u [Del]

Let us meet again
Sooner than later now, yes?
Perhaps tomorrow?

116 Name: Yatahaze !E/8OvwUzpY : 2014-06-05 13:32 ID:n+P4b/vS [Del]

Perhaps tomorrow?
But no, the thread is dead, see?
Guess I must bump it.

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118 Name: Larman-Krogeus : 2014-06-05 13:48 ID:N5FxDA3v [Del]

Guess I must bump it.
Bump boo bop ski-diddly dee,
I can haiku too.

119 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-06-05 14:15 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

I can haiku too,
Look at me, now look at you,
Let's see how you'll do.

120 Name: eureka : 2014-06-05 16:15 ID:AT18c5CO [Del]

let's see how you'll do
can you beat my great haiku
your turn now johnny

121 Name: Karsi !j2Z1HgFh/6 : 2014-06-06 05:01 ID:YyajLARv [Del]

Your turn now Johnny,
I don't think you are better.
You are bad at it.

122 Name: M.whatsupdoc : 2014-06-06 07:08 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

You are bad at it,
Can't you count the syllables?
No, it seems you count.

123 Name: Larman-Krogeus : 2014-06-06 14:59 ID:N5FxDA3v [Del]

No, it seems you count.
Wait, what does that even mean?
like, Count Chocula?

124 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-06-06 16:58 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

(>>122 >>123 can't* I probably shouldn't be posting early in the morning when I'm brain dead.)

125 Name: Hisui : 2014-06-16 12:58 ID:5L3uSd/m [Del]

Like, Count Chocola?
or was it "it seems you can't"?
what a dilemma

126 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-06-17 00:21 ID:Amzbx8Y1 [Del]

What a dilemma.
Count Chocula in this thread?
What has this come to?

127 Name: TokumeiNeko !RHpu6etjNI : 2014-06-18 01:57 ID:bI9HOVxS [Del]

What has this come to?
Such strange subjects,
We need something new

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129 Name: 悪くない : 2014-06-18 14:16 ID:u4ctb7+l [Del]

We need something new fast
Our hearts are burning with our souls
Haikus that no one knows

130 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-06-18 17:36 ID:lPnHbJtU [Del]

>>129 That's too many syllables for each line. It's a 5-7-5 syllable pattern, not 6-8-6.

131 Name: Doralice !86m18JgCrY : 2014-06-19 12:17 ID:UH/2AVD4 [Del]

I'll start from >>127

We need something new
But I'm not so creative
Someone else can try

132 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-06-19 19:25 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

Someone else can try,
No one seems creative though,
Someone, take the torch.

133 Name: alice : 2014-06-21 08:57 ID:KYoEcEzW [Del]

Someone, take the torch,
Brighten up the day so sure,
Loneliness should fade.

134 Name: Kuhaku : 2014-06-21 19:36 ID:tjwbI6g7 [Del]

Loneliness should fade,
And many friends i'll make
For one can never be alone.

135 Name: MaskSalesman : 2014-06-25 16:55 ID:kecS3APa [Del]

...fixing this...

Loneliness should fade,
And many friends I'll have made,
by this day, to come.

136 Name: Stray Sheep : 2014-06-26 17:28 ID:EOq/2uzH [Del]

Though we will part ways,
the memories we have made
will always be here.

137 Name: bleu : 2014-06-29 21:00 ID:0XNHmeoj [Del]


will always be here
hate this world we stand on
it is a mistake

138 Name: astin : 2014-06-30 01:36 ID:9DL/rdZj [Del]

it is a mistake
why did i bubble that in?
standardized testing

139 Name: ToasTee : 2014-06-30 06:52 ID:CHTuSU+E [Del]

Standardized testing
I don't want to think of school
Stop or I'll find you

140 Name: Midori : 2014-07-05 16:53 ID:L2adbY2q [Del]

Stop or I'll find you
Being annoying is rude
Find yourself a cat

141 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-07-05 18:52 ID:qw4qXMEI [Del]

Find yourself a cat
But I'm more of a dog girl
What shall I do now?

142 Name: Kaoru : 2014-07-05 20:27 ID:ZqeI9unn [Del]

What shall I do now?
There is no place to run to
Life is so boring

143 Name: Doralice !86m18JgCrY : 2014-07-06 00:12 ID:UH/2AVD4 [Del]

Life is so boring
So I waste time daydreaming
in a more fun world

144 Name: Sayomi : 2014-07-06 06:27 ID:M+y4Q5aD [Del]

In a more fun world
People will smile more
We will be happy

145 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-07-06 17:21 ID:SvWqTgpU [Del]

We will be happy
But real life is not so fair
If only it were

146 Name: Butts :D : 2014-07-06 17:54 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

If only it were
A boy instead of a girl
Then I would not fret.

147 Name: Death : 2014-07-07 03:32 ID:+cWF4Stv [Del]

Then I would not fret
As there would be more sadness
And more joy for me

148 Name: Rin-san : 2014-07-08 11:54 ID:RXUAx8K7 [Del]

And more joy for me
Being a couch potato
reading fanfiction

149 Name: Beth : 2014-07-09 11:13 ID:mWvLS42k [Del]

Reading fanfiction
I should go hang out with friends
But I'm too lazy

150 Name: vontar !c6.PJFVzw. : 2014-07-09 14:43 ID:KoDkdzMY [Del]

But I'm too lazy
so I sit home by myself
forever alone

151 Name: Inuhakka !u4InuhakKA : 2014-07-09 15:40 ID:B0A17cP3 [Del]

forever alone
almost always in season
save every season

152 Name: Me : 2014-07-09 16:55 ID:R2yiPnE7 [Del]

Save every season
My favorite being spring
Cause the falling rain

(the middle may have 6 I'm bad at this)

153 Name: Beth : 2014-07-09 18:24 ID:ET5EdY5h [Del]

'Cause the falling rain
Waters the budding flowers
And paints a rainbow

>>152 The middle line is fine (^u^)

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155 Name: Kurono : 2014-07-09 21:51 ID:rLmsNihL [Del]

Falling rain keeps me
In check when I feel alone
It helps me escape

156 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-07-10 04:10 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

It helps me escape,
The ego's a fragile thing,
I wish it would fade.

157 Name: poet : 2014-07-10 17:36 ID:R2yiPnE7 [Del]

I wish it would fade
from all that has existed
and all eyes that see

158 Name: Haruka : 2014-07-11 16:11 ID:FiCPnV83 [Del]

And all eyes that see
Are looking for excitement
I hope I find it

159 Name: ToasTee : 2014-07-13 15:23 ID:vAXcGONy [Del]

I hope I find it
The story of a lifetime
Need entertainment

160 Name: Kurooooo !zcCpnseF8w : 2014-07-13 21:06 ID:0SEF6L/l [Del]

Need entertainment
Go explore the world of art
It shines everywhere

161 Name: Doralice !86m18JgCrY : 2014-07-14 22:30 ID:UH/2AVD4 [Del]

It shines everywhere
But only some can see it
Just open your mind

162 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-07-16 17:32 ID:SQKcQ2dZ [Del]

Just open your mind
Oh, you doubtful idiots
Cannot see a thing

163 Name: NS : 2014-07-16 18:45 ID:b70dUwIK [Del]

Cannot see a thing
Light my candle
I do shiver

164 Name: Beth : 2014-07-16 21:47 ID:mWvLS42k [Del]

Fixing >>163

Cannot see a thing
So I light my wax candle
And look all around

165 Name: Doralice !86m18JgCrY : 2014-07-16 23:21 ID:UH/2AVD4 [Del]

and look all around
what wonders may surround you?
meh, it's not that great

166 Name: Kei-kun : 2014-07-17 10:27 ID:uQu9s0UX [Del]

Meh, it's not that great
To watch strangers on the trains
Mind their own business

167 Name: Miaou : 2014-07-17 13:02 ID:whHwnD95 [Del]

Mind their own business
Whispered Careless
Love is all

168 Name: Miaou : 2014-07-17 13:02 ID:whHwnD95 [Del]

Mind their own business
Whispered Careless
Love is all

169 Name: Miaou : 2014-07-17 13:02 ID:whHwnD95 [Del]

Mind their own business
Whispered Careless
Love is all

170 Name: Miaou : 2014-07-17 13:02 ID:whHwnD95 [Del]

Mind their own business
Whispered Careless
Love is all

171 Name: God : 2014-07-17 14:27 ID:Y/U3bsDD [Del]

>>167 168 169 170
5
4
3

172 Name: God : 2014-07-17 14:28 ID:Y/U3bsDD [Del]

No I'm wrong 5 7 3

173 Name: SilentlySinging : 2014-07-18 00:56 ID:Kr9PTjZL [Del]

Love is all
None else ever mattered
except maybe pie

174 Name: Kei-kun : 2014-07-18 14:53 ID:uQu9s0UX [Del]

Except maybe pie
I hate most other desserts
But that's okay, right?

175 Name: Anonymous : 2014-07-19 11:10 ID:wlSn13f2 [Del]

But that's okay, right?
My death won't affect any.
For I'm just a dirty cockroach.

176 Name: Spam Master !dgVpk9RuJ2 : 2014-07-19 19:56 ID:h44reebi [Del]

For I'm just a dirty cockroach.
For everyone and... and you
I'm not good enough.

177 Name: Kitty6773 : 2014-07-19 23:54 ID:8JBg6SZ0 [Del]

I'm not good enough
but I'll just keep on trying
Till the day I die.

178 Name: Beth : 2014-07-20 08:02 ID:gGSVskUC [Del]

Till the day I die
I will always march forward
With a brave smile

179 Name: Haruka : 2014-07-21 20:31 ID:FiCPnV83 [Del]

With a brave smile
I forget my past regrets
Look to the future

180 Name: Puck !OTHETEnDOU : 2014-07-22 01:22 ID:8rpC9jxJ [Del]

^

181 Name: Tempesta : 2014-07-22 23:32 ID:YXbmRRdi [Del]

Look to the future
Or one can look at the past
But focus today

182 Name: Papa D : 2014-07-25 17:07 ID:3x5x9QBT [Del]

Butt hole has an itch.
I scratch it with my finger.
Smells like chocolate.

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184 Name: Me : 2014-07-30 22:36 ID:Y/U3bsDD [Del]

But focus today
On the challenges at hand
To overcome them

185 Name: Satnam !F0s3L.0fFM : 2014-07-31 17:25 ID:+okXVt96 [Del]

To overcome them
one must have perseverance
and hope for the best

186 Name: Tatatara : 2014-07-31 21:34 ID:t+MpSksD [Del]

and hope for the best
because I'm bad at haiku
please do not judge meeeeeeeeee

187 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-08-01 04:07 ID:T8D4T95e [Del]

Please do not judge me
You pitiful hypocrites
Else incur my wrath.

188 Name: Tietjen's : 2014-08-01 22:22 ID:K30r6G/t [Del]

Else incur my wrath
Best leave patience to solve this
Inevitable

189 Name: Hikari : 2014-08-02 14:35 ID:k+OQ0Wrw [Del]

Inevitable
History can not be changed
Future, fixed in place

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191 Name: ather : 2014-08-02 21:50 ID:MBoyD9BR [Del]

Future, fixed in place
Past will always be a memory
Present is now

192 Name: SkaffenAmtiskaw !CtFafZr6ME : 2014-08-02 22:01 ID:mHj0b+ni [Del]

Future, fixed in place
Have we no choice?,
Forever bound to fate

193 Name: SkaffenAmtiskaw !CtFafZr6ME : 2014-08-02 22:03 ID:mHj0b+ni [Del]

Present is now
Why think back
The future is forward

194 Name: Nanami Rai !wVoPX6Dk6M : 2014-08-03 13:39 ID:uM3G91FO [Del]

The future is forward,
where we will soon meet our fate
on our darkest day

195 Name: SkaffenAmtiskaw !CtFafZr6ME : 2014-08-03 18:41 ID:mHj0b+ni [Del]

On our darkest day
What hope have we
we shall all be lost

196 Name: Larman-Krogeus : 2014-08-03 23:05 ID:N5FxDA3v [Del]

We shall all be lost
Left to roam the waves of time
Wishing we could change

197 Name: ▂▃▄▅▆▇█▓▒░♠Black Rabbit♠░▒▓█▇▆▅▄▃▂ : 2014-08-04 11:24 ID:4Oi9W43k [Del]

>>196

wishing we could change
just too naive to exist
we're just plain outcasts

198 Name: Nanami Rai !wVoPX6Dk6M : 2014-08-04 12:36 ID:uM3G91FO [Del]

we're just plain outcasts
here without a true purpose
looking for our light

199 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-04 20:05 ID:M7sSNpgf [Del]

looking for our light
shrouded in hopeless darkness
we are left to pray

200 Name: Izaya Orihara : 2014-08-05 02:52 ID:4Oi9W43k [Del]

we are left to pray
in the shadows
seeking a new life

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202 Name: Chini !MjE8yjSjJY : 2014-08-08 11:54 ID:CK1mK2OK [Del]

seeking new life (since)
gaining to create it anew
small glimmer is seen

203 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-09 08:20 ID:44aFT+La [Del]

small glimmer is seen
at the bottom the pool
it is alluring

204 Name: Beth : 2014-08-11 22:15 ID:mWvLS42k [Del]

Skipping >>203 since it's 5, 6, 3

Small glimmer is seen
My mind sparks with the desire
Of finding treasure

205 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-08-12 11:34 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

>>204 middle sentence was obviously meant to be "at the bottom *of* the pool". No need to skip for a typo. The last sentence is also five syllables (you may just be pronouncing 'alluring' as one because of your dialect?) >>202 wasn't skipped despite having 8 syllables in the middle, so.

I'm continuing from >>203

It is alluring,
The sweet poison of your touch...
This clandestine love.

206 Name: Kei-kun : 2014-08-14 12:51 ID:uQu9s0UX [Del]

This clandestine love--
I want to learn your secrets,
to echo your thoughts...

207 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-08-14 15:43 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

To echo your thoughts
Would be a waste of this mind.
I'm more than your sound.

208 Name: Gatsenu : 2014-08-16 05:53 ID:/weOpGUR [Del]

>>207

I'm more than your sound
Stronger than I look
I'm capable of anything

209 Name: Muzoshoku : 2014-08-17 13:24 ID:0xQ5JOgp [Del]

I'm capable of anything,
Life is too easy,
My road is boring.

210 Name: Hikari : 2014-08-18 00:39 ID:m1etvG2D [Del]

My road is boring
Everyday without color
There's nothing I can do

211 Name: Nobi-chan : 2014-08-18 01:35 ID:m1etvG2D [Del]

there's nothing I can do
I wish someday it will be over
I just wanna be happy

212 Name: Me : 2014-08-18 17:08 ID:zMS69kSp [Del]

I just wanna be happy
Because I am verry verry sad
My life is morbid

213 Name: Myu : 2014-08-19 10:06 ID:WTZOgOrl [Del]

My life is morbid
I have nowhere to go
Nobody's waiting for me

214 Name: Lau : 2014-08-19 23:23 ID:MSrzzUY7 [Del]

Nobody's waiting for me
All alone in my room
Light's on, my life's off

215 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-20 01:42 ID:EViF42vU [Del]

Light's on, my life's off
You are standing by the switch
Trying to give light

216 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-08-20 11:29 ID:rHod4Yt9 [Del]

Trying to give light
I stand by the Nobodies
Only to lose friends

217 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-23 21:52 ID:65aJkMLh [Del]

Only to lose friends
Who never really loved me
Now I've gained real ones

218 Name: taurus : 2014-08-25 21:07 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

falling over while pretending
to bestrong, getting back up
to pick up the pace.

219 Name: virgo : 2014-08-25 21:08 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

waves bare it's fangs
with our bodies pushing forward
freestyle

220 Name: anon : 2014-08-25 21:12 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

shortened breathes,
hearts pounding,
we are one

221 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-25 21:53 ID:T/6yvyMQ [Del]

>>218>>219>>220
Firstly, this is obviously the same person posting three times, as we can tell by the ID.

Secondly, you did not follow the rules of the thread. It's a chain, not a just a random Haiku thread. Please read the rules and instructions before posting.

Thirdly, your poems do not follow the format of Haiku. Haikus have a 5-7-5 structure, meaning the first line is five syllables, the second line is seven syllables, and the third line is five again. Your poems were 8-7-5, 4-8-2, and 3-3-3. These may be triplets, but not full-fledged Haiku. If it were a simple typo, I wouldn't say anything, since I've done it before. (Bluh, look at >>203) But these were not just typos.

So, considering mine was the last one formatted correctly, I will just repost it, so that I won't have written two in a row.

Only to lose friends
Who never really loved me
Now I've gained real ones

222 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-08-26 08:14 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

Now I've gained real ones,
and through rose colored glasses,
I see just their smiles.

223 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-08-26 17:19 ID:kMyucoRg [Del]

I see just their smiles
beyond that far horizon.
Take me to that place.

224 Name: michael : 2014-08-28 02:24 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

sweet scent
calms hearts suddenly
nostalgic dreams

225 Name: ventuswill : 2014-08-28 02:27 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

blue white green
beyond the horizon
i see none

226 Name: RawR!8NBuQ4l6uQ : 2014-08-28 02:29 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

my world a paradigm
relevant only to me
this is the world i see

227 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-08-28 12:03 ID:mkFpcjO0 [Del]

Seriously >>224 >>225 >>226?

We've already told you the rules for this thread. Yes, we can tell you're the same person since your ID is the same EVERY TIME. If you want to post your own poetry, do it in this thread:

http://dollars-bbs.org/literature/res/1292656529.html

Please don't spam the haiku thread with non-haikus.

Your structure for the poem may be three lines, but they aren't haikus at all. Haikus have a strict 5-7-5 syllable pattern, as explained to you before. Secondly, need I remind you that this is a chain? You must start from the last line of the last haiku.

*sighs* Here's mine again, seeing as how I was the last to post a correctly formatted one.

I see just their smiles
beyond that far horizon.
Take me to that place.

228 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-08-28 17:08 ID:F3LghiG+ [Del]

>>227 We are the Haiku police.

Take me to that place
Where the rays swallow the land
It is paradise

229 Name: Kaira : 2014-08-31 10:11 ID:e3MgHFyw [Del]

It is paradise,
where all your friends and Family are
This is what paradise is

230 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-02 00:32 ID:XFOH6Pog [Del]

>>229 I'm sorry, dear, but your poem does not follow the Haiku format. A Haiku consists of 5 syllables on the first line, 7 on the second, and 5 on the third. Your poem is 5-9-7. Please refer to >>221 and >>227 for instruction on how to work this thread.

Though congrats! You got one of the two major rules down!! (Using the last line of the last poem as the first line in yours.) Now just pay attention to the syllables next time! <3 I'd love to see what you come up with.

Take me to that place
Where the rays swallow the land
It is paradise

231 Name: Sao : 2014-09-02 04:25 ID:vhIfteuP [Del]

It is paradise
I have created for me
it has been stolen

232 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-09-05 04:32 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

It has been stolen,
That ambition I clung to,
Taken by the void.

233 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-06 09:40 ID:nUCvs7ep [Del]

Taken by the void
I am hopelessly drifting
Until I see stars

234 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-08 05:31 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

Until I see stars
I will wait for you my love
Although you'll never come

((Is it good? It's my first haiku))

235 Name: Sao : 2014-09-08 06:32 ID:vhIfteuP [Del]

((>>234 almost, the last line is a bit too long. it can be fixed by simply changing the "Although" to "though" - other than that , Well done!))

though you'll never come
I will keep the oath I made
strong against the wind

236 Name: CastorHaunchHeft !mZxMZ.sK.s!!XI8GEi6V : 2014-09-08 14:46 ID:2CJeFNuY [Del]

Lovely rebel girl
Fight the world that cast you out
Let me be your sword

237 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-09 03:25 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

(>>236 You should start your haiku with the last line in the previous haiku)

Strong against the wind
I will cross a world of pain
It is all for naught

238 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-09 16:32 ID:WTCbAYpU [Del]

>>237 (Nice work on the Haiku maintenance, friend. :D )

It is all for naught
The wandering witch of time
Now she casts her spell

239 Name: Kuroi-chan : 2014-09-09 22:36 ID:KJ20z07w [Del]

Now she casts her spell. Its like my life's gonna end. Will I ever be able to meet you again....?

240 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-09 23:24 ID:lMLC969O [Del]

>>239 ...

241 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-09-10 00:28 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

>>240 (at least the first two sentences worked..? lmao)

>>238
Now she casts her spell,
And like a breeze, it controls
My mind's fragile state.

242 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-10 04:32 ID:kn61uhLw [Del]

My mind's fragile state?
Could it be the medicine,
Or my senile age?

243 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-10 04:34 ID:kn61uhLw [Del]

Ah wait, can ppl even do anything w/ that last line?

244 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-09-10 12:39 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

>>242

Or my senile age
May be to blame for all this.
All those years shatter...

245 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-11 23:44 ID:ndv3OVRw [Del]

All those years shatter,
The pain and the pure horror
I will start anew

246 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-12 00:35 ID:Lfh68sYP [Del]

I will start anew
Washing the stains from my hands
Even death brings life

247 Name: Jamal : 2014-09-12 09:38 ID:bWvqVnff [Del]

Even death brings life,
After life brings death
Time is indifferent

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249 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-12 15:59 ID:srxSG0Sp [Del]

>>247 I almost didn't catch this! I had to look it up! But indifferent is 4 syllabels, not three. It was a surprise to me, too. :/ Maybe replace it with "callous" or "blasé"?

Time is callous
Leaving me far, far behind
Too slow to catch up

250 Post deleted by user.

251 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-12 19:58 ID:stX9t+RB [Del]

>>247 The second and third line are wrong.
>>249 "Time is callous" is 4 syllables.

Needs to be 5, 7, 5.

252 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-13 13:21 ID:srxSG0Sp [Del]

>>251 I know how many it has to be. Goshdangit I got the count off. Ughghghghhh, and I was doing so well with maintaining this thread and correcting and helping others. I am a failure.

Time is uncaring
Leaving me far, far behind
Too slow to catch up

253 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-09-13 13:39 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

>>252 It's okay bae \o\ Shit happens.

Too slow to catch up,
Is it even worth the chase?
This race is pointless.

254 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-14 05:20 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

This race is pointless,
Circling round to catch my tail,
Never ending chase.

255 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-14 06:15 ID:hz559yMm [Del]

>>254 where have you been all my life. Seriously.

256 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-14 11:20 ID:srxSG0Sp [Del]

Never ending chase
Going around each other
Calculating moves

257 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-14 17:19 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

>>255 That phrase ^^ lol, I never would have thought that anybody will ever ask that question from me.

258 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-14 18:27 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

Calculating moves
Always one step ahead of
What you want to choose

259 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-09-14 22:33 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

What you want to choose
Is never the choice you need.
I choose to survive.

260 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-14 23:27 ID:nFljQwu9 [Del]

I choose to survive
I will not give up this time
I'm the champion

261 Name: Jehuty !iP5ISkAh/g : 2014-09-15 02:43 ID:dgvGkUrQ [Del]

I'm the champion.
Cut down foes like blades of grass
Swaying in the breeze.

262 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-15 06:18 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Swaying in the breeze
Whispers fly through endless time
towards infinity.

263 Name: TsuyoshiMushaKY : 2014-09-15 09:06 ID:gk/XZm6K [Del]

Towards infinity
Is where my hope likes to be
In eternity

264 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-15 10:56 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

In eternity
Ancient pages lost in time,
To be heard again

265 Name: RiRika : 2014-09-15 11:10 ID:ifN/1KaF [Del]

To be heard again
I need something to gain

266 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-15 14:38 ID:SoZjb3pf [Del]

(>>265 It should be a haiku in a 5-7-5 format)

To be heard again
I will search for destiny
For eternity

267 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-15 20:22 ID:hz559yMm [Del]

For eternity
Waiting on opposite sides
The Silver River

268 Name: Jehuty !iP5ISkAh/g : 2014-09-15 21:12 ID:dgvGkUrQ [Del]

For eternity,
I wander through endless lands,
searching for a sign.

269 Name: Pomeranian : 2014-09-15 22:56 ID:KZ6JWBL+ [Del]

searching for a sign,
from the beginning of time,
I'll find you

270 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-16 01:57 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

(>>268 You should from The silver river)
(>>269 5-7-5, I'll find you have just three)

The silver river
Flowing forever, ever
I still do not care

271 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-16 08:54 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Searching for a sign,
Delving deeper in your gaze,
our eyes interlocked

272 Name: Mami : 2014-09-18 02:14 ID:BGc+0LrA [Del]

Our eyes interlocked
He understood straight away
I pulled the trigger

273 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-18 15:24 ID:SoZjb3pf [Del]

I pulled the trigger
Everyone is dead now
Is there a spring breeze

274 Name: Nanami : 2014-09-18 15:42 ID:GwW/Y30p [Del]

Is there a spring breeze
A place to make me forget
A question left unanswered

275 Name: Arcillus : 2014-09-18 16:41 ID:DtsNCEas [Del]

A question left unanswered
Page by page I turn
Clues but no answers

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277 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-18 16:49 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

Clues but no answers
Should I regret what I've done
Or what I could have?

278 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-18 23:03 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Or what I could have?
Not one thing I'd ever get
No more happiness

279 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-19 02:43 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

No more happiness
I'll finally accept pain
Hope become despair

280 Name: Mami : 2014-09-19 08:17 ID:WrTPHL3e [Del]

Hope became despair
There was not a soul in sight
The silence deafened

281 Name: Echo : 2014-09-19 10:41 ID:eZP/Em4W [Del]

But hope will rise up
for without hope, no despair
so we still live on

282 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-20 02:05 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

So we still live on
But we will be left for dead, no
Life confuses me

283 Name: Magnolia : 2014-09-20 05:16 ID:hz559yMm [Del]

"Life confuses me."
Echoed the voice in my head.
"Me too," I said back.

284 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-20 05:52 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

"Me too," I said back,
So our friendship laid it's path,
Humble beginnings

285 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-20 10:01 ID:SoZjb3pf [Del]

Humble beginnings
Towards the light of new hope
Could I be happy?

286 Name: Mami : 2014-09-20 14:24 ID:OPR/ng9Q [Del]

Could I be happy?
In this fleeting thing called life
I search for true love

287 Name: Onymous : 2014-09-20 16:12 ID:I4M7gt95 [Del]

I search for true love
true love stays away from me
Why is it like that?

288 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-20 17:37 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

Why is it like that?
Everyone searches for love,
Love should just find them

289 Name: BarabiSama !!C8QPa1Mt : 2014-09-20 18:39 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

Love should just find them,
Then skin them alive. What if
it baked a meat pie?

290 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-20 19:20 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

It baked a meat pie
With maggots crawling inside
Insatiable still?

291 Name: Butts :D : 2014-09-21 00:24 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Insatiable still?
This love, with such strong fervor...
I miss rock n roll.

292 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-21 03:40 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

"I miss Rock `n Roll,"
Said she, nursing her fourth shot.
I didn't respond.

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294 Name: Kuroi-chan : 2014-09-21 05:11 ID:KJ20z07w [Del]

I didn't respond.
Looking at the blue sky,
Feeling very blissful.

295 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-21 08:31 ID:Tl0Juj6+ [Del]

(>>294 It should be 5-7-5 in syllables. Yours is 5-6-6.)
I didn't respond.
How could she ask such a thing?
I do not want this.

296 Name: Butts :D : 2014-09-21 12:22 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

I do not want this.
My screams that now live alone,
they await freedom.

297 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-21 17:27 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

They await freedom
In this crooked world called Earth
But no one is free

298 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-09-21 17:59 ID:E4WpVREn [Del]

But no one is free
Its the mind thats the prison
door was never made

299 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-09-21 18:02 ID:JJYhnYP8 [Del]

Door was never made
Therefore, there is no escape
From this irony

300 Post deleted by user.

301 Name: Anonymous : 2014-09-22 07:12 ID:1JBZmyS9 [Del]

From this irony
A life that was lived so well
Ends so quietly

302 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-22 07:31 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Ends so quietly
An epoch of my lifetime
The coming of age

303 Name: Tokiomi Tohsaka !zbda3poRao : 2014-09-22 08:12 ID:GwW/Y30p [Del]

The coming of age
Perhaps, a happy beginning
Maybe, one of despair

304 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-22 08:27 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

(>>303 Last line has 6 instead 5)
The coming of age
I can now see your despair
Mother, are you dead?

305 Post deleted by user.

306 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-09-22 09:06 ID:1JBZmyS9 [Del]

Mother, are you dead?
Is it you went with father?
Should I follow you?

307 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-22 10:25 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Should I follow you?
Through a path made out of thorns,
To my blooming rose

308 Name: Butts :D : 2014-09-22 15:47 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

To my blooming rose,
Where may you be, I wonder?
It has been a while.

309 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-22 18:38 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

It has been a while
So I think I've forgotten
Help me remember

310 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-09-22 18:45 ID:E4WpVREn [Del]

Help me remember
The time we've had together
time we lost that day

311 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-22 18:57 ID:1mKZ2cdZ [Del]

Time we lost that day
It was six minutes too fast
Fix this fucking clock

312 Post deleted by user.

313 Name: Butts :D : 2014-09-22 21:50 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Fix this fucking clock.
Because my thoughts are waiting,
and it's been too long.

314 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2014-09-22 22:49 ID:ODiya5tc [Del]

"-and it's been too long,"
she said while clasping my hand.

"Who are you, again?"

315 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-23 00:59 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

"Who are you, again?"
"Just a stranger in the crowd,
Wanderer of worlds".

316 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-23 01:54 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

"Wanderer of worlds"
The statue of him was tall
I still hate him, though

317 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-09-23 06:57 ID:1JBZmyS9 [Del]

I still hate him, though
All the pain he's put me through
He's death should come soon

318 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-23 07:13 ID:ZHHqLtCe [Del]

His death should come soon
I ready my crusaders
I think, "Not today."

319 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-23 09:24 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

I think, "Not today"
Mayhaps I will tomorrow
It could be better

320 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-23 14:05 ID:H1atdoh+ [Del]

It could be better
It could be quite a lot worse
Hope for tomorrow

321 Name: Kimiko : 2014-09-23 18:19 ID:EYAPntE3 [Del]

Hope for tomorrow
Is the only thing I need.
Will it ever be better?

322 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-09-23 18:56 ID:E4WpVREn [Del]

Will it ever be better?
I guess I can only dream
What will these dreams bring?

323 Name: trylouu : 2014-09-23 19:54 ID:cec4PMye [Del]

What will these dreams bring?
The nightmares of deep slumber?
I'll perceive darkness!

324 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-23 20:06 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

I'll perceive darkness
Because their is no more light
When will I be freed

325 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-09-23 21:46 ID:fOJ2PxiE [Del]

When will I be freed?
Just like a bird in a cage...
Wait, I am a bird

326 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-24 04:11 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Wait, I am a bird,
Soaring through the endless sky,
World seen from above

327 Name: petrichor !4y.xHtYWhs : 2014-09-24 08:48 ID:edIvdJD+ [Del]

World seen from above
All alone in the cockpit
My passengers sleep

328 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-24 09:10 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

My passengers sleep
So that's when it's time to kill
The blood's on my hands

329 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-09-24 11:09 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

The blood's on my hands,
Don't worry miss, it was a
Successful bypass

330 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-24 14:59 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Successful bypass
Nearly had a collision
Don't text while driving

331 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-24 17:48 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Don't text while driving
It's vital to take the pledge
Be careful next time

332 Name: Mami : 2014-09-25 02:31 ID:ybXFFPZa [Del]

Be careful next time
Lady Luck's seldom so kind
Do voice calls instead

333 Name: DiddlyDoo : 2014-09-25 06:58 ID:wG1qqXVW [Del]

Flowers in my yard
Lillies and roses growing
Penis in my butt

334 Name: KuroNoSora : 2014-09-25 09:12 ID:C8x6UH08 [Del]

Doge is Love
Doge is Life
wow....

335 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-25 16:28 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

(>>334 This is a Haiku Chain. Please see posts >>221 and >>227 on how to properly operate on this thread. Whenever this thread is full and we make a part 2, someone should really post all of these rules on the OP.)

Penis in my butt
I'm in a yaoi fanfic
Authors can't write smut

336 Name: Butts :D : 2014-09-25 22:00 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

>>335 well, technically you're also breaking the rules because you continued from something that didn't continue move on with the chain either. but. whatever.

Authors can't write smut.
Can't depict it like porn stars.
Play it on the screen.

337 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-25 23:10 ID:z5oSsleH [Del]

(>>336 I didn't even notice that they had made a mistake as well, so that was my fault for not paying attention. However, it was a simple mistake as opposed to completely disregarding every rule of this thread. But I appreciate you bringing my blunder to my attention.

In any case, >>333, please start your Haiku with the last line of the Haiku above yours. Though I absolutely loved that beautiful peace of poetry, please read the rules before making another.)

Play it on the screen
Play the story of my life
Does it have an end?

338 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-26 00:41 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Does it have an end?
I do not think it has one
It's everlasting

339 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-26 12:25 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

It's everlasting
The light of your radiance
Don't let them quell it

340 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-09-26 14:03 ID:f+VD6FdH [Del]

Don't let them quell it
Rebel and be free instead
Gained potential?

341 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-26 20:01 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Don't let them quell it
You're just so misunderstood
But I understand

342 Name: Honka : 2014-09-27 17:37 ID:BDp6XU3G [Del]

But i understand
So give me your hand
Don't make me mad

343 Name: Anonymous : 2014-09-27 22:12 ID:d19pjVt3 [Del]

don't make me mad
feels like a scaredy-cat
no courage to count

344 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-09-28 10:07 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

No courage to count
In this house full of liars.
Where do we stand now?

345 Name: Lovely : 2014-09-28 13:25 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Where do we stand now?
In our fake relationship
I hate you so much

346 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-28 14:59 ID:l80X86US [Del]

I hate you so much
Your voice is constant static
You've nothing to say

347 Name: G-doe : 2014-09-29 01:49 ID:z9nq6X3i [Del]

i say that we pray
so that lovely is not gay
to thee start of may

348 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-29 09:29 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

(>>347 That is a lovely poem! However, unfortunately, you have not followed the rules. Please refer to >>221 and >>227 for instructions on how to operate this thread.)

I hate you so much
Your voice is constant static
You've nothing to say

349 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-09-29 18:31 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

You've nothing to say
So just leave me for today
Everything's not great

350 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-09-29 23:39 ID:N+DQRftf [Del]

Everything's not great.
Yet I hide behind this smile.
So no one will know.

351 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-09-30 00:10 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

So no one will know
What horrible deed I've done
I must run away

352 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-09-30 12:35 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

I must run away
Escaping this foolish world
Riding on the wind

353 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-09-30 14:18 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Riding on the wind
I face my new tomorrow
Where will I go next?

354 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-09-30 16:04 ID:da6Vjge6 [Del]

Where will I go next?
Does it matter at all?
Go forth and find out.

355 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-09-30 19:49 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Go forth and find out.
These waves don't dance for no one,
You're not pathetic.

356 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-09-30 20:39 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

You're not pathetic
You just have no purpose child
Find one quick or else

357 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-10-01 00:55 ID:w3QndZkz [Del]

Find one quick, or else
There's not any time to lose
Choose! You'll lose your chance

358 Name: Apollo !xlgRMYva6s : 2014-10-01 03:12 ID:LKaurt61 [Del]

Choose! You'll lose your chance
Feel good about what you do
Be proud of yourself

359 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-01 17:47 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Be proud of yourself
You made millions my friend
...Now give me half please!

360 Name: Kira : 2014-10-01 18:20 ID:wY09QxeB [Del]

......Now give me half please!
Of that sandwich I've adored
It's really yummy ! XD

361 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-01 23:14 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

It's really yummy
To look at guys from afar
Which one will be mine???

362 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-10-02 09:38 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Which one will be mine?
There are so many options
I must choose wisely

363 Name: Fjolu !D5yUNcgpaM : 2014-10-02 12:53 ID:nnfMjGZt [Del]

I must choose wisely,
Is really the dark evil or,
Is my mind playing tricks?

364 Name: Cin !XFyLmMb/dQ : 2014-10-02 12:54 ID:nSR4rIbG [Del]

I must choose wisely
Weather to go back to dark
Yes, guess he died then
*i know it's the wrong weather, don't know how to spell right one.

365 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-02 15:48 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

>>364 whether* now you know :)

Yes, guess he died then.
What to do? Oh fucking hell.
"Dump the body. Run."

366 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-02 18:33 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

"Dump the body. Run"
I screamed in my sleep last night
Guilt feels horrible

367 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-02 19:53 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Guilt feels horrible.
But when she pretends to cry,
guilt doesn't matter.

368 Name: Pendigito : 2014-10-02 22:16 ID:ZNgvWhIR [Del]

Guilt doesn't matter.
Our hearts are apathetic,
Our bodies just move.

369 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-02 22:23 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Our bodies just move
We are all automatons
No one is human

370 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-10-02 22:55 ID:nm7vpXjk [Del]

No one is human.
Everyone follows their codes.
Shuffle along now.

371 Name: Lidov-Kozai : 2014-10-03 02:24 ID:N5FxDA3v [Del]

Shuffle along now
hurry hurry, you mustn't
look clearly here, now

372 Name: Distortion!NChn59Ajps : 2014-10-03 03:59 ID:fR6SVQwK [Del]

Look clearly here, now
Your eyes are being deceived
Something is hidden

373 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-03 15:42 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Something is hidden.
Where? I can't really answer that.
We all have secrets.

374 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-10-03 16:03 ID:EMnRZ3Sr [Del]

We all have secrets
They are always brought to light
Can't lie forever

375 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-03 20:28 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Can't lie forever
You will get figured out soon
Always tell the truth

376 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-04 17:33 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Always tell the truth
Or else you'll forget the lies
Wouldn't that be bad

377 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-05 11:57 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

(meh, I can't be the only one doing this now. This is cool >_<)

Wouldn't that be bad
If I fell under pressure
It's not relaxing

378 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-10-05 14:21 ID:ZKiumkMi [Del]

It's not relaxing
Just being here all alone
At least, not to me

379 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-05 18:28 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

"At least not to me"
I replied to her question
"Fuck that," she replied.

380 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-06 00:58 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

"Fuck that," she replied
I never saw her again
And thank God for that

381 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-06 18:18 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

"And thank God for that"
I muttered as I left home
No one bothers me

382 Name: nanaba : 2014-10-07 09:17 ID:vIgRWU3B [Del]

No one bothers me
Not even to tell me that
My head is on fire

383 Name: Kaynomaly : 2014-10-07 11:59 ID:za0z4m/K [Del]

My head is on fire
My wishes never come true
Instead I explode

384 Name: PandaBounce !td9Q7ofsbs : 2014-10-07 15:03 ID:Kd3Kvb7J [Del]

Instead I explode
I watch butterflies
I am Happy

385 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-07 19:49 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

I am happy
Not really, but I'll fake it
That's life's bitter truth

386 Name: Dylan That Hot Pink Mess !Dfk5f79hVA : 2014-10-07 23:56 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

That's life's bitter truth
We all land flat on our ass
Learn to deal with it

387 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-08 02:15 ID:H1atdoh+ [Del]

Learn to deal with it
Or everyone will die
"Is that really bad?"

388 Name: Lawli : 2014-10-08 09:15 ID:WTb1vCkm [Del]

Is that really bad?
Are you just being a dick?
Just step the fuck off.

389 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-10-08 09:50 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Just step the fuck off.
What are you waiting for man?
Close your eyes and jump.

390 Name: kanra : 2014-10-08 15:42 ID:lrARK500 [Del]

it will be okay,
just one more day, they say.
we all die anyway

391 Post deleted by user.

392 Name: Lawli : 2014-10-08 19:09 ID:s4LFDtHO [Del]

(>>390 You have broken the rules of this thread. Please refer to posts >>221 and >>227 for the takes on how to operate this thread. I will be starting from >>389 since >>391 followed the incorrectly done Haiku.)

"Close your eyes and jump."
That's what they all say to you.
Don't even listen.

393 Name: Kaynomaly : 2014-10-08 21:05 ID:za0z4m/K [Del]

Don't even listen
Everyone stopped long ago
Why should you bother?

394 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-08 21:24 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Why should you bother?
I never bother myself
So you shouldn't too

395 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-11 10:05 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

"So you shouldn't, too"
You can't tell me what to do.
I'm not a puppet.

396 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-11 13:31 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

I'm not a puppet
I'm just a marionette
There's a difference

(Difference is three syllables if pronounced di-fer-rence, yes?)

397 Name: Lawli's Computer Does Not Compute : 2014-10-11 18:12 ID:qwT4XXA0 [Del]

(>>396 Yeppers peppers!)

There's a difference
Between evil and mistake
Why can't you see it?

398 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-11 18:38 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Why can't you see it?
I see her body clearly
There's no chalk outline

399 Name: shinobu : 2014-10-11 21:23 ID:LUtKyHUH [Del]

There's no chalk outline
But I saw his body there
Lying peacefully

400 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-11 21:38 ID:6Z851qwd [Del]

Lying peacefully
In his lap, I gaze upward
Seeing shooting stars

401 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-12 00:39 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Seeing shooting stars
That I made wishes upon
They never came true

402 Post deleted by user.

403 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-10-12 10:00 ID:y4guKYKy [Del]

(>>402 Psst Lovely, wrong thread)

They never came true
Should have known that star was fake
Never wish again

404 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-12 10:32 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

>>403 Thanks, but it's not letting me delete it?!

Never wish again
It's going to be a farce
Everything is fake

405 Name: Lawli !kE7nekQeNY : 2014-10-12 10:33 ID:XZ5+axgG [Del]

(>>404 Yeah, it's done that for me lately, too. I don't know what's up. :/)

406 Name: DaiMajutsu13 : 2014-10-12 12:02 ID:qs38bdDA [Del]

Everything is fake,
Why are shallow words valued,
More than honest ones?

407 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-13 05:25 ID:MhNdCdnV [Del]

"More than honest ones?"
He asked me during English.
I answered him: "What?"

408 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-13 10:18 ID:t9xXjLoh [Del]

I answered him: "What?"
I should probably listen.
But I hate talking.

409 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-13 19:30 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

But I hate talking
I'm an unsociable girl
Did you not know freak?!

410 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-14 01:11 ID:C6Q/HeFI [Del]

Did you not know freak?!
That your creepy stare scares me??
Why should I love you?

411 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-14 01:17 ID:MhNdCdnV [Del]

Why should I love you?
Can you go and kill yourself?
Or wait, maybe not

412 Name: DaiMajutsu13 !0UZD1OR/j. : 2014-10-14 09:17 ID:lxa2TOGx [Del]

Or wait, maybe not
Maybe there's still hope for me,
Reach the stars, I shall!

413 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-14 10:49 ID:T5jTSwoW [Del]

Reach the stars, I shall
And open my heart
I want to feel the heat

414 Name: Augustina : 2014-10-15 16:54 ID:UVPnZJcO [Del]

I want to feel the heat
Embracing life at full speed
Holding tight to hope

415 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-10-15 18:42 ID:GrdqLcVL [Del]

Holding tight to hope
Why, aren't you doing it, too?
Why won't you help me?

416 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-15 19:35 ID:laSr8iko [Del]

Why won't you help me?
It's the least you could do right
Well fine be like that!

417 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-10-15 22:30 ID:e1QCPC6h [Del]

Well, fine! Be like that!
I suppose I shall then, dear.
If that's how you'll be.

418 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-16 00:24 ID:C6Q/HeFI [Del]

If that's how you'll be.
Perhaps give a smile for free.
That's enough for me.

419 Name: Shinichi : 2014-10-16 01:00 ID:EljOy43J [Del]

That's enough for me.
Enough killing for today.
Now I'll eat sushi!

420 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-16 05:35 ID:dnJvKOMw [Del]

Now I'll eat sushi
Sushi is a force of good
I really like food

421 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-10-16 08:01 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

I really like food
From all far away places
I must try them all!

422 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-10-16 10:34 ID:nxbAk4nA [Del]

I must try them all!
If only time would allow
this delicacy.

423 Name: Augustina : 2014-10-16 17:22 ID:UVPnZJcO [Del]

This delicacy
Bursting with flavors, yum, yum
How I wish for more

424 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-16 19:30 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

How I wish for more
But I will never receive
That's just how life is

425 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-17 15:03 ID:VlX5nSZG [Del]

That's just how life is.
I cry. The war does not end.
Yet flowers still bloom

426 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-17 18:13 ID:T5jTSwoW [Del]

Yet flowers still bloom
And lifes goes on
As I got carried away by it

427 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-18 11:38 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

>>426 the second and third line do not follow haiku format. the second line has only four syllables, and the last has nine. haiku should follow a format of 5-7-5. you had 5-4-9.

>>425

Yet flowers still bloom -
deep inside the lungs of life,
They said it didn't hurt.

(i don't know if didn't is one or two, but i counted it as one since it's a contraction.)

428 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-18 13:29 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>427 (didn't is to syllables, the contraction in fact makes it two syllables, did-n't)

>>425 (hopefully this one works XD)

Yet flowers still bloom
My heart is there only home
What else will blossom

429 Post deleted by user.

430 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-18 16:57 ID:T5jTSwoW [Del]

>>427 Thank you for pointing that out,I was not aware of the good format.

so:

What else will blossom
Explosions,as war rages
And scatters my mind

431 Post deleted by user.

432 Name: Elvis : 2014-10-18 18:32 ID:cyXwngVj [Del]

And scatters my mind
Like sharp fragments shattering-
Into my soft skin

433 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-18 18:36 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Into my soft skin
Is something I've never felt
It hurts but feels nice

434 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-18 23:20 ID:+LjdRTLt [Del]

It hurts but feels nice
That rejection breaks my heart
Crying tears of joy

435 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-19 00:33 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

>>428 i googled it. didn't is one syllable lol. turns out pretty much all contractions are.

>>434

Crying tears of joy -
Word is out that someone died,
i'm six feet under.

436 Name: Shinichi : 2014-10-19 01:19 ID:EljOy43J [Del]

I'm six feet under.
Beneath my magenta sky.
Zipping through the clouds.

437 Post deleted by user.

438 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-19 11:02 ID:tF790y1X [Del]

Zipping through the clouds
I have spread my broken wings
But now they are black

439 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-19 15:06 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>435 I just googled it myself and it says it's two syllables but I can see how it can be two syllables, like I guess it depends on how you pronounce it.

Continuing from >>438

But now they are black
Yes, those dirty little souls
They're despicable

440 Name: _Takami_ : 2014-10-20 06:04 ID:zsExGa/5 [Del]

They're despicable
these feelings inside of me
Refusing to leave.

441 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-20 09:54 ID:tF790y1X [Del]

Refusing to leave
Demons watch me from down there
When will you save me

442 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-20 12:31 ID:t9xXjLoh [Del]

>>439 ? where did you find that? everywhere i checked said one :P

>>441

When will you save me?
Times have gone and I'm still lost -
please just take me home.

443 Name: _Takami_ : 2014-10-20 16:13 ID:zsExGa/5 [Del]


Please just take me home.
I'm tired feeling this way...
so ensnared in this -

444 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-20 19:16 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>442 I used google and most of the sites (sorry I cannot remember the urls and stuff) said two. Did you maybe use a different search engine???

>>443

So ensnared in this
Is the captive mind in me
Why did they do it?

445 Name: Hill !DBRA/23qi. : 2014-10-21 02:59 ID:HNuE4R/c [Del]

Why did they do it?
Was it greed or out of pride
I will never know.

446 Name: Haiiro : 2014-10-21 11:05 ID:tF790y1X [Del]

I will never know
The only thing I must know
Is how to escape

447 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-10-21 16:45 ID:Im2YRIRE [Del]

Is how to escape
the only solution here?
I pray that it is.

448 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-21 21:30 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

"I pray that it is"
The radical priest preached
The cult is growing

449 Name: OMGasm!xctkSODNRU : 2014-10-21 23:59 ID:FtJcoE0O [Del]

The cult is growing
But so is my potato
Is that not awesome?

450 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-23 19:16 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Is that not awesome?
I cut off some of your hair
It's what you deserve

451 Name: BarabiSama !lmBitchbiw : 2014-10-24 12:42 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

[I deleted my post correcting it since I second guessed myself, but I checked it officially for your guys' future reference, and "didn't" is definitely only 1 syllable. It has the sound of two, but by the definition and rules of a syllable is only 1.]

452 Post deleted by user.

453 Name: BarabiSama !lmBitchbiw : 2014-10-24 12:45 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

>>450

It's what you deserve-
This heart of apple preserve,
Sweetly unnerving.

454 Name: AsbestosX : 2014-10-24 17:54 ID:DMDUani8 [Del]

>>453
Sweetly unnerving
Her hair now blows in the wind
The woman tumbles.

455 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-24 20:39 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>451 (So does that mean we can use it as both one and two syllables from now on like for most of the -n't words???)

The woman tumbles
Like Jack and Jill had once done
Just not as famous

456 Name: NPC : 2014-10-28 00:53 ID:T3+Fz8x/ [Del]

>>453

The woman tumbles
down the slope
crashing ungracefully.

457 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-28 12:32 ID:t9xXjLoh [Del]

>>456 sorry to inform you, but this does not follow traditional haiku format. the first line needs five syllables, the second needs seven, and the last one needs - again - five. your haiku is 5-3-6. i also don't understand why you didn't continue from >>455. sorry but because your contribution didn't follow the rules i'm going to skip over you.

>>455

Just not as famous.
Simply not up to standard.
Is anyone right?

458 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-28 22:11 ID:RCamGTcs [Del]

Is anyone right?
If I think not, then I find
A contradiction

459 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-28 23:10 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

A contradiction
Is all you'll ever be
My confusing friend

460 Name: Someone!1z8qrtCRGc : 2014-10-29 20:49 ID:tRcJ90n3 [Del]

My confusing friend:
A walking confusion that
Confuses themselves

461 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-10-30 16:09 ID:70FQrPoh [Del]

Confuses themselves
Those who try one's mind to speak.
Stage fright is scary.

(Forgive me, grammar police, for writing like Yoda because I thought it worked with the theme of this haiku. Please don't penalize me too heavily.)

462 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-30 23:47 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>461 (I love the Yoda speech)

Stage fright is scary
You lose all your train of thought
Got butterflies, no?

463 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-10-31 08:57 ID:t9xXjLoh [Del]

>>461 your yodaness i do like. much nicely written well.

>>462

Got butterflies, no?
More like warthogs ramming me.
I thought I liked you.

464 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-10-31 10:56 ID:7lGE8xK8 [Del]

I thought I liked you.
But now it's something stupid.
Curse my weak-willed heart.

465 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-31 19:20 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Curse my weak-willed heart
For falling in love with you!
Never love again

466 Name: Vottvey : 2014-10-31 22:33 ID:f1KqqP7W [Del]

I felt really bored,
so I wrote a bad haiku.
Now I'm just hungry.

467 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-10-31 23:48 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>466 Not how this works read the rules.

468 Name: K : 2014-11-01 00:19 ID:1j/Q0x4F [Del]

Never love again
That's the destiny of men
Losing all hope

(english isn't my mother language, hope it's right)

469 Name: Karsi !E9XquY9g8. : 2014-11-01 04:13 ID:ZsY50flx [Del]

Losing all hope,
I turned on my computer.
Typed in my password.

470 Name: Vottvey : 2014-11-01 12:32 ID:f1KqqP7W [Del]

Typed in my password,
But it turned out to be wrong,
What do I do now?

471 Name: Haiiro : 2014-11-01 13:44 ID:T5jTSwoW [Del]

What do I do know?
Was my username wrong?
Was it the password?

472 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-01 17:56 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Was it the password?
Or maybe my username
I don't think I'll know

473 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-02 02:15 ID:2lGb2GNL [Del]

I don't think I'll know
if my choices were the best.
Life rotates onward.

474 Name: Dumah : 2014-11-02 02:44 ID:vOaB41RW [Del]

Life rotates onward.
That silly rabbit told me.
"Do a barrel roll."

475 Name: Lidov-Kozai : 2014-11-03 20:02 ID:N5FxDA3v [Del]

Do a barrel roll
he said a minute too late
starfox feels, people

476 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-04 19:55 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Starfox feels, people
But he does not feel me
That is fine by me

477 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-11-04 20:20 ID:DEPaeRbz [Del]

That is fine by me
The finish line is too far
But I think I won

478 Name: Qualin !vYucUwXnHg : 2014-11-05 11:20 ID:JhbYFZhl [Del]

But I think I won
I Blacked Out At The Finish Line
So now I feel sick

479 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-05 20:19 ID:6pi6SFNq [Del]

So now I feel sick
of this godforsaken place.
Let me out of here.

480 Name: the actor : 2014-11-05 20:41 ID:7Z+GKXz9 [Del]

let me out of here
I'm slamming piano keys
not a sound is heard

481 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-06 20:11 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Not a sound is heard
Because my ears are bleeding
Who would cut them off?

482 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-11-07 08:24 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Who would cut them off?
Didn't they deserve better?
I don't understand.

483 Name: Dumah : 2014-11-07 13:11 ID:wShpi1hO [Del]

I don't understand.
I did everything they asked.
The cake is a lie.

484 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-07 18:45 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

The cake is a lie
It's made of death and plastic
Where'd the sugar go?

485 Name: AsbestosX : 2014-11-08 02:20 ID:DMDUani8 [Del]

Where'd the sugar go?
The girl asked this of the night
oh that's right the toes!

486 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-08 20:19 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

"Oh, that's right the toes!"
She exclaimed adding them in.
Her lavish meat pie

487 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-09 03:32 ID:M0AeAeA/ [Del]

Her lavish meat pie
is sold to unknowing fools.
Is this Sweeney Todd?

488 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-11-09 11:09 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Is this Sweeney Todd?
The blade against my neck burns.
... He could at least smile.

489 Name: Nam : 2014-11-09 12:34 ID:DXlm8ZMF [Del]

... He could at least smile.
But his blade was like his eyes
Blood tingles my neck

490 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-11-09 20:30 ID:+YkawfP8 [Del]

Blood tingles my neck
As I dissect the body
Inside my penthouse

491 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-11-10 09:15 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Inside my penthouse
Stare at the sparking city
Don't bother jumping

492 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-10 11:34 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Don't bother jumping
Like suicide ever works
Go die somewhere else

493 Name: Himekawa : 2014-11-10 15:11 ID:Io6u80bO [Del]

in my province
grass blooms too...
cherry blossoms

494 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-10 16:35 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>493 that's not how this thread works and it doesn't even fit the haiku format

495 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-10 21:40 ID:xlyFD1+J [Del]

>>493 I'll continue the thread then.

Go die somewhere else.
Such unworthy deaths do not
befit my grand eyes.

496 Name: Ibaraki Ibuki : 2014-11-10 21:55 ID:bSll7gRb [Del]

To those of you who aren't sure if your haiku has the right amount of syllables (five in the first and last lines & seven in the middle line), I recommend using a site like http://www.howmanysyllables.com/. Alternatively, you can try speaking like a Dalek (i.e. in a ver-y ro-bot-ic mon-o-tone) to get a rough idea of how many syllables there are in a word.

Now for my haiku. (For those who don't get the gist of this thread, read >>1 or notice how the first line of my haiku is the same as the last line of >>492.)

Go die somewhere else
I will not even miss you
Don't give me that look

497 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-11-11 09:17 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

>>496 This post is a very good notice. For more explanation on the rules, see >>221 and >>227. We've explained these rules several times.

IF YOU PLAN ON POSTING ON THIS THREAD, PLEASE READ THE RULES. THIS IS NOT A REGULAR POETRY THREAD. THIS IS SPECIFICALLY A HAIKU CHAIN. YOU MUST FOLLOW THE FORMAT OF THIS THREAD, OR YOU WILL BE SKIPPED.

If you wish to write free-form poetry, there is a Poetry Thread, located here.

We should really put this all in the OP whenever we get around to making the part 2 of this thread.

Don't give me that look.
Like you are somehow guiltless.
You had hands in this.

498 Name: the actor : 2014-11-11 09:52 ID:iL9pH5X7 [Del]

you had hands in this.
All the pain I feel is proof.
How can you still smile?

499 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-11 14:24 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

How can you still smile?
You unnerving, wretched wench
Why'd I marry you?!

500 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-11-11 14:30 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Why'd I marry you?
Can't remember how we met.
Love's fabricated.

(I had to cut some corners here whoops)

501 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-11-14 22:00 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

aaaaand bump (apologies, was trying to clear the spam)

502 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-15 22:22 ID:eMGjp2Fq [Del]

Love's fabricated.
No one is reliable
in these messed-up days.

503 Name: ButterCakes !e.pe2rP3sU : 2014-11-15 22:33 ID:2uLHTdq0 [Del]

In these messed-up days
Anime let's me hide away
I'm an introvert

(That's going to be a hard line to work with... I'm sorry.)

504 Name: Shittopi-chan : 2014-11-16 02:17 ID:UQPq2J/2 [Del]

I'm an introvert
Everyone just ignore me
How lonely I am

505 Name: teawith_ink : 2014-11-17 02:37 ID:zsExGa/5 [Del]

How lonely I am
I sit in my room and sleep
Enveloped in dreams

506 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-11-17 10:07 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Enveloped in dreams
I'm drifting through my mind space
This eternal bliss

507 Name: VitrealleAurora!9mbq5YNMp2 : 2014-11-17 21:35 ID:5UEj12WD [Del]

The eternal bliss
as I rest forever here
the final station

508 Name: JuStAnOtHeRpErSoN : 2014-11-17 22:19 ID:20xuSbp5 [Del]

The final station
the train of souls passes through
is not called death

509 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-11-18 09:56 ID:SbDpu9PF [Del]

>>508 four syllables in last line

The final station
I realize, has not come
More haikus shall bloom

510 Name: the actor : 2014-11-18 18:28 ID:7Z+GKXz9 [Del]

more haikus shall bloom
revealing hidden feelings
my deepest dark thoughts

511 Name: Karsi !j2Z1HgFh/6 : 2014-11-19 04:11 ID:UuXrIF6Y [Del]

My deepest dark thoughts,
A snowflake falls to the ground.
The season has come.

512 Name: Tadashi : 2014-11-19 06:23 ID:pb4qT1yz [Del]

The season has come,
For isolation to live,
Enveloped by snow.

513 Name: Re:WRITE : 2014-11-20 09:38 ID:6Gwc5LuG [Del]

Enveloped by snow
I start to become a corpse
How did this happen...?

514 Name: Yukio : 2014-11-20 11:38 ID:35pJ4Rgu [Del]

How did this happen...?
I need to get out of this
Stop eating me, wolves!

515 Name: Masaya : 2014-11-20 17:27 ID:R2wxKrCT [Del]

Stop eating me, wolves!
Is this the famous death curse?
I shall seek revenge!!!

516 Name: FigeroTheCat : 2014-11-20 18:33 ID:PgOd5e1h [Del]

I shall seek revenge!!!
No one else shall touch my tea,
or die as the first.

517 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-20 22:30 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Or die as the first
How absolutely boring
Drink formaldehyde

518 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-11-21 07:07 ID:vrO9qKX4 [Del]

drink formaldehyde?
that won't chase the wolves away
unless /they/ drink it

519 Name: P0pip0 : 2014-11-21 08:46 ID:6Gwc5LuG [Del]

Unless they drink it
No one will become poisoned
Although they must leave

520 Name: Anna09 : 2014-11-21 14:33 ID:X2L6kyQc [Del]

Although they must leave,
they don't seem to understand the consequences,
of the mess which they have created.

521 Name: Celestial Envoy !bDuNCOUT7Q : 2014-11-21 21:01 ID:tTonSKp+ [Del]

of the mess which they have created
because of sad ignorance
because of beautiful innocence

522 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-21 21:32 ID:KhaCtztp [Del]

>>520 and >>521 Haikus are 5-7-5 syllable format. Meaning five syllables for the first and last lines and seven syllables for the middle line. These have way too many syllables for some of the lines.

I'm continuing from >>519

Although they must leave
they will be reunited
in that place called home.

523 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-21 21:45 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

In that place called home
My heart became torn inside
I wished I could die

524 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-11-22 00:03 ID:fPmy1vAt [Del]

"I wished I could die"
That was what she told me but
Renewed hope burns bright

525 Name: NagiAme : 2014-11-22 07:55 ID:/ZslZ6nR [Del]

Renewed hope burns bright
Brighter than the sun
it burns straight down

526 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-24 01:44 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

It burns straight down
My entire body hurts now
And I have been scarred

527 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-11-24 15:46 ID:4wDpusvV [Del]

And I have been scarred
By the marks you left on me.
They weigh down my heart.

528 Name: LaLa : 2014-11-25 06:07 ID:w6QptBo6 [Del]

They weigh down my heart
This cold chains I bear
How do I break free?

529 Name: Masaya : 2014-11-25 18:01 ID:R2wxKrCT [Del]

How do I break free?
My body is tightly held
But my soul is free...

530 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-26 00:27 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

But my soul is free...
She thought locked up in her cage
She'd never get out

531 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-11-26 10:01 ID:D+56ObdK [Del]

She'd never get out
If she tried. But try she did;
Her efforts fruitful

532 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-29 01:43 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Her efforts fruitful
But no one ever noticed
So she stopped trying

533 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-11-29 08:39 ID:AsLTqIlF [Del]

So she stopped trying
To impress other people;
She'd live for herself

534 Name: FigeroTheCat : 2014-11-29 09:32 ID:PgOd5e1h [Del]

She'd live for herself
That is what they all tell me
still she admires them.

535 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-11-29 13:52 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Still she admires them
For their valiant efforts
And that's why she lives

536 Name: hinata : 2014-12-01 20:51 ID:JjA6yvm/ [Del]

Yet life futile will
Cut the ties, and hindrance to
And no longer mourns

537 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-03 21:02 ID:Ov7FFYbv [Del]

>>536 that's not how this works, the rules state how it works pretty clearly...

starting from >>535:

And that's why she lives
Death will not be an option
Immortality

538 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-12-04 11:14 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

Immortality
Is it something to strive towards?
Sounds kind of lonely.

539 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-04 20:00 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Sounds kind of lonely
These visions of solitude
I should make new friends

540 Name: Bones : 2014-12-04 22:18 ID:xLtEXAZG [Del]

I should make new friends
An illusion or a fact
I'll leave that to fate

541 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-12-05 12:07 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

"I'll leave that to fate."
I say that that is bullshit
We make our own fate.

542 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-05 22:09 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

We make our own fate
Forget about destiny
It is fake not real

543 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-12-07 02:34 ID:Ulglr79y [Del]

It is fake, not real.
So why does my heart hurt so?
I think love's crazy.

544 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-07 03:24 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

I think love's crazy
And it will drive me insane
I won't win his heart

545 Name: Marius : 2014-12-07 03:48 ID:noUk4XfG [Del]

I wont win his heart.
It was never a game to play.
I accept my fate

546 Name: kojdied !.qZ1UewV0A : 2014-12-07 05:49 ID:Vmz34L/C [Del]

I accept my fate.
No one will ever hear me.
Nothing can help me.

547 Name: LittleRat : 2014-12-08 10:40 ID:N8dt1RuT [Del]

Nothing can help me.
Only I can go dig out.
What is left of pride.

What is left of pride.
Bravery as been long dead.
confidence remains.

548 Name: Kodoku : 2014-12-08 16:34 ID:yCjDFRkr [Del]

Confidence remains
Hiding the fear that's inside
Act till its real

549 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-08 19:27 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

lol >>547 I'm not sure if that's in the rules, but...whatever...

Act till its real
You can fake it or make it
I choose to make it

550 Name: Pumpkin Pai : 2014-12-09 06:34 ID:5GQP6RB9 [Del]

I choose to make it
These words I can't seem to find
I quickly gave up

551 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-12-09 13:37 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

>>549 I suppose if people can post two posts right after one another, that's allowed, too. :/ Honestly, at least it saves post space.

I quickly gave up
And, well, now I regret it
Wish I'd tried harder.

552 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-09 22:48 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Wish I'd tried harder
Now I am stuck with nothing
I am a slacker

553 Name: Mina : 2014-12-10 15:55 ID:djJJSyG/ [Del]

We were doing mental health haiku's at school. Out of humour we made a hate haiku. Here it is:

Hey you, I hate you.
I will obliterate you!
Go die in a ditch.

554 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-10 21:51 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>553 That's not how this works, but please feel free to post it in the poetry board ^_^

>>552

I am a slacker
I benefit nobody
What do I do now?

555 Name: whatsupdoc : 2014-12-10 22:45 ID:w7SBxbHr [Del]

What do I do now,
I want the field to be plowed,
But I'm stuck in doubt.

556 Name: Lidov-Kozai : 2014-12-11 02:06 ID:XGW3YAbC [Del]

But I'm stuck in doubt
Where can I search for answers?
I look to the sky

557 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-12-11 08:04 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

I look to the sky,
Birds are flying overhead,
And my hopes are lost.

558 Name: Mina : 2014-12-11 14:55 ID:djJJSyG/ [Del]

>>554 I am ever so sorry to all the lovely people here. It was a silly mistake, sorry.

>>557

And my hopes are lost.
Yet I gaze ever onward.
Really, what is next?

559 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-11 23:11 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Really, what is next?
That is what passes my thoughts
We will wait and see

560 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-12-12 00:08 ID:B2PJRLGe [Del]

We will wait and see.
Oh, the wait is killing me.
Tell me what you want.

561 Name: Pumpkin Pai : 2014-12-12 03:08 ID:ZO8vJMZ0 [Del]

Tell me what you want.
For it is Christmas today.
What gift do you want?

562 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2014-12-12 12:07 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

>>558 It's alright, Mina! Mistakes happen, but now you've been informed, and you've corrected! We welcome you with open arms.

>>561

What gift do you want?
Geez, I'm bad at gift giving.
What should I buy now?

563 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-12 18:18 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

What should I buy now?
I only have a dollar
I should learn to save.

564 Name: Hibiscus : 2014-12-13 00:05 ID:1ya3w9V+ [Del]

I should learn to save.
But Christmas is approaching.
Guess I'll go broke soon.

565 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-13 01:20 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Guess I'll go broke soon
And no one will help me out
I'm knee deep in debts

566 Name: Sage : 2014-12-14 16:57 ID:016RU7L+ [Del]

I'm knee deep in debts
But I won't fret
I believe in miracles

567 Name: StrayCat : 2014-12-15 14:59 ID:QFSCKpEw [Del]

I believe in miracles,
its true we all have blessings
keep faith fellow dollars

568 Name: kojdied !.qZ1UewV0A : 2014-12-16 22:12 ID:Vmz34L/C [Del]

Keep faith fellow dollars
It has stood by us a while,
Its smiling at us.

569 Name: Hikari : 2014-12-17 06:17 ID:nUwgQVbJ [Del]

It's smiling at us,
A cruel future awaits.
Keep your head held high.

570 Name: loloki : 2014-12-17 09:52 ID:aQwAdS9S [Del]

keep your head held high
were all gonna fight
for thouse dreams that await

571 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-12-17 14:21 ID:5xj6fqQv [Del]

>>570 wrong no. of syllables in second & third lines

Continuing from >>569 :

Keep your head held high
And don't sink under your doubts
You are a cosmos.

572 Name: BarabiSama !lmBitchbiw : 2014-12-17 16:30 ID:ELIKZuYc [Del]

You are a cosmos,
Lost in your own existence...
A plane we can never touch.

573 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-18 00:47 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

A plane we can never touch
Because it flies so very high
Only in my dreams

574 Name: Shittopi-chan : 2014-12-18 04:00 ID:QHbgqkd+ [Del]

>>572 >>573 It doesn't follow the 5-7-5 rule

Continuing from >>571

You are a cosmos
Infinite,without an end
I fear endlessness

575 Name: Jill : 2014-12-18 14:56 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

I fear endlessness
like the hallow world of space
Happy Holidays!

576 Name: Shittopi-chan : 2014-12-18 15:20 ID:QHbgqkd+ [Del]

Happy Holidays!
Hello christmas,farewell school
Farewell to stress too

577 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-20 01:32 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Farewell to stress too
Until final exams come
The stress has come back

578 Name: Mugen : 2014-12-20 18:10 ID:i7oNwrnS [Del]

The stress has come back
Final Exams scores are now posted
I didn't do well

579 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-22 03:14 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

I didn't do well
My grade went down immensely
I hate my teachers

580 Name: Shittopi-chan : 2014-12-22 11:40 ID:5ZENk0MM [Del]

I hate my teachers
They give us trauma and fear
The terror teachers

581 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-23 21:16 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

The terror teachers
Who give me high blood pressure
Why so much homework?!

582 Name: chrome : 2014-12-26 03:32 ID:ccf4c1pU [Del]

Why so much homework?
They do not explain.
Can someone be my tutor?

583 Name: Max : 2014-12-26 21:45 ID:lptQSD8S [Del]

Can someone be my tutor?
I am bad at studying.
Especially maths.

584 Name: PRAISEALLAH : 2014-12-27 01:00 ID:9qr7ykr4 [Del]

Especially maths.
My brain hurts,
I have cancer.

585 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-28 18:07 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

I have cancer
How can I fix this problem?
Chemotherapy???

586 Name: jill : 2014-12-29 21:24 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Chemotherapy
No, most of them use drugs
Find another way

587 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-30 00:14 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Find another way
To go save yourself this time
I am not helping

588 Name: Blu : 2014-12-30 09:02 ID:Nj58pTKj [Del]

I am not helping
With cleaning the house today
I have to go work

589 Name: Eton : 2014-12-30 13:02 ID:4WcyWr8k [Del]

I have to go work
I have been wasting my time
I am quite lazy

590 Post deleted by user.

591 Name: dılℲ : 2014-12-30 14:02 ID:aIO6WBPB [Del]

I am quite lazy
because you don't do my work
now back to fucking work!

592 Name: Teddy34 : 2014-12-30 17:21 ID:ktwZWjoZ [Del]

Now back to fucking work!
Is all I hear Sigh
Can't wait 'til Friday

593 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-30 17:42 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>591 is wrong the last line is 6 syllables not 5.

Starting from >>589

I am quite lazy
No wonder I get nothing done
Procrastination...

594 Name: Eton : 2014-12-30 18:53 ID:4WcyWr8k [Del]

Procrastination...
I should be studying now
zero shits given

595 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2014-12-30 22:17 ID:5VinT8RI [Del]

zero shits given
i've got too much balls for this
your life is a lie

596 Name: jill : 2014-12-31 01:58 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

>>593 You made a mistake on the second line. Its 8 syllables. You should probably count before posting.

Your life is a lie
No one should know about it
Keep it a secret

597 Name: Anonymous : 2014-12-31 05:09 ID:/PACHKkh [Del]

>>596
There is no need to
Be so rude about some thing
So trivial, bitch

Ahaha I am so good at this.

598 Name: Anonymous : 2014-12-31 12:39 ID:pBnK3y2g [Del]

>>597 You made a mistake on your forth line, that should be e syllables.

599 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2014-12-31 14:27 ID:O7i+B9AD [Del]

>>597 you're supposed to continue from the last line of the previous haiku

Continuing from >>596 :

Keep it a secret
And cherish it forever
You and I will know.

600 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2014-12-31 17:20 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>596 what >>597 said and >>598 well stop being a smart ass and >>599 ...^_^ you're fine...lol the last four posts were like haiku police or some shit ok so...

continuing from >>599

You and I will know
The song that will become ours
Oh wait!!! We broke up...

601 Name: jill : 2014-12-31 19:25 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Oh wait!! We broke up...
I forgotten about it
short term memory

602 Name: Haiiro : 2015-01-01 09:28 ID:P8u/es+A [Del]

Short term memory
Well,it must be alzheimer...
Why am I so old?

603 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-01 15:42 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Why am I so old?
Drink from the fountain of youth
Probably won't work

604 Name: jill : 2015-01-02 01:55 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Probably won't work
if you don't try, you won't know
like Schrödinger's cat

(not sure if it has the exact syllables)

605 Post deleted by user.

606 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-02 03:11 ID:dLe/481H [Del]

Like Shrodinger's cat,
Trapped, clawing at the edges,
'til I'm forgotten

607 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-02 17:00 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

'til I'm forgotten
I'll try to stay at the top
Someone pushed me down

608 Post deleted by user.

609 Name: Haiiro : 2015-01-03 17:35 ID:P8u/es+A [Del]

Someone pushed me down
The fall only hurt when you land
So let me fly away

610 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-04 04:01 ID:auc4kWOY [Del]

So let me fly away
The ever welcoming sky is my dream
I am asleep now

611 Name: Maki-chan : 2015-01-04 11:27 ID:1dyBUDwR [Del]

I am asleep now
In the town there's no more light
Night is here

612 Name: Chandelure : 2015-01-04 15:59 ID:53OvWJgq [Del]

Night is here
The stars shines bright the dark void
The fireflies in the sky

613 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-05 20:29 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>609 is wrong continuing from >>607

Someone pushed me down
It was so hard to get back up
When everything hurt

(Question, is everything three syllables e-vry-thing, that's how i pronounce it or is it, e-ve-ry-thing, four syllbales???)

614 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-06 18:58 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

ok so i looked up everything, it is three syllables proof here: http://www.syllablecount.com/syllables/everything

When everything hurt
I tried to make it alright
It never helped much

615 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-06 20:28 ID:mkH1Cl+L [Del]

It never helped much
Website advice and respite
Work at it alone

616 Name: Aridus : 2015-01-07 07:45 ID:VI44qjir [Del]

Work at it alone
Maybe ask some of your friends?
Maybe they can help

617 Name: Mickel : 2015-01-07 08:55 ID:QyzKsjh5 [Del]

Maybe they can help
Endless drops from far above
Breaking summer's heat

618 Name: A noun a miss !hjCsM6BRpE : 2015-01-07 12:23 ID:r56QhnDh [Del]

Breaking summer's heat
Why can't the AC come on?
I'll go buy a fan

619 Name: Rae : 2015-01-07 20:43 ID:LC16pV7y [Del]

I'll go buy a fan
I gracefully unwind it
The glitter sparkles in the sun

620 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-07 21:05 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>619 your last line has 8 syllables instead of 5

Continuing from >>618

I'll go buy a fan
And keep it all for myself
The rest can suffer

621 Name: Setsuko : 2015-01-07 23:22 ID:n4haDE6d [Del]

The rest can suffer
This is todays corruption
I'll give in no more

622 Name: Shiro Neko : 2015-01-08 05:54 ID:eLML1pqk [Del]

I'll give in no more
Time to call my ex and talk
She hung up the phone.

623 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-08 09:34 ID:t/S8EEL/ [Del]

She hung up the phone
Emotions raging inside;
Anger and Regret.

624 Name: nioniko : 2015-01-08 13:56 ID:aQwAdS9S [Del]

anger and regret
that ill soon forget
and start to sweat

625 Name: Sahiko : 2015-01-08 16:14 ID:xYK3pzrE [Del]

And start to sweat
That was not a haiku
But I'll go with it

626 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-08 18:55 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

>>624>>625 Are you guys serious... (-_-) Neither of them were Haikus.

627 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-08 19:17 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Continuing from >>623

Anger and regret
Are all I have in my heart
Why am I bitter?

628 Name: Setsuko : 2015-01-08 22:12 ID:n4haDE6d [Del]

Why am i bitter?
I tried not to cry today
Its her funeral

629 Name: jill : 2015-01-09 00:21 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Its her funeral
I regret what I have done
Hope she forgives me

630 Name: Linzy : 2015-01-09 06:08 ID:/+G9ZwfL [Del]

Hope she forgives me
I don't know what will happen
it's time to move on

631 Name: Lawli !dweebQgsDc : 2015-01-09 08:37 ID:7odn3BnL [Del]

It's time to move on
There's nothing left for me here
Running with no breaks

632 Name: Setsuko : 2015-01-09 09:56 ID:SmAKIPSQ [Del]

Running with no breaks
I can hardly care to stop
Im one with the wind

633 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-01-09 11:39 ID:KHhK35sw [Del]

I'm one with the wind
I guess it was my calling
Here I can be free

634 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-09 22:30 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Here I can be free
I never have to worry
You accepted me

635 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-09 23:34 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

You accepted me
Smiling and petting my head
My tail thumps the floor

636 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-11 01:52 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

>>635 Psst. Was this too difficult? The next person can change it if they want.

637 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-11 03:55 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

My tail thumps the floor
I happily fetch the ball
That is a dog's life

638 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-11 15:35 ID:z5NyIZFH [Del]

That is a dog's life
Loved, hated or whatever
I bet it sucks hard

Didn't really put a lot of thought into this one, just wanted to see ahaiku start with that line. Hehe.

639 Name: Setsuko : 2015-01-11 17:58 ID:h37NxCLv [Del]

I bet it sucks hard
having that much sanity
Im one with chaos

640 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-12 02:12 ID:/p8F2TYU [Del]

I'm one with Chaos.
God's my throne, Satan's my crown
And Death is my wine.

641 Name: Setsuko : 2015-01-12 03:19 ID:h37NxCLv [Del]

And Death is my wine
So here is where i shall rule
Life is my poison

642 Name: Bee : 2015-01-12 06:19 ID:G/AmvfHM [Del]

Life is my poison
Toxic, wretched, polluted
Help me find my cure

643 Post deleted by user.

644 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-12 09:48 ID:/p8F2TYU [Del]

Help me find my cure
Aflame at Desire's touch
Aphrodite's whore

(HaHa! I keep ending it on awkward sentences. Am I kicked out, yet?)

645 Name: Haru !j2Z1HgFh/6 : 2015-01-13 01:00 ID:r1D+gfzU [Del]

Aphrodite's whore
That erotic desireness
A flming bullet.

646 Name: jill : 2015-01-13 19:17 ID:rIUJEoyF [Del]

A flaming bullet
Hitman called reborn shot me
Im invisible

647 Name: Tetra : 2015-01-13 20:49 ID:7xKtzXmW [Del]

I'm invisible
you can't possibly see me
but can you hear me?

648 Name: Honoko : 2015-01-13 21:04 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

But can you hear me?
I am calling out to you
My outcry echos

649 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-13 21:13 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

My outcry echos
In the empty mountainside
Caused an avalanche

650 Name: Honoko : 2015-01-13 21:17 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

Caused an avalanche
The white frost falls onto me
And the world goes black

651 Name: BARRONESS : 2015-01-13 22:02 ID:7speWfND [Del]

And the world goes black
i am still blind to it all
so i just cried on...

652 Name: Honoko : 2015-01-13 23:13 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

So I just cried on...
But wait, I hear a soft voice
Soft words of comfort

653 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-13 23:47 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

Soft words of comfort
Clashed with his grin and actions
"It'll be painless. Promise."

654 Name: Honoko Orihara : 2015-01-14 00:04 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

>>653, I'm gonna change it since it doesn't go with the rhythm:
"It'll be painless."
I sucked in my breath
What was he doing?!

655 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-14 00:35 ID:/p8F2TYU [Del]

>>653 Ahhh! Promise is 2 syllables!! ><

656 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-14 00:38 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

>>654 But wait bro... That was 4,5,5... You wanna do that again?

657 Name: Honoko Orihara : 2015-01-14 18:57 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

>>656 Ooh yea, good point. I will. (Isn't "It'll" two syllables?) *ahem*
"It'll be painless."
I gasped and sucked in my breath
What was he doing?!

658 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-14 23:19 ID:/p8F2TYU [Del]

>>657 Aiyah... Mate. Mate. Contractions like "it'll" and "isn't" and "don't", count as 1 syllable (I looked it up before hand).

What was he doing...
My obsession, my routine
Telescope, ready.

659 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-15 02:12 ID:/F53IDdO [Del]

Telescope ready,
And the stars spread out above
But nope. Eye fucking.

660 Name: Honoko Orihara : 2015-01-15 03:42 ID:kRXFcvrS [Del]

>>658 Haha, "Aiyah". I take it that you're from Malaysia or Singapore?
*gasps* Um... I don't swear... Oh, whatever. Screw that!
But nope. Eye f*cking.
My vision went all blurry
I rubbed my eyes hard

661 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-15 07:43 ID:Lfh68sYP [Del]

>>659 And I thought that I ended my Haikus awkwardly...
Kudos to >>660 for taking up that challenge! (I'm American, but I've lived in China enough to use their phrases everyday. ^_^' )

I rubbed my eyes hard
Sniffle once. Sneeze twice. I itch.
Cats! Leave me alone!

(Dedicated to Leigha and her current plight)

662 Name: Jill : 2015-01-15 14:07 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

Cats! Leave me alone!
I am allergic to cats
Dogs are good to you

663 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-15 16:55 ID:IS9+liiK [Del]

>>661 hehe, I try. I had a dozen awkward endings for this one, but decided not to.

Dogs are good to you,
Kind, energetic, sincere
Great to have around

664 Name: Souris : 2015-01-15 18:25 ID:2oBwOhQq [Del]

Great to have around,
People that you love,
Unless the love hurts...

665 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-15 20:32 ID:IS9+liiK [Del]

Unless the love hurts...
Go, pursue it fearlessly
Otherwise, it will

666 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-15 20:40 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>664 is wrong. You did 5-5-5 not 5-7-5

Continuing from >>663

Great to have around
Your friend who helps you get dates
Sadly he steals them

667 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-15 20:49 ID:33qArgSV [Del]

Sadly he steals them
My ardently desired
Pastries that I bought

668 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-15 21:05 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

Pastries that I bought
Get the fuck off the table
You want to die, cat??

669 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-16 17:19 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

You want to die, cat?
It is not that hard to do
You don't have nine lives

670 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-16 17:40 ID:33qArgSV [Del]

You don't have nine lives,
But you do have a Ninetales
Please trade it with me!

671 Name: jill : 2015-01-17 23:05 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Please trade with me!
I have blue eyes white dragon
It's a trading game

672 Name: Chandelure : 2015-01-18 04:17 ID:53OvWJgq [Del]

It's a trading game
That it's very addictive
You can't beat me!

673 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-18 17:53 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>672 I feel kind of bad because you could have said "cannot", but...you're last line is only 4 syllables.

From >>671

It's a trading game
I can't afford any cards
Please buy them for me

674 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-18 18:07 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

Please buy them for me:
Whips, Gags, Cuffs, Blindfolds and Oil.
Let's have fun tonight.

675 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-18 19:42 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

"Let's have fun tonight"
My boyfriend said with a smirk
We read aaaaaaall night long

676 Name: jill : 2015-01-18 21:47 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

We read all night long
Didn't expect him to do that
I should have known that

677 Name: RoRo : 2015-01-18 23:23 ID:q5iXAvGZ [Del]

I should have known that
This wouldn't end quite as planned
Still, I did have fun

678 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-18 23:25 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

(>>675 >>676 LOL)

I should have known that
The smiles, the glances, the sweat...
He's stalking me, right?

679 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-19 01:09 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

He's stalking me, right?
Now I do not feel so bad
I was stalking him!!!

680 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-19 03:05 ID:p5M7njQ/ [Del]

I was stalking him!!!
Now, seeing him years later...
I need to shower.

681 Name: Arashi : 2015-01-19 11:36 ID:5aM1v0gw [Del]

I need to shower.
And I also need to eat.
I will devour you.

682 Name: manu : 2015-01-19 15:31 ID:jDoY4fa8 [Del]

the river so cold
frozen fractals all around
I lay within

683 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-19 15:37 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>682 not how you do this

>>681

I will devour you
Cannibalism is great
Just do not get caught

684 Name: RoRo : 2015-01-19 16:08 ID:q5iXAvGZ [Del]

Just do not get caught
With all that blood on your hands
Or Sister will cry

685 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-19 18:18 ID:33qArgSV [Del]

Or Sister will cry
Like she did the other day
When we watched Bambi ;_;

686 Name: BarabiSama !lmBitchbiw : 2015-01-19 21:37 ID:UZSeZhZv [Del]

When we watched Bambi
Through the bright trailer window,
We were shot and killed.

[I wasn't gonna lose the opportunity to do that one lmao]

687 Name: Honoko Orihara : 2015-01-19 22:41 ID:C1XsGC4o [Del]

We were shot and killed
Blood squirted out of my head
And onto the couch

688 Name: RoRo : 2015-01-20 05:29 ID:q5iXAvGZ [Del]

And onto the couch
Fell the broken guitar neck
You turn your back now

689 Name: Arashi : 2015-01-20 11:12 ID:c2cRiyUL [Del]

You turn your back now
As if there is no return
Then the moon turns red

690 Name: Vex !29VjXEDWP2 : 2015-01-20 12:48 ID:R2L4mMws [Del]

Then the moon turns red
Howls pierce starry nighttime skies
A beast you've become.

691 Name: Mekton !Qu.UWk36n6 : 2015-01-20 13:47 ID:SFKNaCDd [Del]

A beast you've become.
But if your eye be evil,
your whole body shall be full of darkness.

[(How'd i do ? )]

692 Name: Scythea : 2015-01-20 19:44 ID:VD7pDjrx [Del]

Your whole body shall be full of darkness
Never going back
To the bold blue skies

693 Name: Anonymous : 2015-01-20 20:27 ID:SHN/cRzt [Del]

>>691 & 692 That was horrible. You two didn't even attempt to follow the rules.

>>690
A beast you've become.
Her wild dances at twilight
The fire consumes you


694 Name: Honoko Orihara : 2015-01-20 20:33 ID:lFnqjr2J [Del]

>>693 "The fire consumes you" is more than 5 syllables. I'll start a new one.
Dance in the fire
Oranges, reds and yellows
Flames that scarred the Earth

695 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-20 20:53 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>694 fire is one syllable although some people do pronounce it as two like fi-er, but no >>693 is right and you don't "just start a new one"

>>693

The fire consumes you
And you soon scream with terror
What a sight to see!

696 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-21 10:05 ID:2kzAuVYN [Del]

What a sight to see!
Mountains, Forests, all so green!
A wonderful world~

697 Name: Arashi : 2015-01-21 14:42 ID:0611kKjm [Del]

A wonderful world~
Go back in time, i'll just sit
And watch a T-rex.

698 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-01-22 02:07 ID:p5M7njQ/ [Del]

And watch a T-Rex?
What kind of last line is that?
Can't do much with it.

(Question: obviously I've assumed that it's fine, but is it legal for me to change the punctuation of a line or do I just have to take it as it is?)

699 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-22 08:50 ID:33qArgSV [Del]

Can't do much with it
I'll have to make up something
that won't sound awkward...

(>>698 Well, I suppose it's ok? As long as you keep the sentence, all is good I think!)

700 Name: Jill : 2015-01-22 12:35 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

That won't sound awkward..
The ending is awkward too
Here's how you do it

701 Name: BarabiSama !lmBitchbiw : 2015-01-22 14:22 ID:UZSeZhZv [Del]

>>698 (it's fine so long as you keep the words)

Here's how you do it:
Press the knife down firmly;
Carve your name in her.

702 Name: Arashi : 2015-01-22 15:47 ID:1o+onUE9 [Del]

Carve your name in her,
Make sure she's writhing in pain.
Ah, those lovely sounds.

703 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-22 17:52 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Ah, those lovely sounds!
Sweet terror fills the bathroom
Cliche horror scene

704 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-22 19:01 ID:33qArgSV [Del]

Cliché horror scene
The monster chasing you down
Under the moonlight

705 Name: Virsarce!ozOtJW9BFA : 2015-01-22 19:31 ID:JhBpMhgd [Del]

Under the moonlight
She comes back alive
Suck to be you

706 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-22 20:40 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>705 wrong format

Continuing from >>704

Under the moonlight
My dark silhouette appears
It scares me a bit

(Is appears 3 or 2 syllables I was unsure. 3 syllables pronounced uh-pee-urs or 2 syllables pronounced uh-peers???)

707 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-23 06:19 ID:Lkj9sxEV [Del]

It scares me a bit
A shiver runs down my spine
I shake in terror

(>>706 Appears is 2 syllabes to me. It sounds a bit weird if you separate it in 3 syllabes ^^")

708 Name: momo : 2015-01-23 10:09 ID:aQwAdS9S [Del]

I shake in terror
and then i cry
but soon enough I fly

709 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-23 19:38 ID:8Iligi+s [Del]

>>708 i love your username lol, but that is the wrong format.

Continuing from >>707
I shake in terror
At this horrific event
It broke me apart

710 Name: jill : 2015-01-24 14:25 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

It broke me apart
The grotesque sound I'm hearing
Please leave me alone

711 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-24 14:38 ID:PL8CUiyJ [Del]

"Please leave me alone!"
I screamed at the deadly man
Those were my last words

712 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-24 16:26 ID:eQ8XB2W3 [Del]

Those were my last words
I took my luggage and left
A new life awaits

713 Name: Jose Luis Hernandez : 2015-01-24 16:54 ID:TTsu0oEV [Del]

A new life awaits
afte a slumber sleep
Today I hapily wake
We new hopes for me

714 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-24 18:29 ID:PL8CUiyJ [Del]

>>713 wrong format, it's pretty self explanatory if you read the first post

continuing from >>712

A new life awaits
I am reborn a penguin
March with me comrades

715 Name: Jill : 2015-01-25 18:08 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

March with me comrades
To the new world I'm living
There we will find hope

716 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-25 21:09 ID:PzC62rq0 [Del]

There we will find hope
Once lost, but now given back
Await the future

717 Name: Magnolia : 2015-01-26 02:05 ID:O6uVdiT3 [Del]

Await the future
This storm of catastrophe
Blows wind in your sails.

718 Name: Xyou : 2015-01-26 15:28 ID:Lkj9sxEV [Del]

Blows wind in your sails
Travel through the sea of time
An endless journey

719 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-27 00:15 ID:MFMegwEg [Del]

An endless journey
I will sail the seven seas
Just like a pirate

720 Name: Jill : 2015-01-27 00:46 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Just like a pirate
I will find one piece for you
and conquer the world

721 Name: Magnolia : 2015-01-27 06:49 ID:O6uVdiT3 [Del]

And conquer the world
All nations and seven seas
Now; get on your knees.

722 Name: Cateye : 2015-01-27 14:42 ID:BnWoZORn [Del]

Now; get on your knees
A new age has come to pass
Unity acheived

723 Name: Theodia !L24i8u/JWk : 2015-01-27 18:32 ID:zBDKFkm5 [Del]

Unity achieved
Only then to be broken
By some careless words.

724 Name: Mobius : 2015-01-27 23:21 ID:5c2qUkX1 [Del]

By some careless words
Was his future decided
Death would come at dawn.

725 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-01-28 09:25 ID:O6uVdiT3 [Del]

Death would come at dawn.
Broken and weary, I smile
Free from the disease

726 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-28 19:28 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Free from the disease
That has affected many
Take care of yourself

727 Name: Mami : 2015-01-29 01:04 ID:LG1eLQ7l [Del]

Take care of yourself
Lest you call the Grim's cold hands
Cold black hands of death

728 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-29 22:12 ID:fQgOgDbb [Del]

>>727 i love your haiku so much!!!

Cold black hands of death
Choke my fragile neck at night
Yet I'm still alive

729 Name: LeanaLeana : 2015-01-30 03:30 ID:cEUCCDcE [Del]

Yet I'm still alive
No matter how hard I try
They still can't hear me

730 Name: Ignight : 2015-01-30 08:32 ID:v5Ecg7RW [Del]

They still can't hear me
My screams of pain at night, alas
However, I have hope

731 Name: rika !tdYploClJc : 2015-01-30 10:13 ID:VkGlxnOY [Del]

However I have hope.
Nothing shall take flesh of flesh.
Yet bitterness thrives on.

(this is so dark compared to the haikus from 2013...I wonder what that correlation could mean lol)

732 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-30 19:12 ID:R3lHIgl6 [Del]

>>730 wrong format

Continuing from >>731

They still can't hear me
No matter how loud I scream
I'm invisible

733 Name: Ignight : 2015-01-31 09:41 ID:v5Ecg7RW [Del]

<>
>>730 They-still-can't-hear-me
My-screams-of-pain-at-night-alas
How-ever-I-have-hope 5-7-5 ...

734 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-31 13:53 ID:JSERrM+m [Del]

>>733 it doesn't go by word it goes by syllable

so >>730's poem would go like this
They-still-can't hear-me [correct 5]
My-screams-of-pain-at-night-a-las [incorrect 8]
How-e-ver-I-have-hope [incorrect 6]

735 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-31 13:57 ID:JSERrM+m [Del]

oh oops I forgot to mention >>732 I linked it to the wrong post so I meant continuing from >>729 too late now huh?

continuing from >>732

I'm invisible
Almost like Susan Storm is
Without powers though

736 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2015-02-01 21:11 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Without powers, though
still formidable: a storm.
Finals are coming.

737 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-02 03:09 ID:2kq29SZu [Del]

Finals are coming.
Work hard and do well, students,
otherwise you're screwed.

738 Name: Kanra !LpuUw35lcQ : 2015-02-02 06:28 ID:895EK2IB [Del]

Otherwise you're screwed
Unless you study with friends
Then you will be fine

739 Name: devektra : 2015-02-02 14:56 ID:yjCIA6Br [Del]

Then you will be fine
Only if you eat noodles
They're the food of life

740 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-02 21:08 ID:+0453U6K [Del]

They're the food of life
Yet they cause cholesterol
...I would still eat them

741 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-02 23:19 ID:2kq29SZu [Del]

I would still eat them.
It's only the kitchen floor.
Totally sterile.

742 Name: VampirePotato : 2015-02-04 18:28 ID:NTg2eqJq [Del]

Totally sterile
The bottle it cloaks
And the syringe it soaks

743 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-04 22:13 ID:FlraXf3A [Del]

And the syringe it soaks
All of the blood in my brain
I have gone insane

744 Name: jill : 2015-02-08 01:33 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

I have gone insane
I wonder why it happened
It all just passed by

745 Name: Kito : 2015-02-08 04:01 ID:VeEI5b5c [Del]

It all just passed by
Graduation was Thursday
So what now, Future...?

746 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-08 09:28 ID:03Zhx25C [Del]

So what now, Future...?
Chaffed and scarred by the Past's chains.
Freedom or abuse?

747 Name: tiger lily : 2015-02-08 10:15 ID:KQLCSewQ [Del]

so what now,future?
comeing out into the wrold like a butterfly.
a fresh start

748 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-08 13:42 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>747 Oi... You... What're you doing?

749 Post deleted by user.

750 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-08 14:23 ID:ggQg0dKs [Del]

Continuing from >>746

Freedom or abuse?
I cannot tell the difference
That's why I'm messed up

751 Name: Kito : 2015-02-08 14:42 ID:VeEI5b5c [Del]

That's why I'm messed up
All I needed was some hope
And you never cared

752 Name: Shin : 2015-02-08 16:36 ID:mBl1f+4n [Del]

And you never cared
About my broken body
And my falling tears

753 Name: Shiro Neko : 2015-02-08 16:52 ID:9P2C9FmW [Del]

And my falling tears
Watered the plant below me
Wait no, stuff that shiz

754 Name: Shin : 2015-02-08 17:06 ID:mBl1f+4n [Del]

Wait no, stuff that shiz
Hidden away in the dark
Where none can be found

755 Name: jill : 2015-02-09 01:27 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Where none can be found
My secret stash that is so
Guess what's inside it

756 Post deleted by user.

757 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-09 04:45 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

"Guess what's inside?"
He asks, pointing to the trunk.
I despise digging.

758 Name: Kuroko : 2015-02-09 05:08 ID:mBl1f+4n [Del]

I despise digging
Searching for the secrets
That I can't call mine

759 Name: Bitter : 2015-02-09 13:16 ID:X4NU4M3U [Del]

That I can't call mine
Though it belongs to myself
My life, I give you

760 Name: Shiro Neko : 2015-02-09 14:04 ID:hCt0IXut [Del]

My life, I give you
Too romantic I must say
Can I change this now?

761 Name: Kito : 2015-02-09 16:37 ID:VeEI5b5c [Del]

Can I change this now?
It was due earlier, but...
Please give me more time!

762 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-09 19:36 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Please give me more time!
Elements and reactions-
Why, Chemistry? Why?

763 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-09 22:15 ID:Ros6XQqL [Del]

Why, Chemistry? Why?
Science has always failed me...
Love potions don't work!!!

764 Name: jill : 2015-02-09 23:59 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Love potions don't work
This isn't eighteen hundreds
ARe you that stupid?

765 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-10 03:00 ID:tNqnhEkf [Del]

Are you that stupid?
I can't tell if you're joking
Be more clear, will you!

766 Name: valtystic : 2015-02-10 04:05 ID:jYyBwddZ [Del]

Be more clear, will you!
I cannot understand you!
Freaking speak up please!

767 Name: Kokkuri-san : 2015-02-10 05:46 ID:hCt0IXut [Del]

Freaking speak up please!
Your granny's hearing is poor
And she doesn't swear...

768 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-10 09:06 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

And she doesn't swear-
Nor drink, smoke, cook, eat, or love
She withers away

769 Name: iilego : 2015-02-10 10:50 ID:JWWt1F73 [Del]

She withers away
Now I eat alone at night
Pass the salt

770 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-10 13:00 ID:03Zhx25C [Del]

>>769 That was 5-7-3, love. But still lovely. Want to reword the last line?

771 Name: jill : 2015-02-10 19:55 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Can you pass the salt?
Oh I forgot no one's there
Forever alone

772 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-11 00:24 ID:2Jzko6PS [Del]

Forever alone,
Brilliant minds are useless.
Express yourself, fool!

773 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-11 02:54 ID:tNqnhEkf [Del]

>>772 5-6-5
>>771Doing it wrong.
>>768

She withers away
Too light for the wind's whisper
Ashes to ashes

774 Name: Shiro Neko : 2015-02-11 03:18 ID:hCt0IXut [Del]

Ashes to Ashes
and poop will always be poop
The wind blows gently...

775 Name: valtystic : 2015-02-11 05:17 ID:jYyBwddZ [Del]

The wind blows gently...
I stare outside my window,
A stranger stares back...

776 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-11 06:28 ID:2Jzko6PS [Del]

>>773 Bri-li-ant minds are use-less. 7.

I assume brilliant is the word you're pronouncing differently. I'm Australian, and I've always said it as three syllables.

777 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-11 09:46 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>776 Point taken. I think Haikus are difficult for this exact reason. Sometimes my southern drawl makes me have to look a word up in the dictionary to see how many syllables it says it has. There's also a pronunciation button if you look it up online.
But when you look at a place like Yahoo answers, they will say either 2 or 3 depending on where there from.
I usually just go with the Webster dictionary or dictionary.com though.

>>775
A stranger stares back
Fresh hues of purple and blue
Dead eyes and cold blood.

778 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-11 09:46 ID:tNqnhEkf [Del]

>>777 they're*

779 Name: jill : 2015-02-11 14:14 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

>>773You said to >>769 to reword the last line. I did it for him/her.I see no problem on my haiku.

>>777
Dead eyes and cold blood
That's what I get from fatigue
I really need sleep

780 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-11 17:00 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>779

You do not reword someone's haiku even if it was wrong. If you want to continue the chain, you go to last person who did it correctly; that's how it's always been. You must have noticed this before.

781 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-12 04:41 ID:xBiFr9GX [Del]

>>779
I really need sleep
Nightmares scratch my subconscious
Broken and tired

782 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2015-02-13 13:19 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]

Broken and tired.
She lays there, full of regret.
Never trust strangers.

783 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-14 00:34 ID:awbkRlP+ [Del]

Never trust strangers
Because they deceive and lie
Sadly, you're one too

784 Name: Daydream : 2015-02-14 09:34 ID:NigbeqeD [Del]

Sadly, you're one too
One blind, deaf and truth silent
Let your mind roam free

785 Name: kaida : 2015-02-14 13:28 ID:6XbqonuN [Del]

Let your mind roam free
In beautiful and sweet dreams
Ignoring the world

786 Name: Kokkuri-san : 2015-02-14 16:43 ID:hCt0IXut [Del]

Ignoring the world
The ocean waves drift calmly
There's no place like home

787 Name: Elucidator : 2015-02-14 17:09 ID:6lZpaF7A [Del]

There's no place like home
unless you live on the street
then every where's home

788 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-14 20:54 ID:McgOH1mq [Del]

"Then everywhere's home!"
She yelled at no one at all
She's a sad nomad

789 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-14 21:06 ID:2Jzko6PS [Del]

She's a sad nomad,
Fleeing those who will suffer
Due to her absence.

790 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-14 21:42 ID:McgOH1mq [Del]

Due to her absence
They looked through her history
It did not please them

791 Name: Jill : 2015-02-14 23:04 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

It did not please them
Its their fault for looking it
without permission

792 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-02-15 11:40 ID:NSw9VZSz [Del]

Without permission
What choice do we really have
There is no option

793 Name: Yugen!UhQ.rlWWhw : 2015-02-15 11:54 ID:wZXFYoMF [Del]

There is no option
that we have labelled 'failure'
you can do the thing

794 Name: Merla : 2015-02-15 13:15 ID:k54hRUph [Del]

You can do the thing
But if you are brave enough
You can do it twice

795 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-15 14:23 ID:DdU2Pl0f [Del]

You can do it twice
Don't worry it will not hurt...
Now she's an addict

796 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-15 23:47 ID:2Jzko6PS [Del]

Now she's an addict,
Society's little bitch,
A face to be scorned.

797 Name: valtystic : 2015-02-16 04:47 ID:e793WGFp [Del]

A face to be scorned
Scorned will always rhyme with corned
This is about corn

798 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-16 15:50 ID:tPWaM8mr [Del]

This is about corn
Children of the corn that is
Malachi scares me

799 Name: Shiskra : 2015-02-16 16:00 ID:9baJLsh2 [Del]

Malachi scares me
My very own soul quivers
Take away my fear

800 Name: ArczyFellow : 2015-02-16 21:25 ID:2VHGxr5Q [Del]

Take away my fear
For I can no longer bear
Your stupidity

801 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-16 23:11 ID:tPWaM8mr [Del]

Your stupidity
Is equal to my genius
Am I smart or dumb?

802 Name: Daydream : 2015-02-17 02:37 ID:NigbeqeD [Del]

Am I smart or dumb?
A question without answer
All is relative

803 Name: jill : 2015-02-17 09:19 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

All is relative
The earth, the sun, everything
Why cant you see it?

804 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-17 18:37 ID:/Gj0hQVl [Del]

Why can't you see it?
It's right in front of your face
Oblivious, much?

805 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-18 00:45 ID:bfzHtxEu [Del]

Oblivious much?
There's really only one cure,
Make it obvious.

806 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-18 19:40 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Make it obvious
Blinded by my want and need
Be mine or no one's.

807 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-02-19 18:42 ID:E1UOUZu9 [Del]

(Shrugs) I want to bump this... I guess I'll just continue from my own (there wasn't anything wrong with >>806, right?)

Be mine, or no one's
Resonating in the air
A choice that was not

808 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-19 19:04 ID:qttC748q [Del]

A choice that was not
Mine or yours to begin with
Sadly, life goes on

809 Name: the actor : 2015-02-20 16:36 ID:7Z+GKXz9 [Del]

sadly life goes on
Time pulls at our skin with age
time terrifies some

810 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-20 18:07 ID:kM1OAbdd [Del]

Time terrifies some
But to me it's amazing
It is infinite

811 Name: jill : 2015-02-21 21:53 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

It is infinite
forever is to much though
I want to end this

812 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-21 22:01 ID:YLGh236P [Del]

I want to end this
No one even cares for me
My life is worthless

813 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-02-22 03:37 ID:8qTt6ZOo [Del]

My life is worthless,
Unless it inspires others...
My life is worthless.

(I don't know if it's legal to use the same line, but I like this one. So if that's the case, here's an alternative)

My life is worthless,
Unless it inspires others.
Most lives are, somehow.

814 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-22 09:35 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

Most lives, are somehow
Worth while despite life's hardships;
Hope anchors the soul.

815 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-02-22 10:28 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>814 Da-yuuuum

Hope anchors the soul
Calamity's gales and tides
Firmly, you head on

816 Name: museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-02-22 15:27 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

firmly, you head on
towards the unknown future
shaping your own path

817 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-22 16:38 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

>>815 Thanks, took me so long make it more positive ^^

Shaping your own path
Your adventure is out there!
Chase dreams like the sun

818 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-22 21:43 ID:NOxogZA2 [Del]

Chase dreams like the sun
You will never reach them though
But at least you tried

819 Name: Luna Lodi !TMq/w.x4Ps : 2015-02-23 09:07 ID:ppPAgfeF [Del]

'But at least you tried,'
I said on the summit as
I gazed at the stars

820 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-23 17:15 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

I gazed at the stars
You know your place in the sky
With order and light

(Les Miserables anyone xP ??)

821 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-23 20:10 ID:LDrKEwMq [Del]

With order and light
We shall make our way through safe
Look to Polaris

822 Name: Butts :D !4ZeKtProWU : 2015-02-24 08:34 ID:t9xXjLoh [Del]

Look to Polaris,
for she will lead the way home.
Remember your name.

823 Name: Lavi : 2015-02-24 12:36 ID:5/49fUox [Del]

Remember your name
Never forget the lost ones
Little lost angels

824 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-24 19:06 ID:FXa4uLkN [Del]

Little lost angels
Don't know where they are going
Hell it seems to be

825 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-02-25 03:58 ID:RPHKqKbS [Del]

>>817
>>824
(Dayuuum. These two right here...)


Hell, it seems to be
Many tombs for the wicked
But why am I here?

826 Name: museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-02-25 14:34 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

but why am i here?
there is darkness in my heart
but i must find light

827 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-25 20:26 ID:yVd6+Nlm [Del]

But I must find light
Or else I'm trapped forever
Blind in this darkness

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829 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-25 20:31 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

Blind in the darkness
Why am I even in here?
Depressing haiku

830 Name: Magnolia : 2015-02-26 18:32 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Depressing haiku
Enough of this! Change the tone!
Dawn begins anew.

831 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-27 00:22 ID:PzC62rq0 [Del]

Dawn begins anew.
I wake. I go. I come back.
Sums up my whole day.

832 Name: Tree : 2015-02-27 02:57 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

sums up My whole day.
A seed has now been planted
Hey,Look! it's a Tree!!!

833 Name: Calliope !cRo/oHiFPs : 2015-02-27 08:54 ID:/6O0kF7I [Del]

Hey, Look! it's a Tree!!!
The tree bares forbidden fruit.
It tastes nostalgic.

834 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-02-27 15:12 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

it tastes nostalgic
i relive old memories
and i feel happy

835 Name: TheRisingShadow : 2015-02-27 16:16 ID:DvG6Z8t1 [Del]

and I feel happy
now that the sky is more clear
peace is here again

836 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-27 19:15 ID:JgcJfVIE [Del]

Peace is here again
But not for long everyone
War will come back soon

837 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-27 19:59 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

War will come back soon
History repeats itself
Forever Always

838 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-27 21:52 ID:JgcJfVIE [Del]

Forever Always
We all lie to each other
The cycle won't end

839 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-02-28 14:17 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

the cycle wont end
of love and hate, of madness
its the way we live

840 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-02-28 15:21 ID:x9Bx1q9P [Del]

It's the way we live
Doing the same thing each day
We're automatons

841 Name: Alice M. : 2015-02-28 19:09 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

We're automatons
Which is not true because that
Would be so creepy

842 Name: Kawaru Nagisa : 2015-02-28 22:44 ID:maTgZBf7 [Del]

Would be so creepy
If "ashes to ashes and
Dust to dust" took hold

843 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-01 14:32 ID:Dq0Luust [Del]

Dust to dust took hold
Of my empty, dying lungs
Don't smoke kids. It's bad.

844 Name: Alice M. : 2015-03-01 14:35 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

Don't smoke kids. It's bad.
The wise advise from Lovely
We should all take heed

845 Name: Mag : 2015-03-01 15:18 ID:UdBisR5O [Del]

We should all take heed
The curtain call's last warning
Love while you still can.

846 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-01 15:42 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

love while you still can
there is not much time left here
make the best of it

847 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-01 20:26 ID:rn/hXppM [Del]

Make the best of it
Because it will soon be gone
Love the little things

848 Name: Crossark : 2015-03-01 20:34 ID:vCcxueE9 [Del]

Love the little things.
Because you're a lolicon.
Smoke weed every day.

849 Name: PapaFranku : 2015-03-01 20:47 ID:0snIkhi2 [Del]

Smoke weed every day.
Because you are MLG.
Go wrek sum skrubs.

850 Name: Memori : 2015-03-01 23:29 ID:hud05Pm0 [Del]

Go wrek sum skrubs.
Is not proper English. So,
Let's Keep this Classy.

851 Name: Mag : 2015-03-02 06:26 ID:lSpwJAQm [Del]

"Let's keep this classy!
Harmonize your hips- your legs!
Feel your hearts unite..."

852 Name: SM-Rabbit : 2015-03-02 07:46 ID:Se4f6+qx [Del]

Feel your hearts unite.
You have more than one.
Sakura flowers.

853 Name: jill : 2015-03-02 10:51 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

Sakura Flowers
It's blooming beautifully
Nature is my love

854 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-02 15:55 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

nature is my love
its beautiful and peaceful
let it take its course

855 Name: Kimiko : 2015-03-02 18:43 ID:xa26SUq0 [Del]

Let it take its course
even through
the darkest of times

856 Post deleted by user.

857 Post deleted by user.

858 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-02 21:56 ID:L8yoFdb1 [Del]

>>856 wrong format

continuing from >>854

Let it take its course
The body is a great thing
Fart without a care

859 Name: GrainOfSalt : 2015-03-02 22:03 ID:CTqiP2U7 [Del]

Fart without a care
Burps will bring you to freedom
Break off your shackles

860 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-02 23:35 ID:L8yoFdb1 [Del]

Break off your shackles
Unless you like wearing them
You're a masochist

861 Name: Tree : 2015-03-03 02:07 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

you're a massochist,
But you're not the only one
Come along with me

862 Name: saito : 2015-03-03 10:38 ID:IcSUXXXd [Del]

Come along with me
Just make a step forward
It's only death


863 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-03 15:53 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

>>862 second line has only 6 and last line has only 4
here let me fix it

come along with me
just make a small step forward
it is only death

lets continue
----------------
it is only death
theres nothing to be scared of
greet it like a friend

864 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-03 17:56 ID:Rq8nMiXr [Del]

Greet it like a friend
It will make you seem polite
Now isn't that nice?

865 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-04 16:38 ID:POq3Z0FT [Del]

Now isn't that nice?
Your heart will just get broken
Never fall in love

866 Name: Beyond_Lycanthropy : 2015-03-04 18:45 ID:W1XbicZn [Del]

It's snowing on Mount Fuji

867 Name: Infinite : 2015-03-04 19:27 ID:TtpiFLRV [Del]

Never fall in love
for love bites
like a hungry tiger

868 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-04 20:33 ID:POq3Z0FT [Del]

>>866 what even?!
>>867 wrong format

Never fall in love
You will be hurt in the end
Don't want that, do you?

869 Name: EvoRulz : 2015-03-05 01:15 ID:i1W7OzjT [Del]

Don't want that, do you?
Forgetting the format
Well done Infinite

XD thought you were in literature? lol sorry 4 teasing >.<

870 Name: jill : 2015-03-05 01:47 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Well done infinite
He said sarcastically
To the next topic

871 Name: Mag : 2015-03-05 02:35 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>869 You also did it wrong. You did 5-6-5

"Don't want that, do you?"
But the world never listens.
To them, "no" means "yes".

872 Post deleted by user.

873 Name: Stepper !T6jypw2yR. : 2015-03-05 02:50 ID:lAqTZWnT [Del]

To them, "no" means "yes".
And to us, a "Yes" means "No"
Why is haiku so confusing?

874 Name: Mag : 2015-03-05 02:55 ID:tqjAPQOL [Del]

>>873 bruh... There's nothing confusing about 5-7-5.

Your last line's got 8.

875 Name: Crossark : 2015-03-05 18:27 ID:vCcxueE9 [Del]

>>874 Improper format. Allow me to fix that for you.
Bruh... There is nothing
Confusing about haiku.
Your last line's got 8.

876 Name: jill : 2015-03-05 19:18 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

>>875 Your not suppose to continue if the other line is a mistake. >>874 is just pointing out >>873 mistake. Meaning it wasn't suppose to be a haiku.

Continuing from >>871
To them, "no" means "yes"
What the heck is wrong with you?
You should check your brain

877 Name: Crossark : 2015-03-05 19:45 ID:vCcxueE9 [Del]

>>876 (I know, I was taking an opportunity to make a satirical statement on the strictness of the formatting and how easily an otherwise fine haiku could be trashed.)

878 Name: Coco : 2015-03-06 11:08 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>877 Welcome to world of haiku. >>875 had me in stitches btdubs

>>876
You should check your brain.
Why are your thoughts everywhere?
It's just a bullet.

879 Name: Alice M. : 2015-03-06 12:48 ID:Za+CeoaC [Del]

It's just a bullet.
This thread makes me want to laugh,
I still love haikus

880 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-06 15:18 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

i still love haikus
theyre easy to come up with
about anything

881 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-06 18:45 ID:r/jnwZRi [Del]

About anything
Is as much as I can say
Who cares anyway

882 Name: Arima Kishou : 2015-03-06 23:44 ID:c4KazF0H [Del]

Who cares anyway
A young adult at fourteen
He is now fifteen

883 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-07 00:54 ID:r/jnwZRi [Del]

He is now fifteen
But he doesn't feel different
How will sixteen feel?

884 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-07 12:38 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

how will sixteen feel?
the same and yet different
its an illusion

885 Name: Tree : 2015-03-07 17:07 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

It's an illusion
This reality is fake,
But, "I need your love,

886 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-07 17:10 ID:dvEOMgcr [Del]

But I need your love
Or else I will have nothing
Don't do this to me!

887 Post deleted by user.

888 Name: Anonymous : 2015-03-07 17:19 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

But- "I need your love."
Slipped words from cages within.
"I'm sorry," he said.

889 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-07 17:31 ID:dvEOMgcr [Del]

>>888 umm that's not how you do this. You're format is all right, but you're supposed to follow up from what I said on >>886

Next post please continue from >>886

890 Name: Alice M. : 2015-03-07 20:52 ID:3AeUuN6Y [Del]

Don't do this to me!
I said as I read the thread
Please learn to Haiku

891 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-07 22:23 ID:gyTPExJO [Del]

>>889 look at the time difference. I just thought on mine for too long before posting.

"Please learn to Haiku..."
Said whisperers of the site.
"Who goes there? Come out!"

892 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-08 15:29 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

"who goes there? come out!"
said the man while looking out
but there was no one..

893 Name: Eighteen : 2015-03-08 15:41 ID:oVyKm9p+ [Del]

but there was no one..
except 10 giraffe sized rabbits
"oh my" said the man

894 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-08 19:27 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

"Oh my" said the man
He wakes from his fever dream
Staring up and out

895 Name: Tree : 2015-03-09 11:46 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

Staring up and out,
Respect to the peeps at home,
Life is glorious

896 Name: Arima Kishou : 2015-03-09 12:49 ID:EaMrL3ro [Del]

Life is glorious,
We should live it carefully
Don't waste every thing

897 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-09 14:54 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

dont waste everything
not time nor the memories
keep moving forward

898 Name: Hoshi : 2015-03-09 17:18 ID:CPKKm1RP [Del]

keep moving forward
life will always get better
do not fear your fate

899 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-09 17:59 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

do not fear your fate
after all you decide it
future is your own

900 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-09 19:42 ID:sA/V1GDF [Del]

Future is your own
Not anybody else's
Do you understand

901 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-10 07:21 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Do you understand
"I wish I did" said the man
Shit, must make coffee

902 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-10 17:30 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

shit, must make coffee
im going to be late for work
said the sleepy man

903 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-10 18:28 ID:Zpr5jk+G [Del]

>>902 your second line has 8 syllables

Continuing from >>901

Shit, must make coffee
Or else I won't stay awake
I'm not productive

904 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-10 18:36 ID:cUbjxSEP [Del]

I'm not productive.
Tumblr. YouTube. Dollars. E-mail.
Yet, I should work first?

905 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-10 18:47 ID:Zpr5jk+G [Del]

>>904 umm isn't that 8 syllables in the second line or does Tumblr count as one???

906 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-10 19:09 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>905 Fuck nuggets. I shouldn't do this when I'm tired.

I'm not productive.
Tumblr. YouTube. Dollars. Mail.
Yet, I should work first?

907 Post deleted by user.

908 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-11 06:53 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Yet, I should work first?
Why should life grow tedious
When the world is new

909 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-11 09:04 ID:SVubiRKN [Del]

When the world is new
Everything it had before
Will just disappear

910 Name: viicky : 2015-03-11 15:10 ID:KTqYtt5y [Del]

Will just disappear
All my dreams memory
While the sun rises high

911 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-11 15:32 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

While the sun rises high
Another day, though too soon
Day gives way to night

912 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-11 16:09 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

day gives way to night
the moon is up, so am i
look a shooting star

913 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-11 16:41 ID:VLywYEhG [Del]

Look a shooting star
Should I even make a wish?
They never come true

914 Name: wolf-heart : 2015-03-12 01:34 ID:AEe6gYW0 [Del]

They never come true
I wish they did but never do
stupid shooting star

915 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-12 07:15 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Stupid shooting star
Superstitious malarkey
The best make their fate

916 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-12 09:36 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

The best make their fate;
Skies cry tears from their glory,
Stars bend to their will.

917 Name: jill : 2015-03-12 13:28 ID:HIN+O4Tw [Del]

Stars bend to their will.
The Gravitational force
Science is too cool!

918 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-12 14:56 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Science is too cool!
Still no hover cars, oh well
Life moves onward, man

919 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-12 16:14 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

life moves onward man
maybe in the near future
we will teleport

920 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-12 22:00 ID:0o2GOrhg [Del]

We will teleport
To France, China, Italy
Where to next my friends?

921 Name: Tree : 2015-03-13 02:21 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

Where to next my friends?
"let's go to outer space, dudes!"
but, I like the Earth

922 Post deleted by user.

923 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-13 06:53 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

But, I like the Earth
That precious mote of space dust
Whirling ever on

924 Name: Lofiq : 2015-03-13 10:22 ID:VzuqSKS3 [Del]

Whirling ever on
The calming wind, soothing me
And sleep did take hold

925 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-13 15:04 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

and sleep did take hold
falling into my dreamland
i can live again

926 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-13 17:15 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

I can live again
Newfound purpose, inner peace
All feels right once again

927 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-13 19:32 ID:Dkvk1dUI [Del]

>>926 your last line has six syllables

Continuing from >>925

I can live again
Another fresh breath of air
That is all I need

928 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-13 22:19 ID:E/vA+5+O [Del]

That is all I need
More uppity, snarky kids.
Early graves, it is.

929 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-13 23:35 ID:w0SX8o8A [Del]

Early graves it is
Said the mortician smiling
Death is beautiful

930 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-14 13:41 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

death is beautiful
the way they all disappear
paint everything red

931 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-14 13:47 ID:umJuaSt4 [Del]

Paint everything red
With the blood of all people
No, more genocide!

932 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-14 17:50 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

No, more genocide!
I'll cleanse the earth like the flood;
Bow to your new God.

933 Name: Alice M. : 2015-03-14 18:13 ID:nhguct9N [Del]

>>929 I laughed at this one, awesome job! ^^

Bow to your new God
For your guilt will be your past,
Says King Izaya

934 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-14 19:37 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Says King Izaya
He who watches with a grin
He loves all humans

935 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-15 00:20 ID:B8RUDRuw [Del]

He loves all humans
They are intriguing to him
What a strange fellow

936 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-15 13:28 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

what a strange fellow
he trolls everyone for fun
shizuo most often

937 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-15 18:48 ID:4CI6pqrk [Del]

Shizuo most often
Likes to throw vending machines
Ultra strength scares me

938 Name: The Listener : 2015-03-15 23:48 ID:6iua2V6h [Del]

Don't you find it strange
The constant running around
Will it ever end?

939 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-15 23:54 ID:I0D4H8n4 [Del]

>>938 that's not how this works. You don't just make one up you continue from the last post

Continuing from >>937

Ultra strength scares me
It's not natural at all
How's it possible?!

(Correct me if I'm wrong, but natural is three syllables, right? I know some people pronounce it natch-rul, but others pronounce it natch-ur-al)

940 Name: Arima Kishou : 2015-03-16 05:48 ID:c4KazF0H [Del]

How's it possible?!
We should ask Orihara
The info broker

941 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-16 06:51 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

The info broker
A cackling egotist
More enemy than friend

942 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-03-16 12:24 ID:n1o8GySq [Del]

>>941 5-6-6? Let me fix that:

The info broker
A talkative egotist
More foe than ally

943 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-16 16:42 ID:Xif2h5/i [Del]

More foe than ally
But is good to keep around
Our secret weapon

944 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-16 20:09 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Our secret weapon,
Mental instability,
Psychopaths, Unite!

945 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-16 20:16 ID:Xif2h5/i [Del]

Psychopaths unite!
Oh, no this is a bad thing
Who do we call now?

946 Name: NPC : 2015-03-17 00:27 ID:5xWibG+I [Del]

Who do we call now?
Tis no one available!
Fate has come to this.

947 Name: Lofiq : 2015-03-17 02:19 ID:U+K2ptjd [Del]

Fate has come to this.
No longer bounds us to it.
How do we stop now?

948 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-17 06:56 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

How do we stop now?
A rhetorical question
We know we cannot

949 Name: NPC : 2015-03-17 08:41 ID:5xWibG+I [Del]

We know we cannot
Yet we still go on pursuit
It's human nature

950 Name: Xzatoichi : 2015-03-17 13:22 ID:d/yIJtwL [Del]

It is human nature
What is human nature
Exactly that

951 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-17 16:04 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

"It's human nature."
"I still hate awkward boners-"
"Yeah, you're supposed to."

952 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-17 16:05 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Btw skipped >>950 bc it's 6-6-4.

953 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-17 16:22 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

yeah youre supposed to
that is what the body does
even if its weird

954 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-17 18:32 ID:uwIIqe64 [Del]

Even if it's weird
You still have to deal with it
Got a problem, sir?

955 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-17 19:14 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Got a problem, sir?
Not really, but I'm no "sir".
I have tits, jackass!

(Dedicated to my time in NYC being constantly mistaken as a boy.)

956 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-18 07:40 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

I have tits, jackass!
Well, I don't personally
The last person does

957 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-18 10:32 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

The last person does
Although the person hides it
I really don't mind

958 Name: Lavi : 2015-03-18 12:44 ID:5/49fUox [Del]

I really don't mind
I seriously don't care
Stop talking to me

959 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-18 15:02 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Stop talking to me
Wait, I'm sorry, come back please
Shit, now I'm alone

960 Name: Anonymous : 2015-03-18 15:46 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Shit, now I'm alone
Time to go searching for friends
Reality stinks

961 Name: Leigha Moscove !9tSeSkSEz2 : 2015-03-18 16:47 ID:qvldaLOh [Del]

Reality stinks
This is why I like to read
I really love books

962 Post deleted by user.

963 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-18 17:31 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

i really love books
they help me escape real life
when it sucks the most

964 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-18 17:51 ID:w0mM0Gd5 [Del]

When it sucks the most
I try to make myself glad
It never works though

965 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-18 17:58 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

It never works though
Time for a new strategy
I'm going outside

966 Name: Crossark : 2015-03-18 18:28 ID:6Jr+DIVn [Del]

I'm going outside,
Then to a local café
To meet the best girl.

967 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-18 20:11 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

To meet the best girl
I require a bit of luck
Here goes everything

968 Name: MortalShadow : 2015-03-18 21:16 ID:bpPAzDJJ [Del]

Here goes everything
But with nothing left to lose
Nothing holds me back

969 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-18 23:07 ID:sawidnJ4 [Del]

Nothing holds me back
Just these invisible chains
Silent prisoner

970 Name: NPC : 2015-03-19 00:45 ID:5xWibG+I [Del]

Silent prisoner
No words ever escapes her
Bidding silently

971 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-19 06:53 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Bidding silently
This eBay auction is hell
Just five minutes left

972 Name: NPC : 2015-03-19 09:04 ID:5xWibG+I [Del]

Just five minutes left
Time's slowly ticking away
The end of the test

973 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-19 14:52 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

the end of the test
the bell rings and we run out
its spring break bitches

974 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-19 18:06 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

It's spring break, bitches
Happiness for a short time
Make the most of it

975 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-20 00:13 ID:IFTHbdQD [Del]

Make the most of it
You won't get this chance again
Once in a lifetime

976 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-20 00:46 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Once in a lifetime
Infants born into this world
In the end, adieu

977 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-20 07:43 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

In the end, adieu
A farewell to my troubles
They're your problem now

978 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-20 17:35 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

theyre your problem now
dont feel bad youll do just fine
but youre on your own

979 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-20 17:36 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

They're your problem now
But you can just discard them
I really don't care

980 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-20 17:42 ID:Ov7FFYbv [Del]

I really don't care
If I cannot get a date
Single forever

981 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-20 19:27 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Single forever
I prefer companionship
Love is in the air

982 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-20 23:04 ID:5KyQxBY7 [Del]

Love is in the air
No it is not. What a lie!
Suffocate liar!

983 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-20 23:26 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Suffocate liar!
Sir, I'm merely stating facts!
I am innocent!

984 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-20 23:36 ID:5KyQxBY7 [Del]

I am innocent
But they tell me I'm guilty
It's all injustice

985 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-21 02:29 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

It's all injustice
Dollars will create balance
Human harmony

986 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-21 07:37 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Human harmony
No more borders, no more hate
I wish it were true

987 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-21 12:36 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

I wish it were real
Actions over wishing, please
Ripples create waves

988 Name: museless : 2015-03-21 12:44 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

Ripples create waves
domino effect takes place
bring change to the world

989 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-21 13:53 ID:pWCKULsP [Del]

Bring change to the world
Before it falls apart now
Be an activist!

990 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-21 17:54 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Be an activist!
Be the change you want to see
The world is waiting

991 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-21 18:35 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

the world is waiting
everything is possible
just go and do it

992 Post deleted by user.

993 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-21 18:42 ID:NlrQBLyU [Del]

Just go and do it
Hey, don't tell me what to do!
I'll do as I please

994 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-22 01:11 ID:NCul3o+G [Del]

I'll do as I please
Without anyone's consent
I don't give a damn!

995 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-22 03:07 ID:YCZRG43p (Image: 769x595 png, 152 kb) [Del]

src/1427011679455.png: 769x595, 152 kb
I don't give a damn!
Woah, we've got a badass here!
I raise my hands up!

996 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-22 03:56 ID:NCul3o+G [Del]

>>995 lol, I'm laughing so hard right now XD

I raise my hands up
Please don't shoot me officer
He still did it though

997 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-22 04:16 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

>>996 i try :)

He still did it though
I'm incapacitated
Someone, patch me up

998 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-22 14:14 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

someone patch me up
need a medic over here
i owe you one bro

999 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-22 15:19 ID:YIAIJpUX [Del]

I owe you one bro
For helping me get that girl
She's a total babe

1000 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-22 20:09 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

She's a total babe
Wait, dude looks like a lady
Oh, what have I done?

1001 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-22 20:43 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Oh, what have I done?
My potatoes and peas mixed.
Shameful display, sir!

1002 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-22 21:36 ID:YIAIJpUX [Del]

Shameful display, sir!
How dare you take off your pants
In front of children!!!

1003 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-23 02:16 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

In front of children
Never eat chocolate sweets
They will devour you

1004 Name: rivaillis : 2015-03-23 04:51 ID:Xt/gGNIe [Del]

They will devour you
And you'll enjoy the pain of being
Someone else's joy

1005 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-23 06:51 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Someone else's joy
To make others happier
Is the best feeling

1006 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-23 08:22 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Is the best feeling
Finding random pocket cash?
It feels amazing!

1007 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-23 18:01 ID:Tn9lpsMi [Del]

>>1004 is wrong And you'll en-joy the pain of be-ing. 9 syllables dude!!! sorry to >>1005 and >>1006 who formatted this correctly.

Continuing from >>1003

They will devour you
The monsters under your bed
Now they're in your head

1008 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-23 18:52 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

now theyre in your head
slowly breaking sanity
it is too late now

1009 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-23 19:24 ID:Tn9lpsMi [Del]

It is too late now
For you to win back my heart
Better luck next time

1010 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-23 20:02 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

better luck next time
or preferably never
that is the harsh truth

1011 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-23 20:35 ID:Tn9lpsMi [Del]

That is the harsh truth
But I will never listen
I'm in denial

1012 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-24 00:04 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

I'm in denial
My last doughnut was stolen
Help me locate it

1013 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-24 00:33 ID:pRIP1PNv [Del]

Help me locate it
It has been gone for eight days
I am so worried

1014 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-24 01:11 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

I am so worried
It is probably moldy
No doughnut for me

1015 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-24 07:13 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

No doughnut for me
The saddest breakfast ever
At least there's coffee

1016 Name: Euro : 2015-03-24 08:05 ID:dnjINlxr [Del]

At least there's coffee
When there was none before
The days I slept in

1017 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-24 10:27 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

>>1016 5-6-5 so no good.

>>1015
At least there's coffee
Just waiting to be consumed
Source of energy

1018 Name: Lavi : 2015-03-24 12:36 ID:5/49fUox [Del]

Source of energy
Water, fire, wind, and earth
The elements rule

1019 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-24 13:55 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

the elements rule
but only the avatar
can master them all

1020 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-24 17:28 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Can master them all
Bow before me, you losers
I'm such a jackass

1021 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-24 18:07 ID:ikNSkDxX [Del]

I'm such a jackass
Just like those guys on TV
Light my ass on fire!!!

1022 Name: HeartbeatKnight : 2015-03-24 19:24 ID:lXLiPH+c [Del]

>>!021 That was funny.

1023 Name: jill : 2015-03-25 01:04 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

>>1021 Is 'fire' 1 syllable or 2? If so, you've got the last line wrong.

1024 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-25 01:32 ID:IZ2ZC6Pc [Del]

>>1023 hmm, you're right. When I was writing it I considered it 1 syllable. I'll change it

>>1021 (revised)
I'm such a jackass
Just like those guys on TV
Light my ass to flames

1025 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-25 08:50 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

>>1024 fire can either be one or two syllables, apparently.

1026 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-25 10:49 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

Light my ass to flames
Wait, woah, don't do that to me
I was just joking

1027 Name: Tree : 2015-03-25 11:30 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

I was just joking,
really man, i was being
sarcastic buddy

1028 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-25 15:30 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

sarcastic, buddy
not everyone gets sarcasm
a bunch of jokers

1029 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-25 18:27 ID:ZXmhSNdK [Del]

A bunch of jokers
They are all stuck in one room
Is that even safe?

1030 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-25 18:57 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

is that even safe?
the jokes are out of control
we need help quick please

1031 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-25 19:21 ID:ZXmhSNdK [Del]

We need help quick please
Send out an S.O.S soon
Hopefully we're found

1032 Name: Akio-Chan : 2015-03-25 20:39 ID:v5lWzacd [Del]

Hopefully we're found
In this terrifying room
Please help, come quickly

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1034 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-25 20:44 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

hopefully we're found
the food is running low now
its getting darker..

1035 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-25 20:45 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

Please help, come quickly
Actually, disregard that
My mommy is here

1036 Name: Jack Hunter : 2015-03-25 20:56 ID:YCZRG43p [Del]

>>1035 ignore old >.<

1037 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-25 21:38 ID:ZXmhSNdK [Del]

continuing from >>1034

it's getting darker...
I don't think we'll find shelter
Can we still survive?

1038 Name: HerpTheWriter : 2015-03-25 21:44 ID:kbiptdl2 [Del]

Can we still survive?
I find my sanity says
"Hope is waning fast."

1039 Name: jill : 2015-03-25 23:54 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

Hope is waning fast
People panicking again
Just chill out will you?

1040 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-26 00:25 ID:9olCFEQm [Del]

"Just chill out will you?"
He didn't like the reply
Now he is butt hurt

1041 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-26 07:01 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Now he is butt hurt
I just say it like it is
No need for butt hurt

1042 Name: SamiAm !odF8uxBYDg : 2015-03-26 11:37 ID:t29ojCwl [Del]

No need for butt hurt
Free bagels solve everything
Add some Nutella

1043 Name: Izis : 2015-03-26 17:55 ID:8qQTnxos [Del]

Add some Nutella
To a freshly toasted bread
It's so delicious

1044 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-26 18:03 ID:4DSILLTU [Del]

It's so delicious
That pizza is not for you
Only for my mouth

1045 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-26 18:30 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

only for my mouth
i taste the sweetness of flesh
im a cannibal

1046 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-26 18:39 ID:4DSILLTU [Del]

I'm a cannibal
And every part tastes so good
What's your favorite piece?

1047 Name: FellbeatKnight : 2015-03-26 18:46 ID:ONAWfu/K [Del]

I just want, to fucking kill.

1048 Name: FellbeatKnight : 2015-03-26 18:47 ID:ONAWfu/K [Del]

Lead is in the baby food.

1049 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-26 19:06 ID:4DSILLTU [Del]

>>1047>>1048 how is that even a haiku??? =_=

lol i'm just going to continue my own >>1046

What's your favorite piece?
Starry Starry Night of course
It's Vincent Van Gogh!!!

1050 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-26 20:48 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

its vincent van gogh!!
hes a little bit crazy
but his art is good

1051 Name: Ameh : 2015-03-26 23:06 ID:B9DeVPtp [Del]

I guess I'll continue in lovely's order:1048
the daylight hits me
it is the grace of morning
but i will eat lunch

1052 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-26 23:36 ID:OF6xVC3q [Del]

>>1051 what do you mean in my order??? Umm, that's not how this works -_-

continuing from >>1050

But his art is good
Yeah but I like Da Vinci
Who cares anyway?

1053 Name: Dj-3pic : 2015-03-27 01:08 ID:EH9ayMB9 [Del]

Can't make a haiku
well now here's what you should do
copy this and paste

1054 Name: Izis : 2015-03-27 04:46 ID:8qQTnxos [Del]

Copy this and paste
That's how I do my homework
At least most of it

1055 Name: vvolts : 2015-03-27 10:13 ID:jwNr8r7e [Del]

At least most of it
Believe there is hope
which become a traffic light
during the day and night

1056 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-27 11:18 ID:kTkKZOcJ [Del]

>>1055 You...have no idea what a Haiku is...do you.

Starting from here >>1054

At least most of it
But not all. After all, Love
Hearts are a rare thing

1057 Name: Hibiscus : 2015-03-27 13:25 ID:p6SCRV6f [Del]

Hearts are a rare thing.
They swell, then wither, then die.
Oh, how delicate.

1058 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-27 13:44 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

oh, how delicate
such sweet tragedy it is
just how weak we are

1059 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-27 15:39 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Just how weak we are
Do you even lift? I don't
Too much effort, man

1060 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-27 18:50 ID:KEBNCuCB [Del]

"Too much effort, man"
Replied my slacker partner
Here we go again

1061 Name: ksron !ZkPP6Ji8iw : 2015-03-27 20:52 ID:udO/0BE0 [Del]

Here we go again,
to explore the horizons
and learn how to see.

(Doing another one because I don't want to start the last sentence with "and", but I like it and don't want to delete it. :P)

And learn how to see
and feel, experience life
Sky to Sea — What awe!

1062 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-27 23:55 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

Sky to sea. What awe!
It's almost like they connect
Different shades of blue

1063 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-28 06:24 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Different shades of blue
Until the sun sets and gives
Nighttime and the moon

1064 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-28 15:12 ID:Knsub/Fs [Del]

Nighttime and the moon
Quite a beautiful image
I'm a lunatic

1065 Name: jill : 2015-03-29 02:56 ID:aZCuZUuJ [Del]

I'm a lunatic
I stab everyone to death
Now I wish I didn't

1066 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-29 03:00 ID:Zyo6eAbx [Del]

>>1065 i'm always unsure about contractions. I guess from now on they'll be considered one or two syllables depending on how the writer thought. ^_^

Now I wish I didn't
Because now I miss them all
I want them back please!

1067 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-29 10:03 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>1065>>1066 It's two syllables. It says so on dictionary.com as well. I found this from an English teacher: I was teaching English and we came to a part in a lesson about syllables in contracted English negatives. The book listed can't, don't, weren't, and aren't as one syllable words (I only have a problem with the classification of the bold contractions) and doesn't, didn't, isn't, and wasn't as two syllable words.

Hold your hand under your chin and say the word slowly. Every time your chin hits your hand it's one syllable. I have been told that it doesn't work every time but it works most of the time.

1068 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-29 10:16 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

I want them back please!
Precious moments, long since past
A nostalgiac feel

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1070 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-29 11:13 ID:dHpKFbzN [Del]

>>1069 Hell no.

It's the HAIKU CHAIN thread, man!

And you guys needed to have started from >>1064

I'm a lunatic...
Is it the Stockholm Syndrome?
Why does he love me?

1071 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-29 11:36 ID:Mr96cl1b [Del]

>>1070 but why start at >>1064 someone else already continued correctly???

*sigh* whatever

Why does he love me?
When I am not even nice
He could do better

1072 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-03-29 12:25 ID:Qltxv0wd [Del]

>>1071 Because "didn't" is two syllables (>>1067). I'm not really sure how "weren't" and "aren't" are one syllable words though, it's clearly "wer-ent" and "ar-ent". I can however agree that if enough people have continued correctly on something that was wrong, maybe you should just go with it, otherwise we'd have to continue from >>1052 (>>1053 is just some random copypasta haiku), maybe even an earlier one. But in the words of Lovely: "*sigh* whatever".

He could do better
That's what he thought to himself
But it was a risk

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1074 Name: EJM : 2015-03-29 12:55 ID:EF9yHHs7 [Del]

But it was a risk
now he is in the abyss
waiting for a love

1075 Name: EJM : 2015-03-29 12:57 ID:EF9yHHs7 [Del]

He hates las vegas
drowning in peoples money
he hates las vegas!

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1077 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-29 14:53 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

>>1072 right. Enough ppl. It was just one person. But otherwise, we've always started back from the last good one. Always.
Always.
If you guys want to change, that's fine.

And >>1075, you did it wrong. It's a Haiku CHAIN, man. That means "waiting for a love should've been the first sentence of your next haiku.

Waiting for a love
Casting my rod out to sea
Please, no boots this time.

1078 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-29 15:00 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

please no boots this time
i'd like to catch something good
maybe great white shark

1079 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-29 20:32 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Maybe great white shark
Great white sharknado? Oh no.
Death by crappy trope

1080 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-29 20:47 ID:V4wLgbc+ [Del]

Death by crappy trope
That is why I do not write
Because it's all shit

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1082 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-30 07:47 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

Because it's all shit
Uncultured swine like pure trash
2 hipster 4 you

1083 Name: Magnolia!2ipznOcc5g : 2015-03-30 09:29 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

"2 hipster 4 you!"
I read the wall's graffiti...
Lord, please, take me now.

1084 Name: ____ !HInKxu8cQQ : 2015-03-30 15:19 ID:MfnzMXQJ [Del]

Lord, please, take me now.( :'[ )
Devil done sold my soul last night ( D: )
Lovely needs more wine! ( :D )

1085 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-30 17:05 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

lovely needs more wine
to drink our troubles away
drown in sweet pleasure

1086 Name: Magnolia : 2015-03-30 21:35 ID:ab76+gX8 [Del]

Drown in sweet pleasure
Alleviating past sins
The knife cuts deeper.

1087 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-30 22:48 ID:6G0hR097 [Del]

The knife cuts deeper
Inside of the warm pink flesh
The blood is oozing

1088 Name: ____ !HInKxu8cQQ : 2015-03-31 00:53 ID:MfnzMXQJ [Del]

The blood is oozing
The feelings are lifted
From all this boozing

1089 Name: Enigami : 2015-03-31 07:15 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

From all this boozing
Still not inebriated
My tab is too high

1090 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-03-31 17:18 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

my tab is too high
but i dont care anymore
you only live once

1091 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-31 18:57 ID:/sg92AQQ [Del]

>>1088 your second line is 6 syllables The feel-ings are lift-ed

The blood is oozing
And it's hurting so damn bad
Will anyone help?

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1093 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-03-31 23:07 ID:qAli280r [Del]

[Is this good 5,7,5 ya'll :p]

Help isn't coming
I'm laying here all alone
This life was short lived

1094 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-03-31 23:50 ID:lztiisJS [Del]

>>1093 you're fine ^_^

This life was short lived
I could have done so much more
My life is regret

1095 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 00:46 ID:qAli280r [Del]

>>1094 thank you ^~^

My life is regret
Then you appeared before me
You gave me meaning

1096 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 00:55 ID:lztiisJS [Del]

You gave me meaning
And that is why I'm in love
It just hurts so bad

1097 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 01:06 ID:qAli280r [Del]

It just hurts so bad
Seeing you with another
My heart can't take this

1098 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-01 06:47 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

My heart can't take this
Fragility with despair
A sickening sight

1099 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 09:00 ID:qAli280r [Del]

A sickening sight
Haunting my dreams endlessly
Will it ever end

1100 Name: vonBismarck : 2015-04-01 09:05 ID:jlJT2IwT [Del]

Will it ever end
All the pain and suffering
That now plagues the world

1101 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-01 12:58 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

That now plagues the world
Grim reaper is coming down
Just to say hello

1102 Name: ____ !HInKxu8cQQ : 2015-04-01 16:25 ID:MfnzMXQJ [Del]

>>1091 Woops!

Just to say hello
I wait at your window, quite
Hoping you see me

1103 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-04-01 17:14 ID:ZH34KJh6 [Del]

hoping you see me
standing by your side, always
notice me senpai

1104 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 18:07 ID:qAli280r [Del]

Notice me Senpai
I confess it all to you
My feelings are real

1105 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 18:37 ID:BnqiIlgT [Del]

My feelings are real
And then we will be married
Oh no game over

1106 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 19:36 ID:qAli280r [Del]

Oh no game over
Slain in a world of pixels
I forgot to save

1107 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 19:44 ID:BnqiIlgT [Del]

I forgot to save
And I had played for so long
The struggle is real!

1108 Name: ____ !HInKxu8cQQ : 2015-04-01 19:57 ID:MfnzMXQJ [Del]

The struggle is real!
Where is my mechsuit, damnit?
It never stays put.

1109 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 20:03 ID:BnqiIlgT [Del]

It never stays put
That damn cat always runs off
When will he come back?

1110 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-01 20:18 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

"When will he come back?"
She asked the man sullenly
"Never, I'm afraid"

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1112 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-01 20:24 ID:qAli280r [Del]

Never, I'm afraid
Afraid to return back home
Fear has taken me

1113 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 20:26 ID:BnqiIlgT [Del]

Fear has taken me
Enveloping me in this
In all this darkness

1114 Name: ____ !HInKxu8cQQ : 2015-04-01 21:05 ID:MfnzMXQJ [Del]

In all this darkness
who ever new dark could be bright
despair so vivid

1115 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-01 22:46 ID:AbxRnMXm [Del]

Despair so vivid
It is like I can touch it
I want to feel more

1116 Name: EvoRulz : 2015-04-02 00:05 ID:i1W7OzjT [Del]

I want to feel more
Apathetic existance
am I dead inside?


1117 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-02 00:19 ID:AbxRnMXm [Del]

Am I dead inside?
No internal organs left?
This doesn't feel right...

1118 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-02 03:23 ID:qAli280r [Del]

This doesn't feel right
I have become transparent
What is happening?

1119 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-02 06:49 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

What is happening?
The world shifts beneath my feet
It's all over now

1120 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-04-02 16:37 ID:0qNImpGM [Del]

its all over now
old me is gone forever
time to start anew

1121 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-02 18:00 ID:R2oDNB1I [Del]

Time to start anew
Just give me a second chance
Won't do it again

1122 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-02 19:17 ID:qAli280r [Del]

Won't do it again
Is what children always say
Such an upfront lie

1123 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-02 19:56 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Such an upfront lie
We are not alone out here
The truth is out there

1124 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-02 22:35 ID:4a0fM4Fq [Del]

The truth is out there
But we are too blind to see
Open up your eyes

1125 Name: Admiral Aki : 2015-04-02 22:45 ID:vXvDbr/Y [Del]

Open up your eyes
Look upon the visage, black
Under truth's facade

1126 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-02 23:06 ID:4a0fM4Fq [Del]

Under truth's facade
There is a mountain of lies
Uncover them soon

1127 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-03 07:51 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Uncover them soon
This autopsy must commence
Cause of death: unknown

1128 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-03 11:41 ID:johGi0Go [Del]

Cause of death: unknown
Even after the big search
It's still a puzzle

1129 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-03 18:00 ID:i92UQ3Mb [Del]

It's still a puzzle
How the mind of a girl works
I just say "Fuck it"

1130 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-03 20:46 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

I just say "fuck it"
Nobody has time to think
Just acting at will

1131 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-03 20:48 ID:i92UQ3Mb [Del]

Just acting at will
Is what most little kids do
They should stop and think

1132 Name: SamiAm !odF8uxBYDg : 2015-04-04 02:24 ID:iqzpJfbm [Del]

They should stop and think
About how they left the world
As their souls unfurled

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1134 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-04 03:01 ID:GwbKDbJl [Del]

As their souls unfurled
Their judgement was decided
For better or worse.

1135 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-04 07:56 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

For better or worse
We can make it work, I swear
These things just take time

1136 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-04-04 14:00 ID:0qNImpGM [Del]

these things just take time
you need a lot of patience
to bake a good pie

1137 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-04 14:23 ID:k1PXGzda [Del]

To bake a good pie
Make sure you follow the rules
Please do not burn it

1138 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-04 17:30 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Please do not burn it
If you do, you will be shunned
For it is shameful

1139 Name: Tree : 2015-04-04 17:46 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

For it is shameful
yes, to be you in public.
you're weird, That is why

1140 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-04 18:24 ID:k1PXGzda [Del]

>>1139 so I pronounce weird with two syllables like we-ird, but I looked it up and it said 1 so I guess it's ok.

You're weird. That is why
No one will understand you
It's okay. Me too.

1141 Name: Admiral Aki : 2015-04-04 23:26 ID:kH6wNDdu [Del]

It's okay. Me too.
After all, who lives without
Holding lies as lights

1142 Name: aristomache : 2015-04-05 01:13 ID:FW3K8fof [Del]

Holding lies as lights
Yet we walk, always forward
Do not cringe away

1143 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-05 04:38 ID:/uFDhzIl [Del]

Do not cringe away
May you emerge from your shell
To carve a new path

1144 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-05 09:44 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

To carve a new path
you must first relinquish hate
to reach redemption

1145 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-05 10:14 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

To reach redemption
I can't live with this disgrace
For absolution!

1146 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-05 11:17 ID:NroBWi3V [Del]

For absolution
We sinners wish the most of
God shall grant it soon

1147 Name: Kuusou!v4RRDXulH2 : 2015-04-06 06:06 ID:3Qsq6l2j [Del]

God shall grant it soon
That which you pray for each day
He's mysterious

1148 Name: Ban Redtools : 2015-04-06 07:08 ID:PCwUt3az [Del]

"Eat Russian Sushi"

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1150 Name: Handsome Man : 2015-04-06 07:14 ID:PCwUt3az [Del]

Eat russian sushi yo
Its good for you
Dont fight yo

1151 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-06 09:39 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Right, so I'll start from >>1147 since they were the last one to actually follow the chain.
He's mysterious
Always hiding in plain sight
No wallflower, though

1152 Name: tuturu : 2015-04-06 10:58 ID:PCwUt3az [Del]

funny ppl though lol

No wallflower, though
I never tried sushi
Fighting isn't good :P

1153 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-06 14:30 ID:vIYXAJxb [Del]

Fighting isn't goo
It just makes more hate and pain
I'm a pacifist

1154 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-04-06 16:57 ID:0qNImpGM [Del]

im a pacifist
all i want is peace you know
it may never come..

1155 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-06 21:56 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

It may never come
the reborn world that I seek.
But, I will persist.

1156 Name: Tree : 2015-04-06 22:45 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

(>>1140, Hey, you're right, if you put it that way, it does seem like 2 syllables but its not... Weird, huh.)
It may never come...
But for now, i am hungry
To Jack In The Box!!!

1157 Name: Tree : 2015-04-06 22:48 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

(Ignore 1156... did not refresh while i thought) :(
But, I will Persist
to create the peace that i,
that, which i wish for

1158 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-06 23:03 ID:vIYXAJxb [Del]

That which I wish for
Is soon forgotten by all
I want to be heard

1159 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-07 12:23 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

I want to be heard
I want to be remembered
Not just fade away

1160 Name: Museless !.tN39mOSYw : 2015-04-07 17:34 ID:0qNImpGM [Del]

not just fade away
into the void quietly
i am here, right here

1161 Name: Paracosm : 2015-04-07 17:46 ID:PI32fjC3 [Del]

I am here, right here
Or at least that's what I say
Lying till the end

1162 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-07 18:26 ID:3CmTUHHM [Del]

Lying till the end
And I don't care anymore
The truth is not real!

1163 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-07 18:27 ID:3CmTUHHM [Del]

Ok forget >>1162 I guess real is two syllables ^_^;;

Lying till the end
And I don't care anymore
The truth is just fake!

1164 Name: aristomache : 2015-04-07 20:18 ID:93iMqvhk [Del]

The truth is just fake!
Or simply out of my reach?
I cannot fathom

1165 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-07 20:36 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

I cannot fathom
What the universe has planned
I'll enjoy the ride

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1167 Name: Enma Ii : 2015-04-07 21:28 ID:k7phsGVY [Del]

Maybe it's nothing
Should I finally leave now?
Or stay in the dark?

1168 Name: VitrealleAurora!9mbq5YNMp2 : 2015-04-07 21:34 ID:eQZalv+n [Del]

Or stay in the dark?
the shadows whisper questions
I don't have answers

1169 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-07 21:43 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

I don't have answers
I'm telling the truth, I swear!
He wouldn't tell me

1170 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-08 01:03 ID:7ebbbQ63 [Del]

He wouldn't tell me
If he was a gentleman
Chivalry's not dead

1171 Name: Corvus : 2015-04-08 04:47 ID:AigmSdL8 [Del]

Chivalry's not dead
But knights in armor are
And their kings too

1172 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-08 05:15 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

(That's only four syllables.)
And their kings, too, shall
surprise us; King Arthur is
a girl, it turns out.

1173 Name: Magnolia : 2015-04-08 07:44 ID:KdtjTDkc [Del]

You don't...change...their poem. You use the last correct poem.

From >>1170

Chivalry's not dead
Sweep up the broken pieces
It's just the wrong guy.

1174 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-08 11:18 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

It's just the wrong guy
"It should've been me," he says
Too little too late

1175 Name: Why not !LiFn7/Wis. : 2015-04-08 11:42 ID:dYNBaE1E [Del]

Too little too late
But it's something I can't hate
Cause I need a date

1176 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-08 12:33 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

Cause I need a date
And you're standing right there, so
Just say yes, okay?

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1178 Name: Rancho : 2015-04-08 14:08 ID:+c5XwYVf [Del]

Just say yes, okay?
And I'll be yours completely,
Till thy end is nigh

1179 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-08 15:33 ID:NsFmgTjk [Del]

"Till thy end is nigh"
I hate this Shakespeare talk
Speak modern day English!

(Shakespeare is three syllables right?! "Shake-spee-er" that's how I pronounce it)

1180 Name: Dawg : 2015-04-08 16:36 ID:+c5XwYVf [Del]

Speak modern day English! --- 6?
Yo my nigga he ain't care,
Who gives a shit? foo!

1181 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-08 16:41 ID:NsFmgTjk [Del]

>>1180 you shouldn't have continued from mine, sorry about that.

Continuing from >>1178

"Till thy end is nigh"
I hate this Shakespeare talk
Speak modern English

1182 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-08 18:52 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Speak modern English
With all dat slang n' shit, brah
And lots of cussing

1183 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-08 20:08 ID:NsFmgTjk [Del]

And lots of cussing
Used by all the idiots
Might as well not talk

1184 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-08 22:15 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

Might as well not talk
Over such senseless chatter
I can't stand the crowd

1185 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-09 01:05 ID:gRudAhkK [Del]

I can't stand the crowd
This social anxiety
It is hard to speak

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1187 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-09 04:37 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

It is hard to speak
I feel like I am drowning
in the deep silence

1188 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-09 07:15 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

In the deep silence
A noise erupts from someone
Next: embarrassment

1189 Name: PrototypeX !0UZD1OR/j. : 2015-04-09 07:16 ID:eCBDGJt4 [Del]

In the deep silence
The demon king wails out loud
Bring me a cheesecake

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1191 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-04-09 12:32 ID:BorQLZQN [Del]

>>1189 Sorry, but you were a minute too late

Continuing from >>1188

Next: Embarrassment
Later: Humiliation
Reality shows...

1192 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-09 12:44 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

Reality shows...
that things don't always work out.
Wish I could see you.

1193 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-09 16:19 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Wish I could see you
But you're so very far, now.
The good ones die young.

1194 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-09 18:22 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

The good ones die young
Nice guys always finish last
Leave behind the weak

1195 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-09 21:46 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

Leave behind the weak.
People say that, but they can't
Show me something strong.

1196 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-09 22:23 ID:X+1EKp4K [Del]

Show me something strong
Through the struggles of our life
You don't have to cry

1197 Name: Toastywafflz !qVs0Vq85og : 2015-04-10 00:46 ID:jmCFeFnq [Del]

You don't have to cry
The other way is still there
Stay by my side now

1198 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-10 00:50 ID:X+1EKp4K [Del]

Stay by my side now
I'll protect you with my might
Don't worry darling

1199 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-10 01:51 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Don't worry darling,
It was only a nightmare.
All will be just fine.

1200 Name: Kito : 2015-04-10 02:21 ID:VeEI5b5c [Del]

All will be just fine
You'll be dead soon anyway
Might as well enjoy

1201 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-10 02:30 ID:X+1EKp4K [Del]

Might as well enjoy
All that life has to offer
You only live once

1202 Name: Toastywafflz !qVs0Vq85og : 2015-04-10 03:30 ID:jmCFeFnq [Del]

You only live once
The cherished soul blossoms free
Remain genuine

1203 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-10 06:47 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Remain genuine
Pretenders are always sad
Be honest, always

1204 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-10 09:01 ID:CPhKIBgB [Del]

Be honest, always.
Lies, like fire, are not toys.
You'll burn in the end.

1205 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-10 09:43 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

You'll burn in the end
if you sit on the bonfire.
Don't be a rump roast.

1206 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-10 11:09 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

Don't be a rump roast.
I'm hungry, but won't eat that.
Feed me things I like!

1207 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-10 12:02 ID:xFoUBVQj [Del]

>>1205 bonfire is three syllables, so you're second line ends up being eight syllables.
if-you-sit-on-the-bon-fi-re

Continuing from >>1204

You'll burn in the end
At the stake if you're a witch
Don't live in Salem

1208 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-10 12:55 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

Don't live in Salem
Horrible things happen there
Anywhere, really

1209 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-10 13:40 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

"Anywhere, really."
A harsh but true answer to
"So, where do you live?"

1210 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-10 15:53 ID:A8ePYhos [Del]

"So where do you live?"
Asks the stalker as I pass
"Go to hell you creep!"

1211 Name: ksron !ZkPP6Ji8iw : 2015-04-10 17:09 ID:AraMz6An [Del]

"Go to hell you creep!"
I ignore him, disgusted;
no more Golden Rule

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1213 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-10 18:55 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

No more Golden Rule.
I dictate what I do. Me.
I'll live for myself.

1214 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-10 22:19 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

>>1207 It has to do with my accent. The way I talk, bonfire is two syllables. Accents can make or break a haiku.

I'll live for myself.
No more masters, no more kings,
only freed people.

1215 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-10 23:12 ID:OAUxt/ow [Del]

>>1214 not to be mean, but how the hell do you pronounce fire as one syllable!? Like what I'm thinking in my head sounds pretty awkward.

Only freed people
Can buy slaves that's why they're free
Only whites are free

1216 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-11 00:22 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

>>1214 >>1215 I pronounce it with two syllables too, so there has to be some way /shrugs

Only whites are free.
"Please, it's two thousand fifteen!"
You need new glasses.

1217 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-11 00:42 ID:JyHjsV1/ [Del]

>>1216 can you like write down how you pronounce it? I'm serious. I want to see if I can pronounce it like that to see if it's legit.

"You need new glasses."
Oh, no, I'm just colorblind!
Can't tell red from green.

1218 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-11 01:13 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

>>1217 I say it bon-fire, no emphasis on the -re. So more like BON-fiyr. I can see where your three syllables comes from, but it doesn't feel natural for me to say it that way for some reason.

Can't tell red from green.
Kind of cool, kind of special.
But as for Christmas...

1219 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-11 01:22 ID:JyHjsV1/ [Del]

>>1218 lol I do not understand how fiyr is pronounced. Don't worry about it, it's just I want to hear you pronounce it. XD You must have one interesting accent. haha, well i'm not sure if we can add fire to our list of acceptable both ways words.

But as for Christmas...
I do not celebrate it
Because I'm Jewish

1220 Name: Mariru : 2015-04-11 11:02 ID:xcZL5p6d [Del]

Because I'm Jewish
It is really bothersome
Being color blind

1221 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-11 13:22 ID:dCX5BzOM [Del]

"Being color blind"
How did we get back to that?!
I blame Mariru

1222 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-11 18:27 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

I blame Mariru
Whoever the fuck that is
Scapegoats for the win

1223 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-11 19:27 ID:dCX5BzOM [Del]

Scapegoats for the win
Use them to your advantage
Feels great to be used!

1224 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-11 20:53 ID:CPhKIBgB [Del]

Feels great to be used!
Why aren't you thanking us?
You should be grateful.

1225 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-11 20:58 ID:dCX5BzOM [Del]

You should be grateful
They've done everything for you
Respect your parents

1226 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-12 01:44 ID:dCX5BzOM [Del]

Respect your parents
They decided to have you
Not to abort you

1227 Name: Mariru : 2015-04-12 07:36 ID:xcZL5p6d [Del]

Not to abort you
Even though they were so young
They sucked it all up!

1228 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-12 07:48 ID:Ar8xnOGx [Del]

They sucked it all up!
Through the nappies and the tears
Just to care for you

1229 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-12 15:10 ID:4mP5Ckly [Del]

Just to care for you
They have paid thousands each month
Don't you feel bad now

1230 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-12 17:29 ID:/s62FzO6 [Del]

Don't you feel bad now?
No, I guess you don't, you jerk.
What a massive douche

1231 Name: Rurima : 2015-04-12 19:42 ID:OCHtNbgL [Del]

What a massive douche!
Whatever its meaning is,
You should look it up...

1232 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-12 20:39 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

>>1217 I say fire like "fihr," no emphasis on the RE at all.

You should look it up.
People can speak differently
based on their region.

1233 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-12 20:46 ID:4mP5Ckly [Del]

>>1232 so like saying fur????

Based on their region
People have different lingo
Like saying "hella"

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1235 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-12 23:27 ID:P7DSJud/ [Del]

>>1232 Same! Maybe that was a better way of putting it.
>>1233 Nah, still not it. It's hard to get across in text...

Like saying "hella"
For example, can confuse
Those who do not know.

1236 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-13 07:37 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

Those who do not know
Anything about the issue
Still preach shit anyway

1237 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-13 07:58 ID:7B0OJBFw [Del]

>>1236 you're second line is wrong A-ny-thing a-bout the i-ssue 8 syllables and you're third line is wrong too Still-preach-shit-a-ny-way six syllables

Continuing from >>1235

Those who do not know
What I do for a living
Get scared when they do

1238 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-13 18:10 ID:LsbbgVDh [Del]

Get scared when they do
Things that could kill me quickly
Allow me to live

1239 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-13 20:42 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

Allow me to live.
(I shouldn't need permission)
(And yet, still, I beg)

1240 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-13 20:56 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

And yet, still, I beg
for mercy I don't deserve
And yet, still recieve

1241 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-13 22:00 ID:LsbbgVDh [Del]

And yet still receive
The blowjob from my girlfriend
She is not that great

1242 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-13 22:45 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

"She is not that great."
At least, that's the lie I tell.
Rejection, it stings.

1243 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-13 23:03 ID:LsbbgVDh [Del]

Rejection, it stings
Especially when you cared
They are all assholes!!!

1244 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-14 06:59 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

They are all assholes
So just forget about them
Not worth the trouble

1245 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-14 17:19 ID:Dm//wNRd [Del]

Not worth the trouble
they bring me, those rotten friends.
We're meeting for lunch.

1246 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-14 21:56 ID:qdtw4E83 [Del]

We're meeting for lunch
In the plaza by the sea
Won't you come with me

1247 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-14 22:53 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Won't you come with me?
I want you to enjoy it;
our final moment.

1248 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-14 23:04 ID:qdtw4E83 [Del]

Our final moment
Before you depart from here
To the big city

1249 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-15 00:19 ID:2KaVS2af [Del]

To the big city!
Yes, we're off to live our dreams!
We'll rob them all blind.

1250 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-15 00:30 ID:qdtw4E83 [Del]

We'll rob them all blind
Say the gypsies as they scheme
They are filthy rich

1251 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-15 00:54 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

They are filthy rich
And yet they insist it's fair.
We're not buying it.

1252 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-15 06:50 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

We're not buying it
Cuz we lack the capital
I need more money

1253 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-15 08:28 ID:4jiCHQOA [Del]

I need more money
Or else I'll run out of food
I don't want to starve!

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1255 Name: Ellaumi : 2015-04-15 10:16 ID:ZH0C6M9O [Del]

"I don't want to starve!"
The Romani plight. "Gypsies"
the world spits, sneering.

1256 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-15 12:54 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

The world spits, sneering
The world should respect others
That's just disgusting

1257 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-15 20:43 ID:HpJEoBuV [Del]

That's just disgusting
Do not do that in public
Put your dick back in

1258 Name: Toastywafflz !qVs0Vq85og : 2015-04-15 21:39 ID:ypWVj61T [Del]

Put your dick back in
We're not delaying again
I'm ovulating

1259 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-15 23:18 ID:GIbq+4in [Del]

"I'm ovulating"
Her boyfriend was quite happy
Blowjob week it is

1260 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-16 06:55 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

Blowjob week it is
There is one downside to it:
Blue Balls Week next week

1261 Name: j : 2015-04-16 19:52 ID:jDmVAvd2 [Del]

Blue Balls Week next week
but get on my wrong side and
Red Balls Week next week

1262 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-16 19:55 ID:ztsWpY/i [Del]

Red Balls Week next week
"I do not compute," I say
Teach me something else

1263 Name: Toastywafflz !qVs0Vq85og : 2015-04-16 20:24 ID:JL4P9N5Y [Del]

Teach me something else
I can't get this maneuver
I'm new at flying

1264 Name: Kristien : 2015-04-16 23:04 ID:2zjDvGzw [Del]

'I'm new to flying'?
Well what a coincidence!
I started last week.

1265 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-17 07:58 ID:97B9FSR9 [Del]

I started last week
But I am terrible, though
I ended this week

1266 Name: SEOSHI : 2015-04-17 12:46 ID:NAEaav/E [Del]

I ended this week
With a mouth and hands of gold
Walking like a God.

1267 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-17 15:31 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Walking like a god,
NPCs fall before me.
Love the dev console.

1268 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-17 20:11 ID:0UNdC9XQ [Del]

Love the dev console
I wish I'd had it sooner
Who cares now? Let's play!

1269 Name: Tree : 2015-04-18 14:22 ID:J5KeFLYr [Del]

Who Cares now? Let's Play!
The heck is the dev console?
anyway, who cares?

1270 Name: SlapMeSenpai : 2015-04-18 14:28 ID:+00bOr1t [Del]

anyway,who cares
About your console?
At least i dont

1271 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-18 21:57 ID:FwFywn9t [Del]

>>1270 second line is 5 syllables, so it's wrong.

Continuing from >>1269

Anyway, who cares?
About who i choose to love
That's my decision

1272 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-19 11:04 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

That's my decision
Women are equal to men
Stop mansplaining things

1273 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-19 11:22 ID:mPOIeSQA [Del]

"Stop mansplaining things"
Why not? If they're being dumb!
Dumb girls are not hot

1274 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-19 18:08 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

Dumb girls are not hot
Ignorance is a turn off
You gotta have smarts

1275 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-19 18:54 ID:z2J82aL3 [Del]

You gotta have smarts
Or else people will make fun
Do you want that? No!

1276 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-20 20:02 ID:ZCd8L8jK [Del]

Do you want that? No!
Herpes is just disgusting
Girls call them cold sores...

1277 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-21 07:20 ID:0FRj/jYw [Del]

"Girls call them cold sores..."
But my father does as well...
Is he a girl, now?

1278 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-21 11:13 ID:ECSVjpU+ [Del]

Is he a girl now?
Rom-coms, hormones, dramatic
Whatever happened, man?

1279 Name: KahluaMilk : 2015-04-21 13:20 ID:kdSaFXJQ [Del]

Man who knows no grief, will grow to become really weak.

1280 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-21 18:16 ID:I98Ygk9Q [Del]

>>1278 last line is six syllables what-ev-er-ha-ppened-man
>>1279 obviously not a haiku

Continuing from >>1277

Is he a girl, now?
Maybe. I am not so sure.
Let's pull down his pants.

1281 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-22 02:06 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Let's pull down his pants.
It will make filling them with
eels much easier.

1282 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-22 06:39 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

Eels much easier
Than octopi to consume
Less of a struggle

1283 Name: Price : 2015-04-22 11:19 ID:hHPSMEu/ [Del]

Less of a struggle
That is how I deal with fights
Bring lots of backup

1284 Name: Kazuko : 2015-04-22 16:26 ID:sCOKZ2sz [Del]

bring lots of backup
we are going to need it
muffins invading

1285 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-22 16:56 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Muffins invading
my dreams. I really should have
eaten before bed.

1286 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-22 19:18 ID:Ty18eqyy [Del]

Eaten before bed
It was a strange way to die
Getting cut and chewed on

1287 Name: DMMD-SlyBlue : 2015-04-22 21:17 ID:urCr2Mfe [Del]

Getting cut and chewed on
How scarred my arm has become
Self-harm is a bitch

1288 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-23 09:51 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

Self harm is a bitch
Masochism? Punishment?
I'm not quite certain...

1289 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-23 18:59 ID:ER7a1v6U [Del]

I'm not quite certain
Of what's to become of me
I hope it is good!

1290 Name: Leena : 2015-04-23 21:20 ID:i5dl+Fgx [Del]

I hope it is good
I wish you do splendidly
On this day good sir

1291 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-23 22:09 ID:mKe/drhy [Del]

On this day good sir
I shall court your daughter, please.
I will keep her safe

1292 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-24 08:50 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

I will keep her safe
Father's promise to daughter
But can he keep it?

1293 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-24 13:15 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

But can he keep it?
His precious sanity?
Or succumb to the madness?

1294 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-24 18:33 ID:FN2umfE6 [Del]

>>1293 that's wrong, like very wrong.

Continuing from >>1292

But can he keep it?
I don't think my secret's safe
Please don't spread rumors!

1295 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-24 19:54 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

>>1294 You're right, I completely messed up the syllable count.

Please don't spread rumors.
Assholes will assume they're true,
and that's a real pain.

1296 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-24 21:25 ID:V2P5Oo7+ [Del]

And that's a real pain
To take care of everything
I wish I had help

1297 Name: Toastywafflz !qVs0Vq85og : 2015-04-24 22:39 ID:A+V3oFpq [Del]

I wish I had help
Elation fades with my luck
I made a mistake

1298 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-24 23:49 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

I made a mistake.
When people threw meat at me,
there was a missed steak.

1299 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-25 01:12 ID:XLO7TPj8 [Del]

There was a missed steak
And the customer got mad
And he left no tip

1300 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-25 07:41 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

And he left no tip
I really needed advice
Now I'm further lost

1301 Name: Steelheart : 2015-04-25 11:34 ID:JA0eDVNj [Del]

Now I'm further lost
Stepping in the frost
Looking for a way out

1302 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-25 11:42 ID:Kml8xRri [Del]

>>1301 last line is six syllables look-ing-for-a-way-out

Continuing from >>1300

Now I'm further lost
In this scary, dark forest
I'm just like Snow White

1303 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-25 15:19 ID:+GL6N23J [Del]

I'm just like Snow Whites
I just don't have seven dwarves
Where can I get some?

1304 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-25 18:39 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

Where can I get some?
I need a fix badly, man
Bugs under my skin!

1305 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-25 19:25 ID:hstUh1sZ [Del]

"Bugs under my skin!"
You should go to hospital
That sounds concerning.

1306 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-25 19:30 ID:+GL6N23J [Del]

>>1305 so close, second line has 8 syllables instead of 7

Continuing from >>1304

Bugs under my skin!
This is what you see on drugs
You should really care

1307 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-25 19:45 ID:hstUh1sZ [Del]

>>1306 No, it is 7. You-should-go-to-hos-pit-al.

1308 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-25 19:55 ID:+GL6N23J [Del]

>>1307 ah, I see now. I'm sorry I was inserting "the" in between to and hospital because that's grammatically correct. I'm very sorry.

Continuing from >>1305

That sounds concerning
I really hope it gets fixed
You should really care

1309 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-26 02:42 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

You should really care
about the rights of people
that get brushed aside.

1310 Name: Dorsia !KeQu9uW7Gs : 2015-04-26 04:05 ID:BcB9eahy [Del]

>>1308 It's fine. Besides, you're right, "the" should be in there, so...

>>1309
That get brushed aside
Like dust on an empty shelf
You should be careful

1311 Name: Kizakzi : 2015-04-26 08:48 ID:fXfnS1v+ [Del]

You should be careful
life is brittle
yet so simple

1312 Name: Diefonk !!e2ZY8mZl : 2015-04-26 12:46 ID:xseFLOjQ [Del]

>>1311 5-4-4 is not correct, it's 5-7-5

From >>1310
You should be careful
So that you don't mess it up
This simple haiku

1313 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-26 17:21 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

This simple haiku
is an ancient tradition
by the Japanese

1314 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-26 18:24 ID:2bsFm9XR [Del]

By the Japanese
Because they are so awesome
I love their culture

1315 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-27 12:46 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

I love their culture
Fascinating, elegant
Exchange between us

1316 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-27 18:39 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

Exchange between us
the marvelous gifts we brought
for this day, Christmas.

1317 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-27 19:46 ID:LTG241Q7 [Del]

For this day, Christmas
We celebrate in this way:
We give and receive

1318 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-28 07:40 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

We give and receive
Precious wisdom for the world
Knowledge is power

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1320 Name: Lavi : 2015-04-28 15:54 ID:5/49fUox [Del]

Knowledge is power
We learn and learn day by day
Bringing more to light

1321 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-28 22:26 ID:VxDViw+P [Del]

Bringing more to light
And out of the shadows in
This negative world

1322 Post deleted by user.

1323 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-04-29 09:09 ID:s13Ixzkj [Del]

This negative world
Is my only resting place
So don't be so sad

1324 Name: 眼鏡の悪役 : 2015-04-29 13:59 ID:dqJWfiXU [Del]

So don't be so sad,
this is how it has to be.
My end was destined.

1325 Name: Enigami : 2015-04-29 18:46 ID:jD42txwb [Del]

My end was destined
As is everyone else's
We are all finite.

1326 Name: Paracosm : 2015-04-29 19:09 ID:HmfnQmt+ [Del]

We are all finite
Hearts locked up by endless chains
No key to free us.

1327 Name: Lunatic Karma : 2015-04-29 20:14 ID:Dv9i6oim [Del]

No key to free us
We are all prisoners
in this invisible jail.

1328 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-29 21:16 ID:v0OIPEqM [Del]

>>1327 wrong amount of syllables.

Continuing from >>1326

No key to free us
From the madness that's inside
Will you help me out?

1329 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-04-30 01:22 ID:s13Ixzkj [Del]

Will you help me out?
Of this world of war and death
Because we will die

1330 Name: jill : 2015-04-30 01:33 ID:+YnrIUHr [Del]

Because we will die
And that is the truth I learned
When I was a kid

1331 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-04-30 06:29 ID:s13Ixzkj [Del]

When I was a kid
I thought I ate chocolate
But it was ice-cream

1332 Name: Crazy : 2015-04-30 14:30 ID:bRBNTIYI [Del]

But it was ice-cream
So I tossed in the trash
Because no one likes it

1333 Name: ryuhime : 2015-04-30 19:43 ID:jSZl4YHJ [Del]

(1st line modified to fit the syllable count)

'Cause no one like it
When you always tell the truth
All of us have lied

1334 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-04-30 21:10 ID:TL3MZDoU [Del]

>>1333 you don't just modify someone's haiku, nevertheless the second line is 6 syllables.

Continuing from >>1331

But it was ice-cream
And I wanted gelato
Now I have yogurt

1335 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-04-30 23:10 ID:UqB4sD9u [Del]

Now I have yogurt
To eat in my loneliness
And watch other's friends

1336 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-05-01 00:11 ID:ycSStPUK [Del]

And watch other's friends
Cuz I have none of my own
No one likes me, so...

1337 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-05-01 00:33 ID:UqB4sD9u [Del]

No one likes me, so...
I steal the last post on here
Ha ha ha ha ha
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