>>6 After seeing what you can do with just that much, I really hope to read a short story by you, maybe one or two pages long, to see if you really can write. You have a way with words, Crisis.
Then again, if you don't want to try it I won't fault you for it. I'm personally too lazy to write anything of my own, though I personally think I'm not bad at it.
On a side note, I prefer saying "constructive criticism" over just saying "criticism" because the second choice just makes it sound like I'm going to tear it apart, call it shit, and throw it back at you. Despite popular belief, among everyone that knows me, I am actually quite nice and helpful when critiquing. Just because I'm a bitch, doesn't mean I'm a bitch about everything. I also take writing very seriously, since it is a love of mine as well.
I swear, my friend had one of his friends edit a paper, and the editor just handed it back saying, "It's good." I was livid. Then my friend said he wanted real help, and handed me the paper telling me to tear it apart and make him feel like shit about his writing. I was like, "I don't make anyone feel like shit about their writing unless it really is shit." I took his paper, wrote my constructive criticism, and handed it back to him. He read it over and said that I didn't write much and it was a lot nicer than he expected. I told him that I didn't write much because I liked his work. It was nice because I feel that I should tear anyone down over an honest effort, despite how crappy some of the shit I had to edit has been.
Enough of my ranting. I still want to read some real work by you. I have a feeling you're one of those people to use big words. I like those kind of people.