So ello fellow dollars and i started a book about a year ago... I only got 2 paragraphs of my prologue... Any ways it took me about another year to get down all the back ground story and info like there are sheets, drawings, and i have the whole back ground and story and notes about every single detail of this world i am creating. I dystopian sci fi, any ways heres the link to the google doc please give constructive criticism pleasee!..

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QZHMSrG96VBBlWZ1vXUTO6LjJLNFNUF7qoxbGjbVWlY/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks, Alpha out!

Hey buddy. Try to keep your story in one thread. Not much has changed from your previous thread(which I had spent like 10 minutes commenting on so can we not ignore that)