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what do you think of the poem i made (7)

1 Name: anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 19:59 ID:Tbz0IcYs [Del]

My life now is of pain
Smiles are no more
Words can't comprehend the
Lies that have been told
I don't know what to believe
My life was of smiles and happiness
Now i feel nothing but a lot of pain
But anime is my resolve
Anime is my happiness
My pain, my tears
I love anime with all my heart and soul
My life revolves around anime
Manga too
My life is of songs
Songs are another way
I can sing my feelings away
Their's a lock on my heart
I won't let anyone penetrate
I hide my heart
Keep it tucked away
In a cage with no key
So that no one can see it's broken
No one should know
How much pain i feel
It's nothing but my own fault
My life now of pain and sorrow
Suffering no not yet
But i prefer to be all alone
And yet it hurts
Though i say it don't
I just don't care
No not anymore
My heart and sou is broken
But when i watch anime pain becomes not
My life is my life
And i'll do what i feel is right
What's right for me is, mmm... well... ummm... travel
I want to travel all around the word
It's my life so i will travel.

this poem is called My Life.
thank your reading my poem.

2 Name: Lunam !8OAWN3A0Q6 : 2015-10-20 20:31 ID:VE403Vrc [Del]

Beautiful :D I can related to this a lot, I'm certain many more people can. For me, Fairy Tail was my first anime, and it taught me so much more than any adult ever did.

3 Name: anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 20:39 ID:Tbz0IcYs [Del]

i just love how anime will teach us more then the others around us.

4 Name: Atsuya : 2015-10-20 20:44 ID:gG+N268P [Del]

I found it vey beatiful and deep. Like i can see you talk to me when you write it. So i need to ask one thing to you: How do can i help you?. And one more thing none deserves to feel pain and to feel like shit. You're a beatiful person, you're important to this world. Just don't ever give up.

5 Name: anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 20:55 ID:Tbz0IcYs [Del]

i will never give up on this world. especially now. live is full of so many wonderful things, and i plan to travel all around the word no matter how long that will take.

6 Name: anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 20:55 ID:Tbz0IcYs [Del]

and i don't know how to ask for help.

7 Name: Aki Haruka : 2015-10-21 03:12 ID:BINl/TT+ [Del]

Marvelous, really beautiful. Really talented person you are :) English is not my primary language and i'm envy you who could wrote such a beautiful poem like this. I'm still learning English tho, i hope one day i could write poem myself :) right know i'm lack in english knowledge..