>>9 No prob. I would advise to study how shadows acts on body in different lighting enviroments to get more real like feel in the works and create easily dramatic works. I recommend to train all areas in anatomy, but specially hands, faces, legs and compare the portions to prev-end yaoi hand anatomy.
>>10 These are good works. If you are really serious about the art school you have to work more(=spend even more time at drawing new works) on your works to get them even better. All you need to do is draw, study, draw, study and repeat. I do this all the time and my works have improved greatly. Try always improve even there is no need.