.-. sorry if this is a bother to anyone, but i would appreciate it if you could review the first chapter of my book?

it's call the boy who ruled the world and just as a bit of a warning for some, it's boy x boy so...

i was trying to go for a humorous route but i feel like maybe my main character is unlikeable and boring...

advice?

you can read it here on wattpad : http://www.wattpad.com/story/31966797-the-boy-who-ruled-the-world-boyxboy

I would post it on this site called titanpad.com (make sure you have a saved personal copy elsewhere) and invite people to edit and annotate it. Only reason I bring this up is because not everyone has a wattpad