>>3 Well, some parents complain about the word blood and say that their children are too young for violence even being hinted at in a story, so that's why I put it.
>>2 Thanks. It's still a work in progress. My favorite paragraph so far was actually in some ways inspired by Ray Bradbury's "Fahrenheit 451" and is in the first chapter, talking about an air plane and describing what it looks like to the wolf.