This is an odd story, with an odd format. Me and a few people I know (Mainly me and my girlfriend) are writing one story of our lives from different points of view. It's supposed to show how nobody is just who they say they are on the surface, or what you see, and how nobody is 'evil', and everyone has a reason to do what they do. I was looking for feedback, but do to this being nonfiction I was looking more for advice in the information given, or on formatting. Things like "can we get this story from X character's point of view" or asking for extra explanation of something that we as a group might no about but readers don't. I know it's a long story (a work in progress at that), but if anyone could help give some suggestions, it'd be greatly appreciated.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bptCrD3Wwf-PsQRuyDu4A_reHSD9QvPipaSJB8aQodg/edit?usp=sharing

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On my way reading it man