Me and my friends made a song please check it out and tell me what you think. It's our first song I'm really proud of it :D

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HROuxHTBtDo

This is a pretty good instrumental, but I can't comment much on the vocals since I don't like any vocal music that's in English. I think the biggest thing you and your friends might want to work on is maybe spicing up the song with some effects or samples to break up the pace.