So I've been thinking for a while and I wanted to show a lot of people of what I'm capable of writing. I'm planning to upload my story on Wattpad.
Though I'm nervous and I need your opinion.

I want to make a story about a girl who had amnesia, pretty simple if you may think but I want to do some sort of twist of maybe like whenever she remembers something in particular, she forgets a memory of something or someone and that's what makes the story title called "Amnesiac"

But along the way of trying to regain her memories, she makes friends, she falls in love but theirs also tragedy and comedy of course.

If I would give myself an opinion I guess I'm pretty good at writing but I can never be sure of what other people think.

So I'm asking to give me your honest opinion, is my story line good or are there some errors of what I'm thinking of doing?
Also I made this temporary cover of somewhat thing-a-doo
It has my pen name there so yeah..

But credits to the artist of the rose!

So what's your opinion on the storyline and the cover?

don't freak about what people will like. writers should for themselves, not for anyone else. And if people give you crap saying it sucks, screw them! You shouldn't care about what other people think and just upload it. Im sure youll get some pretty positive feedback ;) there isn't a book in history that every single person hated