1 Name: Anonymous : 2015-02-01 23:19 ID:hFx3jQ34 [Del]
.-. sorry if this is a bother to anyone, but i would appreciate it if you could review the first chapter of my book?
it's call the boy who ruled the world and just as a bit of a warning for some, it's boy x boy so...
i was trying to go for a humorous route but i feel like maybe my main character is unlikeable and boring...
advice?
you can read it here on wattpad : http://www.wattpad.com/story/31966797-the-boy-who-ruled-the-world-boyxboy