>>1 Great message, Friend, but the delivery could use a little work. Maybe something like:
My brothers, and sisters, in arms, I know the battle you are facing may seem insurmountable, the walls too high to climb, the current too strong to fight, but don't let your will weaken, or your faith waver. For what you believe becomes what is; the battle is lost when you accept defeat. Stand strong, brave warriors, and charge the fields of battle without doubt. Though the smoke makes it hard to draw breath; though you stand knee deep in flak and filth, never lose sight of your goal, and never doubt your ability to attain it. Continue fighting the good fight, with heads held high, and hearts like lions.
