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The first chapter of my first ever “book?” (4)

1 Name: Yokes : 2020-06-06 14:41 ID:fbG1QZAs [Del]

The Future Sucks (Maybe)
Sci-Fi/Futuristic/Action
https://dynamic.webnovel.com/book/17138018205603605?utm_source=writerShare&utm_campaign=4311871119

I would like some criticism but please don’t break my heart.

2 Name: Yokes : 2020-06-07 22:44 ID:ojzGYqkH [Del]

Whoever is Lexa_Dollars thank you for the power stone and thank you anyone who is reading my book though it’s a bit embarrassing you have my gratitude.

3 Name: Yokes : 2020-06-07 23:45 ID:gzr+BB9A [Del]

Second Chapter

https://www.webnovel.com/book/17138018205603605/46021904758275068?utm_campaign=4311871119

4 Name: Anonymous : 2020-06-12 11:30 ID:kbEd5J24 [Del]

I like it so far, I feel like he realised he's in the future now too fast though, and there weren't a lot of evidence to prove it for him, but that's alright.
And I like your wy of writing.