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You Are Free (5)

1 Name: 21Faces : 2017-06-20 22:38 ID:qEaAfznG [Del]

Are you happy?
Living in a corrupted government
but, apparently not corrupted enough to do anything

Living and working as slaves just to earn and hourly wage

Living in the same routine:
waking up, working, eating, go to sleep
REPEAT

Being proud to be human just because we have the bigger brain
but, the body size of a sheep

A Sheep In Mans Clothing

We are educated, know our way with technology, and yet know absolutely nothing

We have to break the 'ideal citizen' persona
We have to start a revolution

I am Free
You are Free
We are Free

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This poem was inspired by Yuumei's comic: Fisheye Placebo

2 Name: Eziopandas915 : 2017-06-26 09:48 ID:tGu1WvNh [Del]

GG, you just summed up my problem with this world (something that I can rattle on about for hours) in 16 lines.
this isn't a criticism, carry on. i enjoyed that poem.

3 Name: SolidusSnake92 : 2017-06-28 21:00 ID:8HlO7Q+9 [Del]

So I'm just going interpret this as having an existential message for which we have the freedom to seize the means of production.

4 Name: Anon : 2017-07-18 10:15 ID:Fyu3t3Wj [Del]

Freedom begins in your own mind. How you use it is up to you.

5 Name: Zikushi : 2017-07-28 19:07 ID:AiMFl0ss [Del]

"We are educated, know our way with technology, and yet know absolutely nothing"

This line in particular stuck out to me. I really enjoyed reading this. I like the directive tone of it, how it's meant to spur the reader into action of some kind. Thanks for sharing this with us!