Hey!

I'm writing my first story that I'm sticking to. I've written others but I've lost them or don't like them and chuck them out.

I would like your literal opinion on what you think.

It's called Darkness Equates to Light it only has 6 Chapters.

This is the Wattpad link : http://www.wattpad.com/story/14273281-darkness-equates-to-light

I also love to write poems so I have a Facebook page The Darkest of Ravens.
Here's the link : https://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Darkest-of-Ravens/206013096265471?fref=ts

It may annoy me but it would be great if you helped me with grammatical mistakes. Words are quite important to me I find they can help though many situations if you can get people to listen or read them.

I really hope you like it, thanks!