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The Life and Times of Squad 8 (30)

1 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-23 22:48 ID:pLabo00k [Del]

Squad 8 is a comical story of mine that I created awhile ago. It takes places in an MMO world. There are 8 different Squads, in 8 different sectors of the world.

Each Squad basically hates some other Squad. There is a man named Alegoran who is using his Squad to take down and over throw every other Squad.

Squad 8 is the first out of the bunch, to go to War with them. Each Squad also was built over top of Ancient War Machines. Magic and Machines fused, to do battle. But only Ale's Squad, and Squad 8 have discovered theirs.

But before they could fight, they noticed a Hacker trying to hack into the game's Database, which caused the game to activate the System's Defensive Network. This Defense, is a Black Hole that sucks up all Data, until a Black Out occurs. So they leave out on a Journey, to find this Hacker, and stop them, before it's too late.

Here is links to both Parts 1, and Parts 2.
Part 1 is more random, and Part 2 begins to reveal the plot.

Part 1

Part 2

I hope you enjoy it.

2 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-24 11:02 ID:pLabo00k [Del]

Bump.

3 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-24 23:41 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Bump.

4 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-25 14:03 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Bump.

5 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 01:15 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

bump.

6 Name: Anonymous : 2012-04-26 10:10 ID:YMhX4MZL [Del]

bump

7 Name: Yatahaze !E/8OvwUzpY : 2012-04-26 14:10 ID:UFs0Rrj1 [Del]

bump

8 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 17:53 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

I plan to start adding in people from here, over to this story, as well. Sort of different cameos from different sites, into an MMO world.

9 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 19:56 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Anyway, if you want to be in this story, I need to know what you, yourself, want your person to be like. The name will be what you use on here, though.


Remember, it'll be turned into a web comic by Rie, from my Texting Group. So, this will be your chance to partake in it's creation.

10 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 22:08 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

I also created a DeviantArt Contest for this, as well.
Don't worry, I didn't link or even mention anything about this site, on there.

11 Name: Shadow : 2012-04-26 22:23 ID:/hO32QHt [Del]

How bout my character is all about war and but fights for what's right not just for my enjoyment and I fight to protect others? That's just somethin off the top of my head

12 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 22:25 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Well try to pick something based off of your Internet persona. How you act online. Everyone has multiple personalities when on the net, pick the one that best describes who you are, online.

13 Name: Shadow : 2012-04-26 22:29 ID:+/QkLlNd [Del]

Ok how bout somebody that's not afraid to voice their opinion, and is willing to do anything to help somebody in need?

14 Name: Shadow : 2012-04-26 22:29 ID:+/QkLlNd [Del]

No matter what the price

15 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 22:30 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Up to you. Could work in the story greatly.

16 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-26 22:32 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Also I've decided to add in Jang Gwang, into the story.
Since it's an MMO world, he'll be a virus that randomly shows up.

17 Name: Sixclaw Sixto !ODBzhvbHus : 2012-04-27 05:04 ID:jrsJVMKS [Del]

>>16 LOL I thought you said not to mention him anymore.

18 Name: Neowu !z.S9KJmHTI : 2012-04-27 09:53 ID:Xf0TBmMo [Del]

>>13 LOL good one.

19 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-27 10:04 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

>>17

Well making fun of him in my story...just seems right.

20 Name: Live 2 Die : 2012-04-27 10:27 ID:8dg0hYdV [Del]

I liked it! It was very interesting!

21 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-27 14:32 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

>>20

http://da-write-group.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4xsk1p

22 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-28 10:15 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Bump.

23 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-29 01:40 ID:le7bvcPk [Del]

Bump.

24 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-04-30 00:38 ID:B/ULqmBB [Del]

Bump.

25 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-05-21 02:26 ID:cn0CxOn6 [Del]

I've added more onto part 2.
Part 2 gets more interesting and will have a lot of action.

26 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-05-21 10:21 ID:cn0CxOn6 [Del]

Anyway, bump.
You all should give it a read, and tell me what you think. The character names are based off of people I know from an online, text based game. Reason I also decided to set the world of this story, in an MMO setting.


It seems random, but it starts picking up on Part 2, and starts to show how all of the fucked up characters begin to work well, together. Also it starts to tell the story about what had happened in the past, in part 2.

27 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-05-21 21:14 ID:cn0CxOn6 [Del]

Bump.

28 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-05-22 11:21 ID:cn0CxOn6 [Del]

Bump.

I am adding Anonymous somewhere into the story. That their actions shape how the game world is, in present time.

29 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-05-23 19:13 ID:cn0CxOn6 [Del]

The story has been updated. Anonymous has been involved in the story, and how it pans out, now, will mainly be due to them.

When and if the post linking to it gets bumped up where it's not seen, please quote to this post.

The Life and Times of Squad 8 Part 1

The Life and Times of Squad 8 Part 2

The Life and Times of Squad 8 Part 3

30 Name: Thiamor !yZIDc0XLZY : 2012-06-10 15:59 ID:KSPSfI0g [Del]

Bump.