1 Name: Story feedback? Blurred Lines+Nethers Angel : 2016-08-17 19:27 ID:XW6YUpiL [Del]
Heey! So I have two stories that I'm working on currently in my free time on wattpad, and, as the title suggests, I was curious if anyone would be interested in reading them/ giving me feedback? I would appreciate it!
The first story is called 'Blurred Lines' and it's a project I'm working on with some friends. (Though the main story is mine, they do own characters/sideplots etc) it takes place in a world run by colorful, anthropomorphic animals. In the city of Catology, Wi, citizens soon begin disappearing rapidly, and without a trace. When one of these is a young fennec known as Kyra, her friends decide to take matters into their own paws as each of them goes through their own trials to stop these odd occurrences.
7 parts are posted so far~ you can find it here https://www.wattpad.com/story/28515727-blurred-lines ignore the old and lazily drawn artwork. And I swear I came up with this before 'Zootopia' was a thing :/ you don't have to read it if anthropomorphic animals aren't your thing<3
And then theres 'Nethers Angel' set in the Minecraft universe (but sometimes you can't tell) which is about a young 'demon' named Mino, who was born into a family of angels, and her struggles against herself and the image society has put on her. Theres also some revenge stuff in there.
It only has one part so far, found here~ https://www.wattpad.com/story/11453551-nether%27s-angel
Feedback would be greatly appreciated <3 I felt this would be a nice site to get honest opinions and feedback, but if you decide not to read them thats okay! Going to fix grammatical and spelling errors in both storys tonight. Long post is long ;~;
