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"Because the world isn't as bad as you think." (9)

1 Name: Whisper : 2012-09-19 01:46 ID:3wuvtxjH [Del]

There's no purpose.. no point.. no reason to stay. "The Dollars", he told me, but wait.. who are they? "You're not alone, you see, and this all may seem strange.. but you don't have to be perfect to make a change." The password was sent and I put down the knife. Dollars, tonight, you just saved my life..

2 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-09-19 02:29 ID:f5k1p7wh [Del]

...What the fuck is this shit?

3 Name: Whisper : 2012-09-19 02:59 ID:3wuvtxjH [Del]

It's a poem, what does it look like?

4 Name: Gatzu !DFqtqWsVYk : 2012-09-19 09:10 ID:A9SSUA4P [Del]

Poetry board.

5 Name: Gatzu !DFqtqWsVYk : 2012-09-19 09:21 ID:A9SSUA4P [Del]

Oh and work on your spacing and lines. I couldn't really tell this was a poem.

6 Name: Whisper : 2012-09-19 13:12 ID:3wuvtxjH [Del]

The set up was on purpose. It was meant to look like a paragraph/story. If you couldn't tell it was a poem by the fact it rhymed... well, then I apologize for confusing you >_>

7 Name: Elunore!HIwambGeWE : 2012-09-19 14:31 ID:u/49vGm3 [Del]

>>6 Not all poems have to rhyme.

8 Name: Whisper : 2012-09-19 14:49 ID:3wuvtxjH [Del]

>>7 I know :) I just meant that the fact it did rhyme should have been enough of a hint that it was a poem. I write, this is the literature bored, so I thought "Hey, why not."

9 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-09-19 19:58 ID:f5k1p7wh [Del]

It's a small Poem, and doesn't state it.

There is a reason we have a Poetry Board. SO you don't make a topic for such a small Poem.

This does not deserve it's own topic.