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Peer review and suggestions wanted (2)

1 Name: Naga Sake !!LOWyrKpa : 2017-10-16 08:26 ID:wHxNMHpD [Del]

I am currently writing a book, a book about my life, and the lives of others. We're working on the story together. The idea is that everyone sees themselves as the main character of their own story but they're really one big connected story. I'd like to ask some of the dollars for help with suggestions and criticism of the story. There's two things though: I cannot change the events of reality, and it is being written in the third person. I mean things like better word choice, or rearranging paragraphs.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bptCrD3Wwf-PsQRuyDu4A_reHSD9QvPipaSJB8aQodg/edit?usp=sharing

XOXO, Naga

2 Name: Yo Maaan : 2017-10-17 23:54 ID:Ku8ryvHh [Del]

Are you gay?