this is my story that i wrote in journalism class. i was borad teehee. anyway i want to know what you think about it crtique welcome and just a heads up i am a bad speller.(sweat)

BLEAK
the demon cowered with his thin blanket on the side of the road. not that he felt the cold, but more for apearences. you see this particular deman loved the taste of a kind soul, so he is sitting there waiting for the next pkind soul to help him. days went by and and no truly kind souls came by untill it was after christmas and new years, but still in the begining of january when a late snowing started that the demon was starting to think of a new location. after all there is alot better places than london.he was thinking these thoughts whena voice startled him out of his thoughts.
"hello i was walking home when the snow started and i am afraid that i feel to cold to move. is it okay if i share the blanket with you? After all we can share body heat.", asked the girl.
The demon just stared at her in surprise not from her comment but from the fact that she acttually snuck up on him. A demon! The girl took the silance and surprise as him thinking that her mad. Which wasn't very far from his thoughts,since he was giving reasons as to why he didnt sense her and her being mad was one of them. The firl put her hands on her hips and leaned down so they were facing face to face and said,"i'm not mad you know and i rather not freeze to death so let me sit with you."
The demon was once again surprised because she startled him out of his thoughts again! one time can be an accident, but twice?thats a whole other matter. he lift up his head and met her eyes. Her eyes were a blue-green mixture that had to come from mutation. He was studing them when he realized she was glaring at him.Still fasinated by her eyes when they changed in to something mischievous.
she similed wickedly and said,"Ignoring me, eh? We'll see about that!" Then she tore open his arms sat in his lap and put his arms around herself. Once again he was at lost for words. What was it about this girl?
"Wow, your really warm like a hamster."
The demon felt slightly offended to being refered to as a hamster.She must have sensed thst because gave a short laugh and said,"I mean that as a comnpliment, you know."
Then she gave him a wink and relaxed into his arms and fell asleep.
THE END?
thank you for reading!!!!!!! this takes place is 1879 in London,England. hahaha i started capitalizing halfway through. i am short on time so LOVES AND HUD FOREVER!!!!! TEEHEE