Yeah....I'm writing this wierd story/book based on the "Jack the Ripper" case, but with a wierd twist, here's the intro ^^; :

The woman was sprawled out on the alley floor. She was too high and drunk to truly understand the situation she was in. The man standing over her had his face concealed with a white mask embroidered with intricate pale gold designs that nearly blended with white. His entire face was covered except for his chin. It wasn’t weak, but one would never call it a strong chin either. It was graceful, and hinted to a very lovely countenance behind the milky white mask. The woman paid no attention to this, nor did she give it a second thought. She was used to clients having weird fetishes and knew that if she played along she’d get paid twice as much. So when he leaned over her and picked her head up roughly by the hair she let out a playful moan of pain, and tried to look as though she was terrified. The man smiled at this, but it wasn’t a smile of sexual lust, but of a completely different type of lust.
“You pathetic sow,” he said to her.
She looked at him weirdly, and got angry. “Well you know what ya queer,” she stated, “You can just forget about usin’ me tonight!”
She tried to untangle his grip on her hair, tried to get up and walk away, but he just laugh and forced her back down onto the ground. Now she was really scared, and she felt her heart trying to force its way out of her chest. The smile widened on his face, and he reached into his pocket. The whore never saw the flash of silver, and no one ever heard the whore’s scream.

I think it's quite good. The only critique I have would be the beginning descriptions of his mask/chin. I think "white mask embroidered with intricate pale gold designs that nearly blended with white" could be worded a bit different, especially the last bit "nearly blended with white".

I'm not a big fan of the chin bit. I understand you put it there to give the reader insight into how the killer may look.

Take what you will from this, all in all it may just be stylistic preferences.

Regardless I enjoyed it, great job.

I enjoyed this story it was good

>>2 thank you so much for the critique re reading it I understand completely I'll try and fix when I go back and edit this part ^^

Tell me when you continue. I would read it. It sounds interesting.

Just out of curiousity, do you think jack the ripper is/was a boy or a girl? One of my friends got into an argument over it.