everyday i wake up go to school, and i am reminded that we are dummer than rabits.

the girls and boys are all fools!

Girls fuss overweather or not their hair looks perfickt,or if there makeup is runing and need to run to the bathroom for the 6th time that period.

Boys brag about how good in bed there girlfriends are, and how goodshe's goingto be tonight.

what is the point!

evryday boys go to war to die, brainwashed into thinking that they are fighting for freedom and peace. the country is just spilling blood! what are they even fighting for?

Red, the blood spilt of unnesasairlly of men.

White, the bleached uniform another man has died in.

And Blue, the sky we look up to because we don't want to look at the horrer befor us.

if we were morelike rabits we would be much happier. if rabits put a price on the grass they eat they woul kill eachother so they didn't starve. they would buy fancy coates and shose,and the finest holes they could, just to pruve they are better than everyone els!

what good is all of this?
why can't we be as smart as the rabits?

BTW: i wrote this but the computer just craped out.

...Dumber

>>3 Still not a word...At least I dont think it is...

*dumber
*rabbits
*I
*over whether
*perfect
*their
*running
*everyday
*unnecessarily
*horror
*would
*coats
*shoes
*prove
*else

OP, repeat gradeschool English, please.

I was just wondering when someone will correct 'em all ... ;D

i cant spell... but thats not the piont of this. we need to fix this world,

You need a period after that.... :P

I was gonna put something after but I didn't....
Have any of you even read this shit?! We need to change the world, or we are all gonna die with nothing!

>>9 I've read it sweetheart, and I agree with you. Nowadays, people of the ethernet world like to correct others grammar in order to feel a sense of superiority. It's something you Will come across whether your point is valid and filled with heart or not. In the real world as well, in order to make a difference, grammar matters. Would you donate money to a shelter or a cause where everyone's either speaking ebonics or the signs and the rally papers are all filled with misspelled words and grammar mistakes? It's hard to take them seriously.
Don't fret, it's not just you. Just chalk this up as a learning experience and try again with the corrections one of your fellow dollars have kindly given to you.

Fair point