as the full moon rises Blood wolf walks alone he has no where to go.he looks up seeing the moon he howls then he hears a diffrent howl comeing from behind he looks in back of him seeing a white wolf with blue eyes he wonders what this feeling is he quickly turns away and starts walking his heart beating fastly. he lays down under a tree thinking to himself(who was she and why do i feel like this)he hears footsteps behind him seeing the white wolf agian he asked what her name was.she looked straight in his eyes and says "my name is luna"he smiled and he stood up as his tail wagged.she tilted her head."why is ur tail wagging".he looked at his tail blushing then he said "im just happy thats all".blood wolf ased her if she wanted to take a walk. she said yes.they walked beside eachother.as they reached a cliff they sat down enyjoying the night.blood wolf looked a her and said"im glad you came".she looked back at him."why are u so happy.its kidna weird seeing a wolf so happy.she smiled.blood wolf blushed as he looked away.then she finally unstood blood wolf was in love with her........to be continued

I'm not sure if you're going to want my honest opinion or not...

But, being honest anyway, this is complete shit, in both story and grammar.

Do you know where your shift key is? If not, please go back to first grade and relearn the QWERY keyboard.

>>2
Do they even teach you anything in First Grade about keyboards? I don't really think so...but not sure about NOWADAYS. That is normally in maybe 4th or 5th grade I think.

>>3 We started Mavis Beacon in second grade at my school :\

>>4
Oh, if I recall I'm older than you, so back when I was in First Grade was different than when you were, so that might be way I don't recall "learning how to use a Keyboard" back then.

>>5 That would make sense. Even though I took it 2nd grade, when I was in 5th grade helping out with the 1st grade classes, they were learning how to type on the computer already. (To keep them into it, we worked with Paint and games, which is no fair since my generation completely skipped over the fun programs >>' lol)

My year started MB in 2nd grade and continued until 4th grade. From 3rd-4th, as well, we learned how to use Word and other programs. Then, we started our internet safety and general technology classes 5th grade and continued on 'til 6th. 7th to 8th grade, we were learning to use Flash to make games and animations and Excel to make spreadsheets. Obviously, once we got into HS, we were allowed to choose our classes ^o^