I have a very important english assessment to hand in. Even though it's a few weeks from now, my tutor wants one by the end of the week.
I have a random idea so please give me your opinions.

1 - tomboy (SERIOUSLY looks like a boy) > martial artists >raised my father- family full of boys > is invited to go ice skating with friends> sees a pretty girl who's very elegant >therefore wants to learn to ice skate > an older male skater assists her >father gets mad > father thinks about his deceased wifes words ' "She may be talented in martial arts but
don't push her too hard, after all she's only young.' >father lets her ice skate > male skater trains her and goes together to get her new skates > only to find out he ordered BLACK skates since he thought she was a boy. THE END.

please give me your thoughts.

...wouldn't this belong in Literature?

>>1
Is your assignment....a story? Or is this something that's happened, like...you dreamt it?

It's not really very clear what you want help with.

Damn, you raised your father. That's some shit right there.

>>4 this xD

The ending seems a bit... anticlimactic... ._.

You might want to work on your plot a bit and ending. I thought the first part was okay though so starting from invited to go ice skating with friends.
sees a really cute boy> turns out he's an ice skating instructor> does ice skating to see cute boy> father's oblivious to motives> handsome ice skating instructor mistakes for a boy> tomboy clears misunderstanding up> awkward moment> etc you can make up the rest but mine's just another idea and not a very good one. Also, even though I'm replying this should really be in literature.