I've never tried speaking of this in a forum but I could use some feedback. I'm in the middle of writing an original novel and I would like to know what everyone thinks. Please bear in mind that this is a work in progress and that I'm still writing it. I'll leave a link to the actual story. I would be happy to know what you think ^^

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/NightmareRose/797938/

I only read the first chapter, but I must tell you your usage of words is great! I fell in love with it. I'm not sure about the story itself, you have captured my attention, but I don't know yet. I might read another chapter when I have more time. Also, just one thing, I noticed you used "s**t" in the first chapter and well, I mean if you're going to do that, it's pointless (in my opinion) to censor it. Instead, you might want to use another word, perhaps defecation??? Just a little advice. Keep using your outstanding word usage!~

Thanks! I let the story tell itself but there is a brief description in the page that lists the chapters. As for the censorship, that's not my doing, that's the website. When I first wrote this, I didn't have it censored so it's most likely content control. But thanks for the feedback!