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I wrote a poem (6)

1 Name: Anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 13:27 ID:vdAMgr8P [Del]

The poem is called nightmare.
A thought, a dream, a wish
All in one
Then... There's a nightmare
A dead wish, a fallen star
A death, darkness now all around
Hope and light
Transform into
Despair and darkness
Peace now no more
All cuz of one nightmare.

2 Name: Atsuya : 2015-10-20 20:06 ID:gG+N268P [Del]

It's beatiful. I really like to read poems, i don't have the ability to write them, i just wrote one in my life and i just wrote it to put my feelings out, it was very strange to me, but i kinda liked the strange feeling. In my opinion it's a very beatiful power to express your feelings in words, maybe because to me is very hard. In the end, i just want to say to you that you poetry touched me. Thank you <3

3 Name: anime1game2 : 2015-10-20 20:21 ID:Tbz0IcYs [Del]

thank you, no ones ever said that before.

4 Name: Kōru : 2015-10-21 09:00 ID:7Hp3pTAJ [Del]

Wow that was really good I wish I could write I mean even write a single story i tried but I fail every time but that was great it touched me words are great to express words see you around I guess

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6 Name: Kōru : 2015-10-21 09:07 ID:7Hp3pTAJ [Del]

Hopefully it does