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A proofreader/another opinion? (11)

1 Name: King : 2012-06-25 10:57 ID:xcEzZyd2 [Del]

I was wondering if anybody would like to proofread for me and perhaps give me some help in my writing.

I gladly accept girls. I need the opinion of the opposite sex. I won't accept people who can't stand non-standard plots as I'm trying to focus in black humor/satire/incest/ and probably more uncommon forms of stories.

if interested, please e-mail me at kingirafame@yahoo.com

To those who are into writing this sort of things. Let's talk. Maybe we can share ideas or something. You can contact me in my e-mail above.

My main concern for writing is my grammar. English is not my native tongue so I'm still a little edgy about it.

2 Name: King : 2012-06-25 10:57 ID:xcEzZyd2 [Del]

I'll be checking this weekend....

3 Name: anubis !uSezxvwowc : 2012-06-25 21:08 ID:76yYCqW5 [Del]

We did have a betareader thread (made by me actually) you can send it to me at anubis.muse@gmail.com. I'm happy to edit anything for anybody. I'm a grammar nazi, so I would be a good one to edit your grammar. :)

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5 Name: rolling girl : 2012-06-25 21:43 ID:AlPcXw7b [Del]

This seems...Interesting >w>. I would very much like to talk about this and maybe give and listen to ideas.
On the grammar part, I'm, I guess, okay with it- I mean, I'm not horrible. However, if you're writing on Microsoft Word, this shouldn't be a problem, so you should do so. It has a built in spell and grammar check, so that might help.
E-mail is dancagirlkanime@live.com (Don't make fun of it. I made it when I was 10 or something...)

6 Name: BarabiSama!!C8QPa1Mt : 2012-06-25 21:55 ID:PNg7XKdl [Del]

>>5
>grammar
>Microsoft Word

I'm sorry, but MSW doesn't help grammar at all. In fact, it sometimes screws it up even worse than you had it at first. Computers aren't alive, and they can't tell exactly what grammar you need for the situation of the text. MSW can help spelling at times, but grammar? Not really.

7 Name: anubis !uSezxvwowc : 2012-06-25 22:03 ID:76yYCqW5 [Del]

Oh, if you get a google account googledocs is useful for sharing files.

8 Name: rolling girl : 2012-06-25 22:37 ID:AlPcXw7b [Del]

>>6 Oh you, you almost always manage to make me feel like a retard . But, I'm learning how not to be so retarded.
Anyways, yeah, haven't used MSW in too long, so I couldn't really remember, I just assumed that since it was a computer it would know more than me. Because, I'm retarded like that.

9 Name: Leigha Moscove (Mobile) : 2012-06-26 18:40 ID:ai6Ujybu [Del]

I figure you already chose someone, but I'll do it. Faeriefate@gmail.com

I am only bad at punctuation. I cannot do complex grammar, but I can do the common stuff.

10 Name: King !iUoddVyToA : 2012-07-02 05:00 ID:xcEzZyd2 [Del]

Thanks for everybody's support. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to do what I was supposed to do (checking thing) because of school stuff (Started Software Development this June). Anyway, let's just see how much we can make of the offers.. my friends would be sending stuff to those who are kind enough to send and share their e-mails.

11 Name: King !iUoddVyToA : 2012-07-02 05:05 ID:xcEzZyd2 [Del]

I'd like to make another project proposal though. Since I started Software Development for college, I was wondering if anybody would be kind enough to a writer for my little group. We're planning on making visual novels. Ofcourse we need a good love story. I'd be glad to accept people with or without experience in visual novels/eroges/dating sims. And ofcourse we'll need an artist (I'm a programmer not an artist) XD