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Death Gods and Dream Lands (6)

1 Name: Wattpad Explorers : 2012-03-29 23:05 ID:tZfDza0P [Del]

I decided to try my hand at a death note fanfic and here is the main idea I typed in on my iPod 10mins ago it's very rough and I didn't feel compelled to write it all out so enjoy: Cathrine cat for short have 2 cats one is midnight other is whiskers have a husky puppy named Lilly named her after my lit sis that died from a car wreck wasn't accident though I caused it with my death note that's right I have a death note right now I'm in some sort of asylum getting shots in brain just hoping that they make me forget how I killed everyone around me to make sure I was safe I will slowly slip into a dream state cause the meds do that before that happen I will tell it from the beginning.

2 Name: NaeBree !jAUXc1hruw : 2012-03-30 10:10 ID:9Td3IeOK [Del]

Just a way to improve this using english...

"Catherine, Cat for short, had two cats. One was named Midnight and the other was Whiskers. She also had a puppy named Lilly, whom was named after her little sister that died for a car wreck."...................

I got this far, stopped, looked at the screen in astonishment, and said "Fucking dumbass".

Please permasage this, somebody...

3 Name: Wattpad Explorers : 2012-03-30 16:46 ID:mSLWYbgB [Del]

It was only my rough draft. I tapped it in on my IPod quickly to just get it down on something. As I said before the story it was a ROUGH DRAFT. Go be a bitch on someone else's thread.

4 Name: Wattpad Explorers : 2012-04-24 21:28 ID:OVDWPWGE [Del]

(Is it better now? I fixed it and published it on Wattpad, so it's not rough anymore.) My name's Cathrine. People call me Cat for short. I have two cats; one is Midnight and the other is Whiskers. I have a husky puppy named Lilly. I named her after my little sister that died from a car wreck. It wasn't an accident though. I had caused it with my Death Note. That's right I am the proud owner of Sidoh's Death Note. Right now I'm in some sort of asylum getting shots in my brain and having to take weird colored drugs that make my memory horrible. I am only hoping that they make me forget how I killed everyone around me whom I loved to make sure in my mind that I was safe and secure. I will slowly slip into a dream state because of the medicine. Before that happens I will tell my story from the beginning if anyone cares to listen to my psychotic self.

5 Name: *insertnamehere*!!mhJDjCwh : 2012-04-24 22:01 ID:PBdkqdVa [Del]

>>2 Why should the mods sage anything that isn't trolling, OP deleted, or spamming? Just no. You obviously don't get how saging works, that or you're retarded.

6 Name: *insertnamehere*!!mhJDjCwh : 2012-04-24 22:02 ID:PBdkqdVa [Del]

And sorry for derailing your thread. This will be the last post.