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Making a story (9)

1 Name: Musiclover : 2013-04-15 20:54 ID:hZt+8hI3 [Del]

Okay I want to make a story about a soldier and an angel but I don't know where to start and I need some ideas so can you please help me out and give me some ideas

2 Name: Lemons : 2013-04-15 22:42 ID:194mc5Mc [Del]

Hiya, I would like to help but
You would have to give me more of an idea of what you want the plot to be about.
Is the angel just a spirit following him around, or does the angel have a human body?

3 Name: Alice!l14UvTg4qQ : 2013-04-16 18:59 ID:lYyepJrx [Del]

I created a thread for this exact thing :) Why don't you post it on that thread just to avoid cluttering up the board? Also a more fleshed out idea of what you are trying to do would indeed be helpful.

4 Name: musiclover : 2013-04-25 19:28 ID:TZVooZoj [Del]

i don't care but the solider ends up falling in love with the angel on the battle field and the thing is that i cant make up a good war name for it and i can't make a problem for the solider other then the war so~ can you guys help me out i need your ideas please!!!!! TT-TT

5 Name: Hana : 2013-04-26 02:21 ID:5mNEPkEL [Del]

Why not start with a war? XD A war between heaven, earth and, if you want, the underworld. >:)

6 Name: Musiclover : 2013-04-27 04:43 ID:QaDyhiZa [Del]

Na to me that sound kinda stange and i dont want to Think about the other worlds we might go to so the setting should be here on earth and between 2 contenents or what ever

7 Name: Dstar89!0UZD1OR/j. : 2013-04-29 00:42 ID:+oURbCfP [Del]

A man who serves in the U.S Military lives happily with his wife. She soon goes to Russia for a business settlement in her franchise of work, and is to stay for several months. Soon, this man is called to report at the official base, where he is confirmed by the Commander that Russia has declared full dictatorship on their country, and war with the world. The man soon finds out a massacre was portrayed in the north of Russia, and among those killed, was his wife. Dealing with his own emotional war, this man is commanded to set out with 5 other highly trained soldiers to infiltrate the High Office where the Russian dictator resides and plans his terrors. After a battle one night with a unit on the side of a road, the man is visited by an Angel in his dreams. She tells him her name, and he begins to visit her in the dream realm everynight, and then eventually sees her in reality during battles. He realizes that he has fallen in love with this angel. Time goes on, and soon the unit with the man in command has made it into the High Office, and they eventually kill the dictator, and liberate Russia.

At the end, the man is somehow finally able to hug this angel, and when his tears drop on her shoulder, she bids farewell, and she will see him someday in the great kingdom. After she fades, he finds a locket on the floor that wasn't there before. The locket initials the full name to his recently deceased wife.

So basically, the whole time he was falling in love with this angel, he was falling in love with his wife. Though, he never knew it was his wife all along. At the end though, the locket suggests to the reader that the soldier knows the identity of the angel now.

8 Name: Musiclover : 2013-05-03 15:36 ID:gnSkAe4q [Del]

Dstar89 you full of ideas and I love the story you wrote.......I love it I am going to use Part of you story. For the rest of you guys I still think you are full of ideas.^_^

9 Name: NekoChan : 2013-05-08 23:19 ID:DVK7kOvx [Del]

He was stunned. Utterly so. How could a war between family disputes end up this....horrid? How come there was hundreds of people killed because of a simple threat. Now, here he was, in the graveyard, bawling over it all. It took months upon months to get over it. Even then he had only found one solution that he was completely content with...suicide. Now, the only thing was, before he threw himself off a cliff, a figure appeared, hovering above the ground with the help of magnificent pure-white wings. "Stop." A melodious voice echoed in the spacious area, the sound bouncing off the cliff and all it's crevices.

Well, hope thats a starter...though i am not good....and i was kinda trying more for a summery..