The wind is howling
Its roaring
It's forming a tornado
A hurricane of Destruction
Despair is all over the land
Yes, there's happiness, too
But pain rules the land
Why? Why is this happen?
Why do we have to live our lives in pain?
There's no end
To why this is happen
Light has been turned to dark
Hope to despair
Peace to war
But why, why is this happen?
Someone please tell me why...
There are wildfires
Volcanoes erupting
Hurricanes, tornadoes,
Tsunamis, whirlpools,
And earthquakes too
Natural disasters rule the land
There happening one after another
I just don't understand
The lava is spreading all over the land
People are dying one by one
Their screaming in pain
Natural disasters wouldn't be like this,
If we had no technology
This is our fault
And we're paying for it
With our lives.

The poem I made Is called natural disaster.

This is really good

Hi.

"Why is this happen" is not grammatically sound and it should be "Why is this happening?" or if you want to keep the form of 'happen', "Why does this happen?"

And it's "They're (they are) happening one after another". 'There' is for places.

Cheers.

Thanks for the advice, I really appreciate it.

Hey, hey, I recommend you make one sole thread for your poetry instead of posting multiple (I think I saw a few on personal, too, right?) So yeah, you should make one. It would be great and more organized of course =)