1 Name: rio : 2012-01-25 12:16 ID:pMyBD5CU [Del]
So just continue this story by comments. this is a story I want to call BUS ROUTE 12
please no robots, or creatures like in pokemon...or superheros
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Kyra walked through the door to school. It was her first day at Gentek academy. She trembled as she walked into the doorway. It didn't help that she was a freshman now. She didn't know anyone here after she had been at her old school in America. Now she was in Tokyo. Her mom had gotten a job as a doctor here. When she walked in the school she went to her blue locker and put away her backpack then got her books for history and left.
At the end of the day she got on the yellow school bus, route 12. Since she knew no one here she sat alone, by herself. She was just glad that the day was over. She was glad that she had no homework, the teachers had gone easier on her since it was her first day. She sat there with all of the busy people talking behind her. However one voice stuck out among the rest. It was deep and mysterious. It sounded like a beautiful lullaby and she almost felt drawn to it. She felt as if there was no other sound in the world and certainly not more beautiful than this. She felt as if she was in a trance, as if she was dreaming. She had to see his face, if she didn't, she would go crazy.
Kyra slowly turned around. She stared at him and when she saw him she almost gasped. He had this beautiful blonde hair and blue eyes his stare looked angry but you could tell he wasn't for some reason. He wore a leather jacket and his hands tightly clenching the seat as if she was intimidating him. Suddenly Kyra realized she wasn't breathing. She felt like if she looked away she could breathe. So Kyra quickly turned around in her seat. She gasped for breathe and when she breathed she did it heavily. She wanted to learn more about him. What was his name? Where did he come from? Was he human? But Kyra knew the last one, he wasn't human. -Here are the choices- she thought -werewolf, hypnotist, or the one that seemed the most true...vampire.
2 Name: That Guy from Prison, Remember? : 2012-01-25 12:54 ID:pjEtKNww [Del]
The vampire then cut her trhoat and wtached her bleed out. Then theat one guy from prison came and saved from dying by reversing time for a few seconds to stop the vampire. With his hand on his oppents forhead he shoved a fist, clad in a black steel gauntlet, into the vampire's mouth. "Go" In a calm, angred tone.
[I suggest not paying attension to this]
3 Name: rio : 2012-01-25 16:16 ID:Zhc8R1/r [Del]
f you prison dude
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just forget that paragraph
4 Name: rio : 2012-01-26 16:45 ID:vovdjl02 [Del]
what do you have against me anyway
5 Name: Anonymous : 2012-01-26 17:10 ID:dtSB01/7 [Del]
It's probably because the story is about vampires lol. Sorry but I think it's a little overdone or cilche'd. "It's been done before" kind of thing. soo...he's mocking you the plot i guess
