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Animation (4)

1 Name: SpiritualMiracleLyricalIndividual : 2015-06-10 03:18 ID:SQT3s7uR [Del]

Hi, this is an animation that I have made from my college, I'll be needing some feedback over the animation for my animation.
Either leave it here, or on youtube.
Thanks

[This IS a form of advertising, however is for the course in college]
Heres the link to the video;

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e7oOQotBCl0

2 Name: persona : 2015-06-10 08:27 ID:bB+3HANV [Del]

I think the transitions and audio could be better. and if you need sound effects : http://www.universal-soundbank.com/

3 Name: Hiroki : 2015-06-10 13:27 ID:Pyv5pfzV [Del]

Gyaaa ! Spooky !!!

The sound could be better (be closer to your microphone when you talk).

It lacks an true intro, conclusions, and the watcher is not guided trough the video.

But it could be a funny and original theme.

4 Name: SpiritualMiracleLyricalIndividual : 2015-06-11 03:35 ID:NBnlGYEg [Del]

Thanks for the replies and thank you for using your time to watch and criticize my animation ;D