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The Prophecy (17)

1 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-03 03:51 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

Destiny, the winds of chance called out for a signal
Light it brought the signal true, and opened the door of darkness.
The Darkness ebbed into the light, and brought it down in fragments.
From the shards the twilight formed and brought the world to balance.
The balance ceased as time arose, and ended the world with silence.

The silence broke, and light escaped ringing in the distance.
The darkness froze and engulfed the light, bringing life to twilight.
The twilight rose and spanned the stars, Destiny hath noticed 
Time stood still and broke the bounds...the prophecy began anew.
From the depths they rose to see, and bring the world to serenity.

The Harmony remained for days where it bravely was protected.
Till' finally it leaked the light, and death was resurrected.
He brought with him the seven sins, to rid the world of virtue.
Yet prophets from the ages past stood up to rid the evil.
The sins they fell, and virtue grew...the world placed back in order.

The order rose and lasted true for an era made of gold.
The era thrived and harmony rang yet eventually grew old.
It withered away and fell to ash, then darkness took the throne.
An empire rose the prophets fell, and virtue was corrupted.
The virtues of the prophets true, fell finally resurrected.

The final err of darkness was made for it took flight.
The shadows of the weeping knew they lost this fight
From whence it were a memory, the world flashed back to blue.
No longer was there sorrow, for now tranquility bloomed.
The prophets keep the destiny, the seers foretold this tale
Keep with you your twilight, for sanity always fails.

The light of Wisdom shone it's beam, unlocking which that needs no key.
The memories of the shattered world, heal the wounds of indemnity.
Prophetic figures lay their sleep, where the fragmented come to weep.
A blaze of azure sorrow, a dying wind so frail.
Wisdom is the key to light, the key which soon prevails.

Through dying light and burning wind their Destiny begins again...
In dimming fields and glowing skies...A Light is what this world provides
A Darkened sea of Holy might
A Shadow of soul's true Twilight
The Time shall come when all shall know
The Wisdom that this heart bestows

2 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-09-03 17:55 ID:68DB5xuT [Del]

Is this a poem? Put it in the Poetry Board please. Thank you. ^_^

3 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-09-03 23:52 ID:W5cMnSt4 [Del]

>>2 It's a prophecy, not a poem.

4 Name: A.I.d.a. !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-08 18:12 ID:+R7E8HGX [Del]

There is no poetry board. There is a poetry thread, and this does not belong there.

5 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-09-08 18:20 ID:68DB5xuT [Del]

>>4 yes it does belong in the poetry thread. But you know what sir, just do what you want to do because no one listens to me anyway.

I don't even see how a prophecy would have to do with literature. That's more of a spiritual thing, isn't it?

/sage

6 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-08 22:32 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

It's a written work, therefore making it literature. It is, by no means, a poem. It's a simple piece of literature, deserving of its own thread.
That's how a forum works, btw.

Perhaps more would listen to you if you actually knew what you were talking about. Or you could simply stop trying to make people do what you want. Simple solutions to simple problems.

7 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-08 22:34 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

I never even claimed it was really a prophecy of anything. That's simply the thread title. You people believe what you want to believe.

8 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-09-08 23:41 ID:68DB5xuT [Del]

>>6 It does not deserve it's own thread if it's a piece of literature. I mean that's so short and there's this thing called the short story thread I think. I mean seriously, tell me what is so deserving of this. You wrote it yourself right? I REALLY don't think it needs it's own thread. But again, no one gives a shit what I have to say, so it's a-ok. And if you did write it, I highly suggest maybe instead of titling it "The Prophecy" title it something like "A.I.d.A's Literature" because come on. This is just so ugh. It looks out of place. What even is it? Yeah, you said literature, but poetry is literature, books are literature, novellas are literature. I mean what is this. As I said, I think this needs to go to short story, but as you said I don't actually know what I'm talking about, right? I'm also the fascist of the literature board, because I want people to do what I want. I'd like to think I'm just going on a mild "Legalist" route here where I want everyone to follow the rules cuz I'm kind of a stickler for that. I mean it looks so disorderly when things are out of place or when rules aren't followed, but I mean I'm the fascist who doesn't know shit, so why have you got to listen to me, right? =)

9 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-09 01:10 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

>>8 As a matter of fact, I didn't write this myself.

10 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-09 01:11 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

Wow dude, way to rant and make yourself look like a douche. I'm not sure what kind of pent up rage or sexual frustration you have, but this is not the thread to take it out on.

11 Name: Neige !h45CN3bvL2 : 2015-09-09 01:42 ID:btpHrsNp [Del]

>>10 Trust me, she's not the one who looks like a douche here. You're being a condescending prick and you obviously haven't read the rules of this site.

You can't just post random shit with no explanation or context. Your intention in posting this is completely unclear, and so nobody knows how to respond to it. At some point, it's gonna get saged.

12 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-09-09 03:18 ID:W5cMnSt4 [Del]

Most retarded argument of 20 seconds time

13 Name: jill : 2015-09-09 11:14 ID:ZQDYJLeU [Del]

I don't understand why you guys keep bumping this or is it because there's not much thread in the literature board that people can just easily comment to. Anyway, this is obviously a poetry. You could have posted this into one of those threads. But what done is done so let's end this.

/sage

14 Name: A.I.d.a. !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-09 17:35 ID:+R7E8HGX [Del]

I'll bump my thread if I so please to do so.

You're all a bunch of goofs, really. You think your words are even worth reading to me? Nooop!

15 Name: A.I.d.a. !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-09 17:38 ID:+R7E8HGX [Del]

I feed off your strife.

16 Name: NZPIEFACE : 2015-09-09 23:10 ID:W5cMnSt4 [Del]

You do realize, that a prophecy isn't a poem? Sure, this one can be categorized as a sort of poem, but why are there so many prose threads? Can't we have some for poems? Also not all prophecies are poems.

17 Name: A.I.d.A !ao.AgYdRoo : 2015-09-10 00:33 ID:EOZBwV34 [Del]

Not all esoteric pieces of text are poems. Some pieces of text literally are random pieces of text. It's your faulty human mind that needs to categorize it, not my mistake in posting.