I wrought a short story a ´lil time a go and I was hoping to get some feed back

First day back from winter break all my friends sitting at a back table in the commons trying to hide as tho to see me befor I see them, fools. I simple walk over and sit down, I spook all of them easily “so how is our titan slayer doing?” asks the biggest weeaboo of of our group Niel “look our sociopath friend is back from ignoring us all.” says Nathaniel a.k.a. Dingbat 2. Dingbat 1 belongs to robert
After school I was walking down the street when a guy pulled up in a beat up, old, rusty F250 truck and told me to get in. I said no, then suddenly two guys jumped out of the piece-of-shit truck and threw me in the back.
At first, I thought I was going to die, but when I opened my eyes I saw a movie prop laser gun aimed at me. So, I laughed and laughed until a man walked out of the shadows with a real gun and smiled, saying
"Hello I'm your executioner." The man calmly flipped a switch and the prop started to light up and make.. How do I say it… metallic sounds.
"This is no toy young man," he said as he backed off into the shadows once again. At that moment, I thought these were my last moments alive.
When I woke, I felt super dizzy and nauseous. Then I noticed the prison style cell I was in. All of a sudden, I had spotted a girl staring at me through a window , when I felt my body but it wasn't mine. This one was wearing the same clothes as I was when I got kidnapped, so I started to think about what was going on. That’s when I remembered a morning when Dad was talking about how "project-G", or so he calls it, was stolen from the lab right before the kidnappings.

Four weeks after I got kidnapped, they moved me to another building. and answered all the questions I had like what happened? The answer was that they kidnap boys shoot them with that laser, which changes your gender and slowly, your memory. When done, you will not know you were a male instead thinking that you’ve always been a girl, and sell you on the black market.

I was kidnapped 2 months ago, and every one collected before me had been sold. I have to go home before it's too late. So, I attracted the guard who watches this isle, made him open my cell by acting like I was in pain, then knocked him out and ran away as fast as I could. Luckily I knew where I was, so I ran home.

When I got home, I knocked on the door. When my dad came to the door, I told him the most realistic story possible, and he believed it, so he let me in and told my mom the same story. After that, everything gets weirder than it has been.

1 day of me being home and my parents are getting me to school, and acting like I'm my “twin sister” that was homeschooled her whole life(a lame excuse, I know). Blah blah blah, I didn't really care what my made up story was. All I cared about was seeing my friends and becoming friends with them again.

For the firsts day back at school, it was easy. I just acted childish but normal, and no one ever suspected a thing. I'm already friends with half of my friends but niel l and I have yet to crack the shell, and Nathaniel I have to tell the “true story”, but other than that it's back to normal.

I've been home 5 weeks and to my surprise no one has tried to collect me and I've been able to find tell my friends the true true story and they want help me counter strike and save every one that was kidnapped like me so we Started to prepare for war.

5 more weeks of hard training and getting a stocker to stop stocking me and spying on the target. We are ready to strike. 10 people 8 swords 2 guns and 6 bows 1 truck and 8 bikes are ready and we are go. We ride up onto a hill let the rescue begin. “You're all my friends and care for you like friends but don't expect me to come out alive nor you to come out unchanged there will be a victory but they won't just hand the win over the us we are profit to them so don't give them the upper hand we might be outgunned and outmanned but they can't come out on top no matter what we must win for me for everybody else who was kidnapped and trapped inside so CHARGE”

We go charging down the hill bowmen riding hands free bows drawn ready to fire at a moment's notice as a couple of people are in the truck. It hits the doorway guns Blazing body's falling we are winning but we get caught and celled. slowly as I see my friends being taken all but one a girl on the team dressed as one of the kidnaped hiding in the cell behind my cell when they know directions around the place she overrides the all the cells and they open after that it's a kidnap brake when I go see the gun the male executioner is there and he has a sledgehammer “so young madam make your choice the machine or your life or a machine that took 15 years to plan and make 15 more years of my dad's life or my little life “ha ha ha ha you think I care about that thing? You're a great opponent young woman oh yeah I forgot to includes myself, I'm Stuart Cass, head of dagger and the black market and most wanted assassin, kidnaper and rapist in 16 countries 47 states and your executioner.”said the executioner or Stuart as I stood there I realized that he would never destroy the machine it was to important to him then time slowed so I closed my eyes and drew my bow and let go of the string I watch as time started up again and the now a lifeless body falling to the floor and I hear bones brake

Perspective's great! I would say it really would be an interesting novel. Just watch out for the spelling and grammar though.

I see a best-seller potential here mate.