I'm searching for anyone willing to proofread or critique a novel in progress, in its first draft. 5 out of 12 chapters are written, while each of the rest still have a bit of a synopsis or outline or treatment or whatever written down.

Essentially, imagine young adult mixed with psychological thriller with a small amount of science fiction and fantasy.

Please, if anyone has any free time to do this, it would mean a lot to me. Please critique me and leave any advice or tips to your hearts' content, too.

Here is the link to the draft. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eI_2kDSnw9-7mgLB6m37IDPiFWWSVdzMQiWYMa5eb78/edit?usp=sharing