hey guys sense this is a literature corner you should check out my story summer R&R
it would really help if you give me your opinion on how i can make my story's better thanks https://www.wattpad.com/story/55230706-summer-r-r

So I'm not on Wattpad, so I could not read the whole story, but it does seem to be an interesting beggining. Also, I foyu want help with editing and grammar, I suggest you look at this thread.
http://dollars-bbs.org/literature/res/1457032859.html
You can possibly find an editor willing to help you (myself included) so that you can improve your writing.