3 Name: Mnemosyne : 2015-05-03 19:26 ID:Z/NY0mjJ [Del]
While I'm not sure whether or not you want criticism on this, I just can't help but say something on what you more than likely already know. The perspective on the sword in his right hand is really the only issue I see with it, since the curve to the blade and to the handle looks really unnatural. His right hand, also seems a bit wonky when you look at the knuckles. From the way the handle is positioned it seems like his hand shouldn't face forward as much. The sword in his mouth looks too flat for the way it starts.
Aside from that, it's a clean, clear picture, and the anatomy is good, along with the shading and line work. The detail on the handle of the sword in his mouth is impressive. Anyway, I'll stop critiquing before I go off on a whole huge spiel. Good work, hope you don't mind my words.
