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The Horsemen

In this world there are four things that are absolute and no one can possibly hope to change. Death, War, Conquer, and Famine. Somewhere in the world every five seconds someone dies. Everyday someone starts a war whether it is between siblings or between countries there is always war. There will always be someone trying to conquer somebody else’s things it may be toys or it may be land. Everyday there is someone going hungry.
From what I know there are there are twenty horsemen that fit into these four categories of psychic ability. Well me I fit into the death category and death is what most people call me.
Long story short there are people in the world that have extraordinary powers. The government has classified them as “horsemen” as in the four horsemen of the apocalypse. These horsemen have been known to the streets of crime as the “crime killers” killing anyone who would bring harm to the world. But nobody really cares as long as it helps right, right? WRONG, we horsemen were born with no emotion whatsoever. That account for me also I couldn’t care less if you’re reading this one second and you’re getting killed the next.

If you want to get technical it should be Conquest and not Conquer but it's not a huge deal.

With that aside interesting concept, however the last sentence sort of screws it up. It's not that it's bad, it just in my opinion doesn't flow well with the rest of it. Maybe wording it differently would help or moving it to a another paragraph in which he specifically talks about himself. But these are just my opinions.