>>4 he/she's right you know :D
just keep on writing, in time you will get better. also, i did post one of my story, to be acurate fanfic before i had few views and no comments. i finally decided to abandon it and leave it alone. after a year or two, i revisited the site and decided to log in just to see if my account was still valid. i was shocked to see that i have thousands of readers and a few comment asking me to continue with the story.. in short, it takes time for your work to be discovered so unless you already built a reputation, you can't expect a huge number of reads in a week
also, try to finish the story but don't force it because good ideas sometimes take time. it's best if you edit you work only after you did something other than writing because it means your mind would be more relax and you can edit it better.
Keep reading, you can't write better if you don't read other stories and works because you'll limiting yourself