can you guys do me a favor and read my Novel.? I know its not the best, But I would like to get some feedback on how to make it better. the link is::
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3101576/2/A-kiss-of-Strawberry
I'll like to hear what you guys think of it. And feel free to contribute some ideas. Lately I've been having a writers block.
Sorry fro such a short thread ^__^

This would go in literature. Probably in this thread:
http://dollars-bbs.org/literature/res/1340066032.html
/Sage

My apologies. Gomen.