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A Story Plot o3o (2)

1 Name: :) : 2014-03-29 23:03 ID:wlSn13f2 [Del]

So I have this story plot, but nobody seems to be interested in it! Is it that bad =3= (not like I showed it to lotta people or anything but)

Alright! :) Since I like lotta intense and fighting stuffs, the basic plot of the story is...

Ever since the gods created the world, they had a fight over how the world should be ruled. One side, as cliche as it could be, said justice and fairness are how the world should be ruled, while the other side said that evil and power are how the world shall be ruled in! In the end, they divided the world into two, and the gods ruled the part of the world with however ways they wanted to rule it.
They choose a bird as their symbol, the world of justice and fairness were represented by an eagle, while the other a raven. They also choose a human from the world, where they would be the "leader," responsible for protecting the world with their comrades and fight when needed, especially during the "war."
Every thousand years, the moon would turn red, signaling the begin of the "war." The two worlds would fight, then, and whichever world that wins would get to rule the other part of the world.

However, during the past "wars," it always ended up with ties.

Anyway, the story focuses on this generation's Eagle world leader. He knew about all this war stuffs and had been wanting the war to start to avenge his older brother's death. He also had this little brother who's also a main character. Yet, things turned out unexpected, and dark truths started to reveal itself as the war progressed on...Uh, I know my description's very vague, but hopefully you guys get the main idea ;)

Um um in fact I've already written the first and sec chapter of the story lol 8D But without editing so it's pretty bad :) But in there contains all the descriptions of the plot and the character background settings and stuffs ;w;

But is this story plot bad? Cuz many think it as way too complicated (which I admit) and boring ;3; It's killing my confidence and I'm wondering if I should continue writing. ;w;

2 Name: MidnightWinter!RiAzRyvbjw : 2014-03-30 07:52 ID:7tbcSdiT [Del]

a war where two opposing part chooses their champion/s to fight on their behalf thus choosing mortals/humans... it's a overused or cliche plot however that doesn't mean it's bad.. it's kind of hard to judge something you haven't read for yourself... the plot itself isn't complicated but since it's quite cliche, you need to 'complicate' the story in order to make it stand out...

you shouldn't worry too much about the editing, you shouldn't edit as you go, you just need to write and write.. when you're at the end.. that's where you need to edit.. :D