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One last Hope.. (4)

1 Name: Ravana !gpHUgtgEHg : 2011-12-30 21:04 ID:pIMgqLeM [Del]

Alright... Heh, I had made this chapter afew months ago, and never had the motivation to re-write it.
But this is something of my own creation..

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Prologue:

The wind rushes past my ears as I go deeper and deeper down in the darkness. My sight has gone blurry as the tears weld up in my eyes; at least I did this for someone that I loved. But I heard a voice, a familiar voice…. They called my name… and a bright light engulfed me…

Chapter One: The Wake of Adventure

The sun shone in the country of Daquen (1), the tree's every so often brang a few water drops from their leaves, the grass glistening in the sunlight, and a girl laying on a blanket in a meadow.

Her shoulder length green hair was sooken wet, as was her school uniform; but through the entire rainfall, she was asleep. When a figure stepped out of the forest, he walked over to the girl and crouched down, his face but inches away from her. The boy shook his head. "Elena, wake up."

The girls eyes ripped open and she started blushing like crazy. The boy straightens his back as Elena gets up. "Dante! Don't scare me like that!"

Dante had short and choppy black hair and dark red eyes; he was also wearing a school uniform. "Come on Elena, we need to get you a change of clothes before you get sick."

As those two walked away, another figure stepped out of the shadows, a cloak hiding their features, but from the build, they looked female. "Ah, my plan will soon begin." She said, every word making her more transparent until she fully disappeared.

A loud ring chorused through the building as Dante and a dry Elena run through the hall as it began to fill up with people. Dante laughed. "Somehow, I knew we were going to miss over half of the day."

Elena pouted. "You would have made it if you would have left me there! I would have woken up eventually!"

Dante rolled his eyes, "Yeah and you'd have the flu."

Elena opened her mouth to retort something back, when a flash of red came by and the next thing Elena knew; she was being hugged to death. "Elena! I thought you weren't going to be here!"

Elena anime sweat dropped as the girl let go. "Hey Avery

Avery had long red hair tied back into two high ponytails, pink chopsticks making an X at each pony tail holder, and bangs that nearly covered her gentle green eyes. "You missed everything fun! There was yearbook signing, and ski ball, ya know what-" she kept on like that.

Elena and Dante both put in an ear bud, and Elena clicked "randomize"; but the song that came on made both of them blush, look away from each other, and rip the ear bud out of their ears. The song was If it's love by Train. When the color drained from his cheeks Dante asked, "How did that song get on there?"

Elena thought for a minute. "I dunno, but I think I know somebody, two somebody's actually, that would do this."

As if on cue, two boys in middle school uniforms ran down the hall, and a teacher covered in fake and real spiders chased them. The boys noticed Elena and co. and used them as a shield as the teacher ran past them.

"Nathaniel! Jacob!" Elena groaned in annoyance. "What did you do this time?"

"Nothing out of the usual" They both said.

Nathaniel and Jacob were identical twins, they had short dark brown hair that flopped in front of their indigo eyes; They were both short, being only ten.

"Excuse me one minute." Elena dragged Nathaniel by the ear into a spare classroom; Jacob followed, despite his twins yells for him to run for it.

As soon as the door closed, Elena's happy face fell, and a serious one took its place. "Alright, I wanna know. Who messed with my MP3?"

The twins looked shocked "You mean- you're not mad at us about what happened to-" Nathaniel started

"No, you guys have pranked him so much that it could give a sub a heart attack, now I wanna know-" Elena said, only to be interrupted by the bell. "Great" The greenie sighed as they went their separate ways to class.

It was late, and nothing was heard in the three room house but the faint sounds of movement, and clicking of keys on a keyboard.

Greenie4life has created the chat room "No school! Who's Happy?"

AshesinEterinty has joined the chat.

DevilsMouth423 has signed out.

NationalPranksters1&2 has secretly joined the chat

Ele-ana: Hey Dante, looks like we just missed Avery.

Dantaz: v(-=-)v stupid summer homework

Dantaz: and "Dantaz" really Elena?

Ele-ana: :P I couldn't think of anything better. And yeah; that could take me all summer! DX

Dantaz: Well it is summer, there are perks.

Ele-ana: Like sleeping in late, fewer people in town… *light bulb appears above head* even Christmas in July! *sits on Dante's lap like a little kid* Santa, I want- XD

Dantaz: *Pushes her off* I'm not Santa! Let's not get too crazy…

Ele-ana: ^_^ Crazy? Who's crazy? XD

Dantaz: Elena? How much candy have you had today?

Ele-ana: v(^_^)v I dunno, I stopped counting after 5 pixie sitx

Dantaz: …

Dantaz: So, how much trouble did the twins get into?

-four minutes later-

Dantaz: Elena, You there?

LilDevils: Dante! Elena's gone!

Dantaz: What? What do you mean by gone? And further more, how did you both get in?

LilDevils: We'll save that for later, Elena is GONE gone. We heard a scream come from her room and when we got there, she was gone and the window was wide open!

Dantaz: Well you guys are good with forensics as well as pranks (Man you guys love anything to do with dead bodies) so can you figure out what happened? o.o?

LilDevils: *salutes* Aye aye!

-End Chapter-

DX I know, it has terrible grammar… but I'm tired! I was going to make the ending as a cliffhanger… but… *shrugs*

Daquen… :P my made up country. I haven't the foggiest what it means

Preview for the next chapter with: Elena, Dante, Avery, and the twins

Elena: What! I got kidnapped! Bull chips! I'm standing right here!

Dante: *pokes her in the cheek* yep, your definitely here…

Avery: *has her headphones blaring* WHAT? SPEAK UP I CAN'T HEAR YOU?

-an explosion is heard-

Elena: *sighs* NATHANIEL AND JACOB! IF THAT WAS YOU; THEN GOD SO HELP ME I WILL! *runs after them, voice fainting away:*

?: Uh, guys aren't we supposed to say what happens next?

Dante: Obviously not, we ran out of time! ^_^

Yeah.. I dunno… I got bored…

2 Name: Ravana۞ ☆!HltySaVY5g : 2012-02-07 15:20 ID:fVnIahFL [Del]

Bump...

3 Name: Yoshimitsu : 2012-02-08 23:07 ID:DHBAvtsm [Del]

I like it

4 Name: Ravana۞ ☆!HltySaVY5g : 2012-02-09 10:53 ID:fVnIahFL [Del]

Thank you >>3