The human race is divided into two classes, magic and non-magic. Now, there's no certain conflict between the classes- on the surface, anyway. In the shadows, two political groups are fighting to gain control and name their class superior. The main protagonist is a 15 year old boy who's grown up his whole life not being able to use magic. He goes through life like any non-magic user who just happens to be at the wrong place at the wrong time. He finds himself sucked into the underworld of magic with his three friends-who all happen to have crushes on him to varying degrees, and happen to be magic users themselves- and he must end the war between classes if he wants to live any sort of peaceful life ever again, with discovering his innate abilities to control fire coming to light and his family history finally rearing it's ugly head to the world. It's a battle against politics, time, and himself as he tries to set things right again.

So, is it any good? Or is it lacking in a lot of places?

pretty cliche, but I like the setting and direction! Definately continue

Yeah, it is pretty cliche, but I hope to expand on it and give it some twists to balance it out.