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Any tips?? (6)

1 Name: Nya~~ : 2015-04-20 09:55 ID:ul6E9Osf (Image: 720x1074 jpg, 146 kb) [Del]

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HI GUYS!!..What can you say about my drawing..hehehe..I used Faber-Castell 24 pcs...BTW sorry for the bad quality since I only used my laptop's camera...Any tips, comments, and suggestions??

2 Name: Andrea : 2015-04-20 13:46 ID:VrF0LEqr [Del]

Wow this is really good I really like your art work it's really good

3 Name: Monochrome : 2015-04-20 16:26 ID:9DDv/S4j [Del]

I love your coloring and shading! I don't have much advice besides the anatomy being a bit off, but otherwise your art looks really really good♪♪

4 Name: Nya~~ : 2015-04-20 20:05 ID:ul6E9Osf [Del]

Oh. thank you Andrea...
@Monochrome: Yeah you're right, I should study anatomy and proportion..

5 Name: Kokkuri-san : 2015-04-22 00:40 ID:le8T6dnA [Del]

I gotta start using faber castells again....so good!

6 Name: Mnemosyne : 2015-05-03 19:39 ID:Z/NY0mjJ [Del]

Okay, even though someone already commented on the anatomy, I feel like having someone lay out the specifics can be helpful.

From the way her upper body is angled it appears as though her lower half shouldn't be exposed as much, and that her hips should be centered ever so slightly. The arms are a bit stick-like when compared to the proportions of her body, if that's your style then that's understandable, but I thought it needed pointing out. The skull on her head looks like it was plastered onto the page, rather than fitting the form of her head. The eyes look like they should be facing the other way, and the horns (whether they're supposed to look a bit disproportionate I don't know, I never watched Bleach) seem out of line too. Her left arm is a bit short too, like it immediately cuts from bicep to forearm by the immediate curve out, then slides out again.

... anyway, I think you get the point. I hope this helps, even slightly. Knowing what to look for is usually the first step towards avoiding the mistake next time you do something similar.