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Flying is hard (Poem) (14)

1 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-04 00:14 ID:auc4kWOY [Del]

Walking down a clear path
I saw a bird in pain
It was alone
I crouched down beside it
and I sensed it felt disdain

Why can't you fly
Birds are known for that
It's how most of them get by
In my mind I could hear the bird say
Today I looked at the world
and asked why am I here
I laughed at that thought
You're a silly bird I said
It's better to be alive than dead
I heard the bird ask me "why"

That impossible question lingered with me
The bird asked if we were meant to be
Existing isn't living
Living is existing
That question couldn't be answered with complete totality
about if our lives should be a reality
Happiness drives me
What about those without
What's their need to be

A coin called life has two sides
the good and the bad
It's flipped more than once
so it's not dictated by the sad

I went back the bird
on my mind had been only one word
Hope
I fixed the bird up
its wing had been straightened
and feathers unruffled
As the bird began to fly
There was a sound
Very muffled
I thought I heard a word
That the bird said
"Maybe"


2 Name: Anonymous : 2015-01-04 00:54 ID:/PACHKkh [Del]

Why not put this on the poetry thread?

3 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-04 01:07 ID:auc4kWOY [Del]

Didn't know there was one sorry

4 Name: LostFox : 2015-01-04 02:47 ID:j7UqY856 (Image: 1363x703 png, 357 kb) [Del]

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5 Name: Anonymous : 2015-01-05 00:43 ID:2lRjgePM [Del]

It's okay OP, it's a good poem though and I think you should repost it there as it would get the attention it deserves.

6 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-05 20:31 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

This poem is beautiful :D Yes, repost it on the poetry thread and hey, could i post this on my blog? I need to share this with the world. If you want okay, it's fine if you don't.

7 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-05 21:11 ID:1nI/wAJ3 [Del]

Sure you can ≥﹏≤ and I will put it on the poetry thread (could I see your blog as well?)

8 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-05 21:17 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>7 lovelyfortune.blogspot.com umm so when i put the poem how would you like me to introduce you on there, M-Steiner??? or what???

9 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-05 21:19 ID:1nI/wAJ3 [Del]

That's kinda hard hmmm sure M-Steiner will be good

10 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-05 21:21 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

>>9 ok thanks, would you like me to inform you when I'm done posting it?

11 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-05 21:22 ID:1nI/wAJ3 [Del]

Yes please ^ω^

12 Name: Lovely !YLCyt3kDBA : 2015-01-05 21:54 ID:beinQNKJ [Del]

http://lovelyfortune.blogspot.com/2015/01/flying-is-hard-by-m-steiner.html there you go, if you want me to fix anything on there just tell me ^_^

13 Name: M-Steiner : 2015-01-05 22:13 ID:1nI/wAJ3 [Del]

It's fine `(*∩_∩*)′ I'm glad you really like the poem

14 Name: Anonymous : 2015-01-06 04:32 ID:/PACHKkh [Del]

Guys, why are you bumping this?