2 Name: Nani? : 2015-07-25 00:13 ID:uphHE6/T [Del]
Hey you asked for constructive critism so here's my advice? His torso is too narrow. Take a look a look through an antomy book as well which might help. It looks to much like he is pointing at his mouth with the left hand instead of hooking his finger in it. the collar bones also seem off but its a bit hard to tell with the scarf. hope that helps!